I was extremely excited for this book to come out. Really. Unfortunately, the excerpt and back blurb of the book didn't quite do the twists and turns in the book justice.
Marguerite Lyndon, daughter of the stiffy Earl of Wycliffe, had grown up learning how to be a virtuous wife to a member of the nobility. She is the second oldest sister in a family with 5 daughters, but is the most responsible and sensible among them. She is also the family's black sheep in a way; her dark looks considered inferior to her sisters' blond locks and angelic beauty. When the dowager duchess of Temberlay arranges a marriage between her eldest sister, Rose, and the notorious "Devil" Duke of Temberlay, Nicholas Hartley, Marguerite unexpectedly steps into her sister's shoes as Rose eloped to avoid marrying Nicholas. Nicholas, having inherited the title at the death of his brother David, is angry. He is angry of his fate, or his brother's death, or having to return home and marry a bride he's never before met. Suffice it to say, Marguerite, having only married Nicholas out of a obligation to her family, started off on the wrong foot with the furious Nicholas, who disliked his future bride before even meeting her.
This series started off great. It was filled with tension, and we are allowed glimpses into the thoughts of Marguerite and Nicholas, and find sympathy with them both for having each carried a heavy burden. Marguerite had to step up and take care of her weak-willed mother and sisters after her father's untimely death, bearing both a financial as well as emotional burden as a voice of reason in her family. Nicholas was the unneeded second son, and according to his snake of a grandmother, he's also the one who ruined them all. This is no easy burden for either character to bore, so it becomes clear that the central conflict in this story is not precisely love, but rather trust.
Marguerite is a wonderful character, and I loved both her responsible side as well as her wild, hoydenish side. She is only 20, after all, and having grown up under heavy restrictions to suddenly transition to care-taker of the family was bound to instill a few rebellious streaks. Throughout the story, she constantly puts the needs of others above her own, and gradually cares and loves the angry stranger she married. Her fierce protectiveness of her family made her an outstanding character, yet with enough intelligence and good sense to shine like a jewel.
As for Nicholas, I was really liking him and wanting to comfort him until around the middle of the book, where he let a mistaken notion fill Marguerite's head, and does not resolve it until nearing the end. He had several chances to tell her, and he contemplated doing so, except that he did not. There is a huge congruence in his wanting his wife to believe his words and sincerity, and yet lead her to keep believing that he is an adulterous rake, does not agree with me. He said he didn't want to hurt his wife, and he was doing so anyways, knowingly! I don't know whether to account this to his pigheadedness, or just the crafting of his characters, but it dearly hurt the quality of the story. Even at the end, I wasn't able to forgive Nicholas for all the emotional hurt he gave Marguerite.
Then, there's the ending of the story. This was one of the weirdest twists I have ever read, and I just want to ask Mrs. Cornwall why she chose it. I won't give away any spoilers, but the ending is just out of place! I had to skim over the last part of the novel because it made absolutely no sense why Nicholas did what he did. And poor Marguerite, she was once again given no explanation from Nicholas, yet resolved to follow him anyways. I was willing to give this 4 stars just for Marguerite's character, but due to the hacked and utterly confusing ending, I'm giving it 3 stars.
It was a good story, and really would be made it on my keeper shelf if not for Nicholas's flaws and the ending.