This is a difficult volume to pin down. In truth, the opening poems read like balderdash: Meaningless strings of words and phrases that purposely lacked cohesion, with a few scattered rhymes thrown in the mix. But then I reached “Briggflatts,” Bunting’s most famous poem, and I began to understand and even inhabit the rhythm of his verse. Even better: I tracked down a video on YouTube of Bunting reading the opening lines, and suddenly it fell into place. There is something to the idea that this kind of poetry should be heard rather than read, and that the spoken sound and rhythm connote more meaning than the silently contemplated text.
The thing is, Vachel Lindsay made this observation years before Bunting, and I find his verse to be more musical in its sing-song intonations. And, as a result, I find both Lindsay’s recordings and his poetry exponentially more enjoyable than Bunting’s.
By the time I reached the Odes in the second half, I found myself not only understanding the text more, but appreciating and even enjoying Bunting’s verse. I wondered if I have been too harsh in my assessment of the earlier poems (which were not in chronological order)? When I re-read them, I was just as baffled and turned off. My conclusion: this collection should have started with the Odes, then “Briggflatts,” and finally “Villon” and the rest of the opening poems.
I think I may return to the collection years down the road to see how it grows on me.