This novel by a Latino novelist and reporter won the California Book Award for Fiction. It was named a best book of the year by the august New York Times Book Review, by the LA Times, the Boston Globe, and the San Francisco Chronicle, according to the book's back cover. It is a provocative look at the illegal immigrant experience in California, where, as in most of the U.S., there is a need for domestics and low-wage workers. It covers race, class, politics, poverty, and an ethnography of the city of Los Angeles. And it is a conniption-inducing failure.
I don't know what the basis of this book was. I have the uncomfortable and terrible desire to wish it was based on a true story--only that would explain the string of idiotic characters and contrivances that no actual human being would make. You are familiar with this type of story. If you saw Babel. If you've read the novels of Andre Dubus III or Tom Wolfe. Or if you know Hegelian tragedy. Whatever literary and classical influences, this is tired, well-worn ground. And whatever the tradition, it is still very, very stupid.
If you don't want to know anything about the plot, stop reading now. I don't like to know anything about the books I read before reading them, so that I can have a fresh, unbiased and uninfluenced mind, but, as I reached the central story, the great prose and the fresh--to this reader--immigrant's tale gave way to frustration and anger. Because the book had lots of potential. It started of in the realist mode and went quietly satirical, melding Don Delillo with Balzac; a panoramic view of an Orange County suburban family and their help that visited each character's mind while providing ironic but observant details of their family, home, and lives. It seemed to be about general malaise and how dreams were eroded into disillusionment. There was sharp criticism of middle to upper class white American families and how strange American customs looked to foreigners. There was finally a look at the life of the foreign maid and how she did everything in the house but was not seen, was taken for granted, and gradually and without a rise in emolument given more and more responsibility.
So everything was going along nicely, anchored by the very detailed, specific but beautifully written prose. And then the main story hit and everything collapsed. So that you can judge for yourselves, I break my own rule of telling plot spoilers. Here is the fatal-for-this-book story: the erstwhile wealthy couple have to get rid of their Mexican gardener and also their Mexican nanny. So everything falls on the Mexican maid. The wife is embarrassed by the poor state of the garden, and racks up the credit card overhauling it. This leads to a big fight btwn husband and wife, and both, the next day, without knowledge of the other, decide to abandon their kids to the maid, without telling her, in order go off to relieve some stress. This turns into four days. Each thinks the other has the kids and is at home, not realizing that the maid is alone with them and the food is running out. She tries calling but the cell phones are dead. Seeing a picture of the kids' grandfather, and an address on the back where he might live, she takes them into L.A to drop them off and end this chore of taking care of them. When she can't find him and gets lost with the kids in a city she's never been in before, she stays over a day and night at some nice strangers' homes, not once thinking that the parents might be a tad worried when they get home and their kids are missing, and, oh, yeah, she didn't write a note. (But it has already been established that she is an educated young woman and has an imaginative inner life as she is a budding artist.)
The parents, not knowing what's going on, call the police, and of course, in stories like these, it becomes a media virus and snowballs, and pretty soon the maid is arrested by an anti-immigrant DA and put on trial, with the predictable cleaving of a city and state, as she becomes a bellwether of immigrant rights or nationalist anti-immigrant rage.
And we get the usual fervor and slice of society. Look at the politicians, media and lawyers using her for their own ends. Look at the common people, the rabble that are heavily and easily influenced by media, conservative or liberal. This has all been done before. But it's done and the situation is propagated and exacerbated by stupid people who are in a slightly more serious and less droll version of a Three's-Company-misunderstanding-plot. Whatever observations about race and class and the immigrant experience in America Tobar has is undermined by the incredulous nature of the story. You skip right by what Tobar wants to be the meat of the book--those observations--because you're repeatedly thinking, "Why can't a person here act like an adult?" and "Of course the situation will get compounded by people who merely need to talk to each other and behave like rational human beings." In short, this story is totally contrived to elicit blood lust and anger when no such emotions would exist if the characters didn't behave sensibly. It's cheap. It's the Walking Dead's stupid plots and people transplanted to SoCal and about a real, important, timely, subject. Here is cross-ethnic alliance at the stupidity of the characters. Those who hate pampered, privileged, upper class whites who think everything can be solved with money will have their biases stroked, and those racists who think that Mexicans are dumb and irresponsible will nod their heads at the stupid maid and have their ideas confirmed.
This a well-written bad novel. Shame because the subject could have used some real examination, some examination rooted in the real word and not a well-worn plot device only found in the movies. I don't know how Tobar conceived of his story. Did he come up with character first or situation or theme? If the latter, that can lead to a bad book. The characters have to be the rock everything else stand on--prose, structure, plot, themes. If they are not or if the plot or theme is the first thing the author thinks of and writes the characters to fit them, then they can contradict themselves and make stupid decisions to get where the writer really wants to go. Nothing wrong with writing about a hot-button issue; that's what art is supposed to do. But the characters and the situation have to be believable enough to get there--get the story-- organically and credibly. Otherwise, the book falls apart.