4 / 5 for 'The Talisman' by Jonathan Aycliffe
This is my 3rd Aycliffe novel, the previous 2 being 'Naomi's Room' and 'The Vanishment', both of which I found to be excellent and chilling ghost stories. I'm an atheist and I do not believe in ghosts, demons, heaven and hell, or god and satan, so for a ghost story to make me feel unsettled is proof of how well written and creepy the ghost story must be.
I really enjoyed 'The Talisman' too but in a slightly different way. This book is thrilling and engrossing throughout, but I couldn't say it was anywhere near as creepy or unsettling as the other 2 Aycliffe novels I've read...don't get me wrong, 'The Talisman' certainly has creepy and unsettling sequences and aspects to it, and there are some very well placed and well-written scares, but I didn't find it quite as impactful as 'Naomi's Room' or 'The Vanishment'.
If I had to describe it, I'd say it's an intriguing mishmash of Rosemary's Baby, The Exorcist and The Omen, but a well-written and successful mishmash to be fair. The mystery regarding the artefact itself and its unholy origins are investigated by Tom, a slightly stuffy English academic, with his blind wife playing sidekick. I must admit, all of the sections regarding ancient Babylonian history and mythology were truly fascinating, and the sections featuring Shabbatil himself were truly creepy.
The book itself is mostly told as a 1st person narrative from Tom's POV, with some epistolary sections featuring other characters' journals etc. Exposition is handled well, considering there is a lot of ancient backstory to pack in, and the characterisation and dialogue are both fine too. After all of the build-up and engrossing mystery of the previous 200 or so pages, the ending and the Epilogue both felt a little flat and inconsequential..there could have been so much more detail. As before, it felt like Aycliffe had simply grown tired of writing this book, so wrapped it up as quickly as he could, story completed or not...this abrupt and unfinished-feeling end to the book loses it a star.
On the whole, a genuinely creepy and unsettling horror novel, thrilling and truly engrossing throughout, written by a modern master of the ghost story, let down slightly by a somewhat flat ending.
4 / 5