The synopsis of this story was the reason I downloaded this freebie from Amazon. An older woman that a gorgeous and sexy and famous movie star falls in love with!!!!! Who wouldn't love to live out such a fantasy?????
I don’t have the authority to comment as a writer as I have never had anything published. However, I am a more than avid reader and after many years of devouring all kinds of books, I know with certainty that I am able to comment on what makes the difference between a good and not so good book. So my comments are totally from a reader’s POV and are based on what I liked and did not like about Take 2 by Linda Bolton, a first time author for me.
These are my thoughts – JUST IN CASE - THERE MAY BE SOME SPOILERS
PLOT
The premise of the story was interesting, having two people from totally different worlds and the obstacles faced by both before getting their HEA.
However, I felt that there was far “too much” information i.e.….so many scenes of movie sets, too many locations……it kept moving so fast that at times I had to remind myself where I was…LA or Kuwait!!!
Too many sub-plots. The kidnapping, the Haiti scene and the part with the magician in Las Vegas just made no sense to me perhaps because it kind of dragged on and on to the point that in the end became a bit too unrealistic and unbelievable.
CHARACTERS
I liked Alex and not only for the fact that she was a 40 something woman but for her naturalness, openness and how she viewed and experienced a new world that she had never imagine being in. She knows that her marriage is missing that “spark” and feels unsure, and after spending over 20 years placing the needs of her husband and grown-up daughter first, suddenly, due to unexpected circumstances, discovers a whole new world out there.
Gorgeous, sexy and famous movie star is tired of the whole fickle world that he’s part of, never finding a woman he wants to spend his life with. He’s one hell of a lovable character. Are there any movie stars out there so nice and normal like him?????? Liked seeing that despite his fame and fortune, he still has to deal with his insecurities like us mortals. He’s nothing like what I see on E!!!!!! Far too nice to live in LA LA land.
What I missed about these two – no real sexual tension, not enough written with the two together….they seemed more apart than with each other. I would have liked more on them than all the flying around in and out of movie sets, interviews, etc. Yes I am aware that this is an actor’s life, but still!!!!! When do they actually get to know each other I wondered? I wanted more EMOTION!!!
WRITING STYLE
Smooth which makes reading easy and enjoyable. There was more in “telling” than “showing” though, which is one of the reasons I am not giving it a higher rating.
Despite being labeled contemporary romance, I would have loved a bit of “spice” in the sex scenes. They were written in such a short space that before I blinked, their hot and sweaty bodies were falling asleep!!!!!!!!! I didn’t expect “smut” but more of sexy, sensual, sizzling moments between Alex & Derek.
In conclusion, I really liked this book and I am definitely going to read more of this author’s work in the future.
I recommend anyone who loves a story about the exciting movie world and where the heroine is not the usual young virgin and the hero who wants more than just being the first man to dominate and “deflower” an innocent and down and out maiden in distress, that you will definitely enjoy Take 2.
PS…Yes, Linda…..I had Gerard Butler in my head !!!!!!!