I'm sorry, Mary Alive Monroe, but were you trying to rewrite Jane Eyre? Because you didn't do a very good job. Honestly, the predictability of this book was ridiculous and 50 pages in I said, "Oh, she's trying to re-do Jane Eyre and is failing."
SPOILERS AHEAD
There is everything from the female protagonist coming to nanny for the male protagonist's 5 year old daughter, to them falling in love, to the lead male being married to a woman who's unavailable to him, to a fire caused by the wife, to blindness in the male protagonist, to a happily ever after with the male and female protagonists. Jane Eyre, no? What's missing, though, is plot intricacy and character development of Jane Eyre. There is no power struggle between young Jane and mature Mr. Rochester, who doesn't view her as his equal and feels no need to be honest or respectful with her. There is an indication of some head games, much like the ones Mr. Rochester played with Jane, in Skyward, but they're clumsily put together and make little sense. The female protagonist is a strong, independent woman who turns to a giggling schoolgirl from just the sight of her handsome employer. Really? REALLY? Do women really buy this kind of drivel?
SPOILERS OVER
I give Monroe credit for doing research on an actual bird sanctuary, (which is central to the plot of this book) and on the Gullah culture and language, although she DID end up changing (according to a note from the author) some of the intricacy of the language to make it easier for her readers to understand. I don't think Monroe gives her readers enough credit, although the simplistic way this is written suggests that she feels her readers are actually people who don't like or want to read.
What I cannot overlook, however, are blatant mistakes in the plot. For example, the thunderstorm the defies physics, in which thunder, somehow, happens BEFORE lightening. Or sudden changes to dialogue that are completely out of character for the person speaking. For example, the female protagonist, who is from Vermont, uses phrases like, "Ever so much better." I know Monroe really wanted this to be like Jane Eyre, but come on, keep the characters true to who you've set them up to be.
Overall, this gets 2 stars, and not 1, because I was able to get through the entire book in a reasonable amount of time and didn't throw it at anything. I would not recommend.