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280 pages, Kindle Edition
First published March 26, 2013
Emma’s love has saved Jake from falling into darkness. He’s no longer a vampire and is destined to fight alongside Emma. A mysterious guy keeps popping up and Emma thinks he’s harmless especially since he claims to known her old love, Gabriel, but Jake disagrees. SPOILERS OVER The writing at the beginning of this novel sadly decreased in value. I was off to a rocky start at the beginning of this sequel and I felt like it was going to go downhill. Surprisingly the writing became so much better. The storyline was very rocky and it felt like there was no solid place where it wanted to go, but it eventually went somewhere and that was a saving grace for this novel.
The good news is that the love triangle was squashed because Emma and Jake lurve each other so much. For once I’m glad that their love was sickeningly sweet enough to divert a nauseating love triangle. Sadly their relationship isn’t very solid and their love story feels like it is forced. This all consuming love feels uninspired and didn’t make me feel anything. That’s a slight lie- I felt something- my eyes rolling into my head. I mean a proposal? I seriously don’t see how that proved that loved each other because I didn’t feel the love.
The middle of this story is very strong and is my favorite thing about this novel. I couldn’t put it down and I was engrossed. The plot was great, the pacing was perfect, and the story flowed well. Sadly as a whole this story lacks solid plots (much like the first novel), but this novel is addictive enough that it didn’t fall flat.
This is my own personal qualm with the celibacy portrayed in this novel. I support celibacy; I think it’s great; I also support sex before marriage. I support whatever feels right for the person because it is different for all people. Literature has begun to paint celibacy as a horrible thing or something that isn’t cool anymore, but there are also instances where sexual promiscuity is painted as the worst sin in the world. (As a Christian I feel that I’m entitled to claim- sexual promiscuity isn’t the worst sin in the world that would be pride.) But Jake not respecting Emma for wanting to remain celibate is NOT okay. It was a horrible way to show discard between this couple and it infuriated me. Using virginity as a plot point to decide good or bad is also infuriating and not okay.
Emma, did you brush your teeth with Jake’s toothbrush? I mean I know you swap spit, but that’s just GROSS. Also stop slut shaming your friend! It’s not okay to judge her for wanting to have sex with multiple men. Emma, you are an idiot whose head is so far up her ass she can’t see a bad, creepy, unsettling dude who was RIGHT in her face.
Jake is too much of a jealous douchecanoe. He gave me a headache with all his HE-MAN “Emma is mine” thoughts. I like him less the more I mull on it.
The Villain- I really liked the villains in this one. Some of them weren’t strong villains, but it was a lot better than the weird parent villains from last time.
Ava still slays and she remains to be a great character. I also like Greg, Ava’s boyfriend, who is just a goof with good intentions. Gabriel always pops up at weird times and I’m not really a fan of his character, but whatever. He has a purpose.
This novel has its fair bit of flaws, but it’s a decent sequel. I highly recommend picking it up if you enjoyed or were intrigued by the previous novel.