I struggled with writing this review, because this book left me more torn about this series than the first one. I think it hit what I expected in a good way, but also hit what I also expected in a bad way as well.
The series picks up with the best parts of the plot from The Change: the Bachelor Battles, the rebels fighting the Network, and the dynamic Pruett family and their arch-nemesis, Rankin. In fact, I think the Pruetts do the best here, growing from just killers with occasional feelings to full characters. Angelica excels as a main character and her chosen mate after the Bachelor Battles allows her an opportunity to excel at something other than violence.
The problem? Two parts: 1. The editing is awful. She needs a new editor, pronto. The writing can be absolutely atrocious in parts - she's very lucky her story propels people along so well. The change in POV is actually welcome to me as it gives missing pieces of the action, but the writing itself needs strengthening, especially double checking typos and tenses within sentences. 2. There's an obsession about showing sex scenes between the females and their (sometimes willing) male partners. The sex scenes aren't written well (I'd say, level of 50 Shades quality) and often I think the story could have been stronger had she just had the character close the door to the room and perhaps have an observer note sounds outside.
The reason I gave this three stars? Its because of the story of the rebellion, the Bachelor Battles, and the Network, and the meetings with the different untamed populations of the world. She has a touch there that makes it really interesting to interact in the world of these characters, and the Pruett family dynamic makes them extremely interesting and often surprising characters to read.
I am very interested in finding out what happens in the final book in the trilogy, but I might also suggest some kind of free prequel about the history of the change and how it came to infect all people and species. The reactions of the other species in this book make me think it has the potential to be reversible in many species or controllable within this world, but we don't have enough information about the backstory to figure out more about it, and in her discussions of the change in the book we get the bare minimum about how it actually affects the females - nothing about how it works or comes to be.