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The Book Of Twenty Four
Amber Noonan loves her husband Seth more than she could have ever imagined. Seth is everything that Amber (or any woman) would want or need in a husband: honest, strong, romantic, loyal, hard-working and madly in love with her.
When his thirtieth birthday arrives what can she give the man that has given her so much? She gives him "The Book Of Twenty Four" - a unique gift that will change their relationship and their lives forever.
Over the course of one weekend sexual boundaries will be explored, sexual limits will be broken, taboos will be crushed and their love will enter new, unknown territories.
Set in the beautiful and rugged landscapes of Cornwall come and stay with them for the weekend and share in the "Book Of Twenty Four".
**Contains scenes of sex including domination, voyeurism, public-sex, water-sports and much much more.**
An enticing, erotic novella of approx 33,000 words.
When his thirtieth birthday arrives what can she give the man that has given her so much? She gives him "The Book Of Twenty Four" - a unique gift that will change their relationship and their lives forever.
Over the course of one weekend sexual boundaries will be explored, sexual limits will be broken, taboos will be crushed and their love will enter new, unknown territories.
Set in the beautiful and rugged landscapes of Cornwall come and stay with them for the weekend and share in the "Book Of Twenty Four".
**Contains scenes of sex including domination, voyeurism, public-sex, water-sports and much much more.**
An enticing, erotic novella of approx 33,000 words.
90 pages, Kindle Edition
First published December 13, 2012
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About the author
Nathan L. Flamank
45 books40 followersNathan L Flamank was born in Cornwall, England.
He studied creative writing at both College and University.
When not writing Nathan is a voracious reader and enjoys many authors, including: Tim Willocks, Christopher Fowler, Edward Lee, Lee Child, David Morrell, Carl Hiaasan, Pratchett, Koontz and Stephen King as well as many, many more talented writers that have given years of pleasurable reading.
The author also enjoys horse riding, rock climbing, swimming and watching films and is an avid listener of music.
He studied creative writing at both College and University.
When not writing Nathan is a voracious reader and enjoys many authors, including: Tim Willocks, Christopher Fowler, Edward Lee, Lee Child, David Morrell, Carl Hiaasan, Pratchett, Koontz and Stephen King as well as many, many more talented writers that have given years of pleasurable reading.
The author also enjoys horse riding, rock climbing, swimming and watching films and is an avid listener of music.
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April 29, 2013
I was all excited when I read the description of this book about Seth and Amber. They have the best love story ever. They care so much for one another and the author shows that within his writing. Amber seems to be a little more daring than her husband and wants him to let loose with his sexual desires. All that changes in one weekend over a coupon!!! Awesome way to get thinks moving in a relationship.
There are some events that take place in the book that you need to have a wide open mind for. And with that the author can take you places you never thought you would go. Great story and I cannot wait to continue the love story with Amber and Seth. Who knows where their love and adventures will take them.
Great job Nathan and I’m so excited to continue on this journey with them.!!!
There are some events that take place in the book that you need to have a wide open mind for. And with that the author can take you places you never thought you would go. Great story and I cannot wait to continue the love story with Amber and Seth. Who knows where their love and adventures will take them.
Great job Nathan and I’m so excited to continue on this journey with them.!!!
March 11, 2014
Book of Twenty four
4 stars****
This is definitely a different type of erotica than we usualy read.
We did like the love story they are a couple that is very much in love. There isnt much of a conflict to solve just lots of sex.
We liked getting to know the couple and the potential of conflict with fertility and family but it didnt get too in depth with it.
Amber lovers her husband more than lifes its self hes, sexy honest and loves her to the little blue planet and back.
Its Seths birthday, what do you give your husband who has everything?
Amber decides to give him "The book of Twenty Four "and let him do with her as he pleases. Can this book bring out the wild side in this couples sex life.
I would have loved to see this as a novel with more details on the characters and their families.
Good read over all
4 stars****
This is definitely a different type of erotica than we usualy read.
We did like the love story they are a couple that is very much in love. There isnt much of a conflict to solve just lots of sex.
We liked getting to know the couple and the potential of conflict with fertility and family but it didnt get too in depth with it.
Amber lovers her husband more than lifes its self hes, sexy honest and loves her to the little blue planet and back.
Its Seths birthday, what do you give your husband who has everything?
Amber decides to give him "The book of Twenty Four "and let him do with her as he pleases. Can this book bring out the wild side in this couples sex life.
I would have loved to see this as a novel with more details on the characters and their families.
Good read over all
March 11, 2014
Book of Twenty four
4 stars****
This is definitely a different type of erotica than we usualy read.
We did like the love story they are a couple that is very much in love. There isnt much of a conflict to solve just lots of sex.
We liked getting to know the couple and the potential of conflict with fertility and family but it didnt get too in depth with it.
Amber lovers her husband more than lifes its self hes, sexy honest and loves her to the little blue planet and back.
Its Seths birthday, what do you give your husband who has everything?
Amber decides to give him "The book of Twenty Four "and let him do with her as he pleases. Can this book bring out the wild side in this couples sex life.
I would have loved to see this as a novel with more details on the characters and their families.
Good read over all
4 stars****
This is definitely a different type of erotica than we usualy read.
We did like the love story they are a couple that is very much in love. There isnt much of a conflict to solve just lots of sex.
We liked getting to know the couple and the potential of conflict with fertility and family but it didnt get too in depth with it.
Amber lovers her husband more than lifes its self hes, sexy honest and loves her to the little blue planet and back.
Its Seths birthday, what do you give your husband who has everything?
Amber decides to give him "The book of Twenty Four "and let him do with her as he pleases. Can this book bring out the wild side in this couples sex life.
I would have loved to see this as a novel with more details on the characters and their families.
Good read over all
March 6, 2014
This book took some adjusting too. One thing was reading a romance written from a guys point of view can be a little different not bad just different. It was intriguing to read the story from this view most of the romance authors are female, so you don't really see how one sided it can be till you read it from a male point of view. The other thing was there was some thing referred to in the book that was hard for me to wrap my head around , I am a pretty open person but that being said this book push my limits.
Nathan did a great job in writing the story. I will be reading more of Nathan's books.
Nathan did a great job in writing the story. I will be reading more of Nathan's books.
February 7, 2018
I enjoyed this book as lighthearted fun. Amber gives Seth a birthday present where she will do whatever he wants for the weekend. He certainly takes advantage and this story was full of erotic adventures. Amber and Seth are very much in love and I'm sure further books will elaborate on their story. I enjoyed it.
February 22, 2013
I really liked that Seth and Amber were married and they agree together to take their relationship to the next level if you will.
Did enjoy Seth's getting around the coupons using only 2. Smart man.
Did enjoy Seth's getting around the coupons using only 2. Smart man.
January 1, 2013
I fucking loved this book! One longgggggggggggg orgasmic experience. I will read it a million more times.Was my finale book of 2012....what a note to end on!!
October 14, 2017
This is the 2nd book I've read of Nathan's and I've enjoyed this one too
January 7, 2013
It is Seth’s thirtieth birthday and his wife Amber wants to give him an extra special present. But what do you give a man who has everything his heart desires, the man you love dearly and who has given you so much happiness? Amber’s solution is to give Seth a cheque-book containing 24 cheques. Each cheque represents one wish Amber will fulfil for Seth. What Amber hadn’t quite counted on is Seth’s clever but devious mind. He will only need to use two of his cheques to get everything he wants from her, indefinitely. The birthday weekend will be exhilarating, with both Amber and Seth discovering desires and pleasures they had never considered before.
Well, I guess the love affair couldn’t last indefinitely. Eventually I was bound to come across an erotic book that would fail to entice me.
I really liked the idea behind the story. The present of a cheque book with 24 checks, each representing a wish, is a good one and gives the author endless potential. I also liked the way in which Seth surprised his wife with his first wish. In fact, at that early point in the story my expectations were high.
But then it was as if the author went into overdrive. It was almost as if the author had been told that he would only be allowed to write one, short, book and he felt the need to put every single idea he had ever had into that one story. Everything you could possibly imagine was squashed into this one book. We have sex scene after sex scene but we also get an enormous amount of, at times unnecessary, background information.
We didn’t need to know about Amber being unable to conceive children or Seth’s troubled childhood in order to follow them on their weekend of sexual exploration. Nor was there any need to mention Amber’s unpleasant family. None of these issues or people play a role in or influence the story; they don’t add anything but rather distract from the events during the weekend.
I can only guess that the author had heard or read somewhere that readers like it when the characters in a story are fleshed out a bit and decided to do just that. And it might have worked if this had been a full length novel. With this being a rather short novella, everything in the book felt rushed. The reader is given details of Seth and Amber’s lives, their backgrounds, their families and their sexual relations. We were told a lot about what they did, where they came from and their emotions but I never felt any of it. In fact I found myself caring very little for the characters and the descriptions of their sexual adventures left me mostly cold. And that can’t possibly be right when you’re reading an erotic story.
As for those sexual adventures there is not a whole lot Amber and Seth don’t try over the course of one weekend. We read about public sex, voyeurism, water-sports, masturbation and domination to name but a few. But again, it is rushed. The term “slam, bang, thank you ma’am” springs to mind. And I can’t help wondering if the fact that this book was written by a man has anything to do with my issues with this book. Is it down to the male perspective that this book seemed to be more about intercourse than intimacy? Or am I just being horribly sexist here?
If I had been able to talk to this author before he decided to publish this book I would have told him to go back to his drawing-board, take all his, rather good, ideas and allow for another 200 pages or so to flesh them out. The reason I’m rating this book as many as three stars is that I liked the idea and can see what this story could potentially be. I’m just sorry that this book didn’t turn out to be what I hoped to find when I read the description on Amazon.
Well, I guess the love affair couldn’t last indefinitely. Eventually I was bound to come across an erotic book that would fail to entice me.
I really liked the idea behind the story. The present of a cheque book with 24 checks, each representing a wish, is a good one and gives the author endless potential. I also liked the way in which Seth surprised his wife with his first wish. In fact, at that early point in the story my expectations were high.
But then it was as if the author went into overdrive. It was almost as if the author had been told that he would only be allowed to write one, short, book and he felt the need to put every single idea he had ever had into that one story. Everything you could possibly imagine was squashed into this one book. We have sex scene after sex scene but we also get an enormous amount of, at times unnecessary, background information.
We didn’t need to know about Amber being unable to conceive children or Seth’s troubled childhood in order to follow them on their weekend of sexual exploration. Nor was there any need to mention Amber’s unpleasant family. None of these issues or people play a role in or influence the story; they don’t add anything but rather distract from the events during the weekend.
I can only guess that the author had heard or read somewhere that readers like it when the characters in a story are fleshed out a bit and decided to do just that. And it might have worked if this had been a full length novel. With this being a rather short novella, everything in the book felt rushed. The reader is given details of Seth and Amber’s lives, their backgrounds, their families and their sexual relations. We were told a lot about what they did, where they came from and their emotions but I never felt any of it. In fact I found myself caring very little for the characters and the descriptions of their sexual adventures left me mostly cold. And that can’t possibly be right when you’re reading an erotic story.
As for those sexual adventures there is not a whole lot Amber and Seth don’t try over the course of one weekend. We read about public sex, voyeurism, water-sports, masturbation and domination to name but a few. But again, it is rushed. The term “slam, bang, thank you ma’am” springs to mind. And I can’t help wondering if the fact that this book was written by a man has anything to do with my issues with this book. Is it down to the male perspective that this book seemed to be more about intercourse than intimacy? Or am I just being horribly sexist here?
If I had been able to talk to this author before he decided to publish this book I would have told him to go back to his drawing-board, take all his, rather good, ideas and allow for another 200 pages or so to flesh them out. The reason I’m rating this book as many as three stars is that I liked the idea and can see what this story could potentially be. I’m just sorry that this book didn’t turn out to be what I hoped to find when I read the description on Amazon.
May 22, 2013
I love erotica books, so was very eager to read the Seth and Amber tales. Its one of those books I couldn’t put down.
I really enjoyed the start of the book, finding out about the characters, their personalities shine through well. I love the cheque part, very sweet and cute of them to do it, what girl wouldn’t like this.
The urine part, I didn’t really enjoy, but I know it was wrote in as an “if you do it I’ll give money to charity” bit. SO I truly understand it.
I enjoy the steamy scenes, loved the characters. I personally can’t wait to read more Seth and Amber stories.
May 1, 2013
I feel bad, but I don't have anything positive to say about this book. I downloaded it for free because it had a 3.5 star review on Goodreads.com and Amazon.com. The editing was HORRIBLE. The story contained very little to no plot and the characters were not well developed or relatable. I found the author added too much detail for the most mundane things ... the "cooler," "the sun cream," etc. I'm all about romance and some steamy love scenes, but this was way out of my comfort zone. This was definitely not a book for me.
March 6, 2014
This is definitely has a different type of erotica I usualy read. I did like the love story they are a couple that is very much in love. There isnt much of a conflict to solve just lots of sex. I liked getting to know the couple and the potential of conflict with fertility and family but it didnt get too in depth with it. Its Seths birthday, what do you give your husband who has everything? Amber decides a coupon bok to let him do with her as he pleases. I would have loved to see this as a novel with more details on the characters and their families. Good read over all though.
April 17, 2015
Different
This book I about Seth and Amber. It's his birthday weekend and she gives him a wish coupon booklet. It has 24 coupons. He uses the first one to get her to promise to follow directions all weekend. Then it's sex anywhere all the time. I didn't mind most of it but when it came to drinking each other's pee I had to skip through. That idea turns me off. Not a book I could suggest others read.
This book I about Seth and Amber. It's his birthday weekend and she gives him a wish coupon booklet. It has 24 coupons. He uses the first one to get her to promise to follow directions all weekend. Then it's sex anywhere all the time. I didn't mind most of it but when it came to drinking each other's pee I had to skip through. That idea turns me off. Not a book I could suggest others read.
January 8, 2013
This was just ok. I got it because it was free. I don't think I'd ever re-read it or look for a sequel. I also had a hard time with some of the words not being familiar American words. Just not for me.
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February 3, 2014Refraining from rating as some of the kink was just not for me...
The pacing of the explicit scenes was rushed...more of a telling of the naughty things they did, but not at a pace languorous enough to be arousing (my opinion).
The pacing of the explicit scenes was rushed...more of a telling of the naughty things they did, but not at a pace languorous enough to be arousing (my opinion).
January 7, 2013
Found this on amazon for free and wasn't impressed; but I did stick through to the end.
January 22, 2013
The couple in the book ,Seth and Amber came across too perfect for my liking , the story was ok the sex was interesting !maybe better if everything in their life wasn't so perfect
April 26, 2013
It was just okay
January 4, 2014
Read this to see if it got any better & was very disappointed.
June 5, 2015
3.5 Stars
August 26, 2014
I tried this book because I found it offered free. Not my kind of sex in this story.
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