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Tournion #3
Battlemaster's War: A LitRPG Monster Girl Harem Adventure
Lured into a trap by the Emperor of Torm, Andric, and the team find themselves in a tough situation. Will they be able to escape? What has become of the Firetail tribe? What challenges will be faced when Andric delves deeper into the politics of Gods and nations?
New friends and enemies emerge on the path to discovering answers. New abilities and power synergies must be obtained to face mounting opposition. Relationships evolve as the world’s unique rules apply pressure to the new Battlemaster.
Drawn inexorably deeper into the games of Torm, Andric relies on his wits and companions to take on all challenges as he tries to carve out a safe refuge for the remnants of his wife’s people and possibly some unexpected guests. The choices that have been made can only have one outcome… War.
New friends and enemies emerge on the path to discovering answers. New abilities and power synergies must be obtained to face mounting opposition. Relationships evolve as the world’s unique rules apply pressure to the new Battlemaster.
Drawn inexorably deeper into the games of Torm, Andric relies on his wits and companions to take on all challenges as he tries to carve out a safe refuge for the remnants of his wife’s people and possibly some unexpected guests. The choices that have been made can only have one outcome… War.
467 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 2, 2023
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June 7, 2023
This has just become a mess.
The first book was good because it had well defined characters added in a controlled manner. The second and third book have fallen apart because they have just lumped in people by the handful. The new characters are practically interchangeable with how poorly they are defined. The emphasis has gone from the storyline to the adult moments. The cliffhanger starts off with the MC running for his life and his companions are just interested in sex. This is just ridiculous. The setting has gone from arena to RTS to city building, the whole thing is just a mess that has left behind the characters and the story. There is no longer a point to following the series.
The first book was good because it had well defined characters added in a controlled manner. The second and third book have fallen apart because they have just lumped in people by the handful. The new characters are practically interchangeable with how poorly they are defined. The emphasis has gone from the storyline to the adult moments. The cliffhanger starts off with the MC running for his life and his companions are just interested in sex. This is just ridiculous. The setting has gone from arena to RTS to city building, the whole thing is just a mess that has left behind the characters and the story. There is no longer a point to following the series.
January 23, 2025
Like the story but it's too thirsty
As the title says, I like the story. The world, the mechanics, the conflict, the expansion of influence; it's great.
My problem is the frequent and oftentimes poor placement of spicy scenes. It feels like a crutch when the author is stumped, which is unfortunate because I truly like the story. Perhaps not all the characters (succubus trope is overdone), but most characters, side and main, I feel are well done.
I'll be taking a break from the series, but if the spicy can drop from 4 pink hearts down to 2 (I hate skipping content), I will happily return.
As the title says, I like the story. The world, the mechanics, the conflict, the expansion of influence; it's great.
My problem is the frequent and oftentimes poor placement of spicy scenes. It feels like a crutch when the author is stumped, which is unfortunate because I truly like the story. Perhaps not all the characters (succubus trope is overdone), but most characters, side and main, I feel are well done.
I'll be taking a break from the series, but if the spicy can drop from 4 pink hearts down to 2 (I hate skipping content), I will happily return.
September 5, 2025
I had this book for two years. I just want it gone.
Using smut to prop up a story is boring. I remember book one nd two having stupid reasons for women yo sleep with the protag.
I don't even know why I picked up this book. I didn't like the smut when I read book one, and now that I am reading book three, the smut I grating. Having sex with women, turn them into your accessories, and they are so in love.
I won't be picking up the sequel. I shouldn't have even picked this one up.
I am glad I got rid of it from my to be read pile.
2/5 Stars
Using smut to prop up a story is boring. I remember book one nd two having stupid reasons for women yo sleep with the protag.
I don't even know why I picked up this book. I didn't like the smut when I read book one, and now that I am reading book three, the smut I grating. Having sex with women, turn them into your accessories, and they are so in love.
I won't be picking up the sequel. I shouldn't have even picked this one up.
I am glad I got rid of it from my to be read pile.
2/5 Stars
June 3, 2023
gets better and better
All our favorite characters are back and the adventure continues. More great writing, I couldn’t put it down until I made it to the end, thankfully I don’t have work in the morning lol. You can tell the author has really caught his stride. AND a great reveal at the end. no spoiler here!
All our favorite characters are back and the adventure continues. More great writing, I couldn’t put it down until I made it to the end, thankfully I don’t have work in the morning lol. You can tell the author has really caught his stride. AND a great reveal at the end. no spoiler here!
June 17, 2023
Entertaining and amusing to read
Love this series, but the delay between books had me a playing catch-up for the first little bit of the book.
Otherwise the rest of the book was amusing, fun and entertaining and quite enjoyable to read.
Definitely looking forward to seeing the next one!
Love this series, but the delay between books had me a playing catch-up for the first little bit of the book.
Otherwise the rest of the book was amusing, fun and entertaining and quite enjoyable to read.
Definitely looking forward to seeing the next one!
June 26, 2023
Whine whine Whine
The book was a whine fest, the MC a child an immature child who had no clue how to deal with women or how to be a leader. Seriously this MC I just kept hoping he'd die and that would be the end of the series. I've never, never read someone whine over and over again so much. I DO NOT RECOMMEND.
The book was a whine fest, the MC a child an immature child who had no clue how to deal with women or how to be a leader. Seriously this MC I just kept hoping he'd die and that would be the end of the series. I've never, never read someone whine over and over again so much. I DO NOT RECOMMEND.
June 12, 2023
Good book
There are some things I didn't like about this book one the girls not being professional when it's prudent even though it was explained I still found it to be annoying beside that good book and great series
There are some things I didn't like about this book one the girls not being professional when it's prudent even though it was explained I still found it to be annoying beside that good book and great series
June 13, 2023
Loved it
So far, I've really enjoyed the entire series. I can't wait for the next book to come out. The characters have been a lot of fun and there is plenty of nookie for even a mind as juvenile as mine.
So far, I've really enjoyed the entire series. I can't wait for the next book to come out. The characters have been a lot of fun and there is plenty of nookie for even a mind as juvenile as mine.
June 18, 2023
it just keeps going!
I have to say I love this series just the right amount of action, and story line to make this amazing and the character growth is amazing, I can’t wait for the next one!!
I have to say I love this series just the right amount of action, and story line to make this amazing and the character growth is amazing, I can’t wait for the next one!!
June 27, 2023
Good Save
Since the last book ended with the hero surrounded by the army and the big bad, I have been waiting for a resolution for a while. But I have to admit the solution was unexpected but still somehow believable. Overall a good story and will patiently wait for more
Since the last book ended with the hero surrounded by the army and the big bad, I have been waiting for a resolution for a while. But I have to admit the solution was unexpected but still somehow believable. Overall a good story and will patiently wait for more
July 3, 2023
I had hoped for improved story and pacing in book 3 but that didn't happen. Now that MC can pause the action at any time for sleep and orgies, there is no chance for momentum. Adding Gretch's constant nymphomania on top of this and we have a 500 page book in which very little progressed.
August 2, 2023
Love this series
Big fan of this series and this author so this book was a no brainer purchase. Jam packed full of action and adult content and easily one of the best books in the series so far. Can’t wait for the next one and to see what else he puts out.
Big fan of this series and this author so this book was a no brainer purchase. Jam packed full of action and adult content and easily one of the best books in the series so far. Can’t wait for the next one and to see what else he puts out.
November 8, 2023
Book 3
I just finished book 3. I loved the whole series! All his women were fighters in their own way. I love the books that have kick butt women with the man. They still have missions in the future, but are on the right path to achieve success! I hated for this series to end.
I just finished book 3. I loved the whole series! All his women were fighters in their own way. I love the books that have kick butt women with the man. They still have missions in the future, but are on the right path to achieve success! I hated for this series to end.
June 9, 2023
Solid continuation in the series, and raunchy as ever. Plenty of character development and new character reveal. Looking forward to the next one.
June 13, 2023
Great book 3
Great addition to the series. Advanced the plot well and gave more depth to the world and characters. Looking forward to more!
Great addition to the series. Advanced the plot well and gave more depth to the world and characters. Looking forward to more!
July 17, 2023
good
I enjoyed this book, it’s world building and characters are fun, the action is good and the plot was interesting.
I enjoyed this book, it’s world building and characters are fun, the action is good and the plot was interesting.
July 27, 2023
More please!
That was a very entertaining read that had me go to bed much too late, the action is epic, the banter is funny and the sexy parts are really hot, can’t wait for book 4
That was a very entertaining read that had me go to bed much too late, the action is epic, the banter is funny and the sexy parts are really hot, can’t wait for book 4
August 15, 2023
Great addition to the series
It been a great ride and I'm hoping there's going to be further additions to the series. Now I'm just going to see what else the author has done.
It been a great ride and I'm hoping there's going to be further additions to the series. Now I'm just going to see what else the author has done.
September 18, 2023
Still enjoying this series. This book ties up a lot of the plot points from the previous book that had been introduced and returns Andric to dungeon delving. Plus a wife joins his equipment.
February 24, 2025
Great series
I've had this series in my Kindle for a while and finally decided to read it. It is now in my favorite top 10. Can't wait for book 4
I've had this series in my Kindle for a while and finally decided to read it. It is now in my favorite top 10. Can't wait for book 4
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