I hate giving this 2 stars because I generally enjoy this author and enjoy the story connections. But this book really irritated me from the beginning. It is a work of fiction, I understand, but in the author's other books the dilemmas (and the romance) always seemed probably. In this book, so many things were improbable or just ridiculous. I will just list a few things. But with that being said, I have moved on to the next in the series and will continue to read everything Kendra Elliot writes because they are entertaining.
Forgive me for my spelling and grammar mistakes!
A few questions/things I had a problem with:
- First of all, You are just going to let some guy who "looks like" law enforcement accompany your highly trained rescue unit. No double checking before hand. They might have been in a hurry, but 20 minutes to do a license or ID check seems like nothing. Seriously, they were like, "Ok, if you say the Marshall's office called to put you on the team, i mean why else would you want to go out into the wilderness to find a plane"
-No satellite phone, puh-leaze! Coyote Peterson (the dude on Youtube that goes to the jungle and gets stung by insects) even has a satellite phone. This is apparently an elite group of experienced rescuers and they are sent out into the wilderness with nothing more than a few flip phones with T-Mobil as their carrier. Seriously. I have been in a bean field in Arkansas and had a signal. I mean, I get it, it is the wilderness surrounding Mt. Hood, service is spotty, but I cannot imagine that any rescue operation would operate with such little ability to communicate. Most satellite phones are associated with a medi-vac unit and can operate anywhere (apparently, I really don't know since I have never operated one, but in other books and movies they carry satellite phones that work in the Amazon).
-This brings me to my next point: their crappy cell phones. They didn't have any signal, but they sure had the best battery life ever because even on day 3 they were trying to call out on them and there seemed to be no battery problem.
-Okay more, traveling in snow had to "make" snowshoes.
-I saw very little spark or attraction between Brynn and Alex. I mean they really seem to hardly notice each other and then all of the sudden it was love at first sight. It just did nothing for me. Ok on to the next complaint.
-Ryan's mystery illness. Why make such a big deal of this and have no explanation. It probably would have been more probable that he was poisoned. I cannot remember was he the one who ate the walnuts at the beginning (why put that in). Brynn kept diagnosing him-"if he wasn't poisoned that he must have a stomach bug, no maybe the flu and an ulcer, no maybe a bacterial infection). I get it, Ryan's illness was a device in the story to bring more challenge to the situation, but unless it could be explained and had relevance to the plot of the story, besides just creating an obstacle, it shouldn't have been that big of a deal. I mean the poor man was puking blood and near death. Just make him ill with a fever and a back sinus infection. That is enough to slow them down, but not so much that we are drawing for straws to try to guess if this is part of the climax or just irreverent in the long run.
-Why give Brynn a troubled childhood background and a tragic past. I mean, the water phobia could be explained when they talked about the friend that drowned. But making her "related" to Jim through his wife because she was a foster child, seems like a lot. Hell, you could have just said they were old family friends, I hate making her more of a hero than just being a good nurse. I mean that makes her a hero enough on its own, you don't have to add to that arbitrarily. It just makes it more sensationalized. It didn't at all contribute to her character. I guess it could explain her daddy issues, but you didn't really need to. Why could she just be a great nurse, with a phobia and an attraction to more mature men.
-The Marshall and the killer being cousins and connected to the death of a family member in the past. Seriously, no one connected this. This is as unlikely and unbelievable as the ex-marshall just jumping in on an investigation.
-Broken airplane, sick coworkers, dead bodies, dirty, soggy clothing never equals a make out sesh!
Ok, I am done. Obviously this is just my opinion and I am not a writer. But despite this review I will continue to read the authors books!