This is probably the most difficult review I've written. Not because it goes against the stream of positive reviews I've read, but I truly respect the hell out of this author. I feel the need to explain why I'm giving it such a low rating.
The kindest way to put it would be to say that I did not agree with the ending and leave it at that. If you want to read this story in the future, I'm warning you that there are spoilers about the ending from here on.
I hope you enjoy it and disagree with my review.
If you read the rest, please know that I think Matt Shaw is the SHIT, most of the time. I am a huge fan of his work and read it whenever I get the opportunity.
However:
This was a 5 star story right up to the end of chapter 7. I was dumbstruck and (yes, I know it's silly, but I was really invested in it and loving every sick second of it) just a little bit pissed off when I got to the end.
How in the hell can you fuck up a great story by giving it this weak and lazy ending?!
Bare with me for a minute. In the eighties, there was a hugely popular television series called DALLAS -- ask mommy or your grandparents, they will know what I'm talking about. The villain was called J.R. Ewing and, somewhere along the way, he got shot (if I can remember correctly) and died. Soon after, the writers of the show discovered that they were losing huge amounts of viewers because of it - killing him off had been a mistake. How could they bring him back without turning the drama into a sci-fi comedy? Hhhhmmmmmm...
We-eeeelllll, we can always tell the audience that it was only somebody's dream. Nothing that happened was real, la-tee-da, and we'll just act like it had been our plan all along.
I was still a kid back then, too young to really grasp what was going on in the story, but I remember somebody making a statement the next day - for the life of me, I can't remember who it was - that it was an insult to the intelligence of the viewers. It was lazy and weak, because you either wanted to undo what you have done with the story, or you had no idea how to end it and wanted to get it over with.
I don't know what motivated Mr. Shaw to write this ending - was it time constraints, pressure from an editor or publisher, or did he want to give it a happy ending just to test the waters.
What I do know, and have to believe, is that I haven't read Matt Shaw to see how everybody lived happily ever after - if I wanted that Mills & Boons bullshit, I wouldn't have been interested in this kind of story in the first place. This ending feels completely wrong. I hated it, I'm sorry to say, but I'm still a fan of his other work.
If you're thinking that I'm just full of shit, you're welcome to your opinion, but Shaw is better than this story.