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342 pages, Kindle Edition
First published October 13, 2012
I think the authors could have a good series on their hand. The character backgrounds were unique, the story was not overly complex, and the romance was sweet and gentle.The not so good:
Authors, Jennifer Patterson and Amanda Salem, used very elaborative details throughout the story. People. Places. Things. At a certain point, I just wanted to skip over the details to get to the actual story. The italicized text at the beginning of each chapter seemed liked extended prose for the prologue, which was very long to begin with. The text did not do much to add to the contents of the actual details provided within the chapter. That text just felt superfluous to me.Although I did not particularly care for this story, I hope that my review would not deter others from wanting to read it. My likes on these types of stories are very precise and just because it wasn't my cuppa...it may happily be someone else's.
I also thought that the dialogue was too precise, rigid almost. I understand Evie's matter of speech because of her background but all the other characters spoke just too 'properly' for their stations in life. Most people use contractions in their every day speech. However, the loss (or reduced use) of contractions was very noticeable to me. Their loss made conversations seem drawn out.
Sadly, at about 65% into the story, I began to feel as if it were bogged down with more melodrama than intrigue. I actually found myself thinking that the story was a cross between As the World Turns and Misery. The intrigue portion of the story felt as if it was added to give the story bite but it just felt a bit too contrived...too easy. The story should have been an even balance of romance and intrigue but it was more about the romance and misunderstandings among the characters.