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A Tale of Red Riding #1
Rise Of The Alpha Huntress
Action! Adventure! Magic! Motorcycles! In this action-packed twist on the beloved Grimm Fairytale, Red Riding will not merely face dangerous wolves; she must face the wolf within herself. Gifted with the power to transform into a werewolf, she will rise to become a legendary warrior known as the Alpha Huntress.
Accompanied by bad-boy Wolfgang Helheim, Red will lead a tribe of loyal followers armed with mystical powers of their own against a vile lunar deity, who plans to thrust Wayward Woods into eternal night.
Accompanied by bad-boy Wolfgang Helheim, Red will lead a tribe of loyal followers armed with mystical powers of their own against a vile lunar deity, who plans to thrust Wayward Woods into eternal night.
256 pages, Paperback
First published September 12, 2012
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Neo Edmund
62 books114 followersNEO EDMUND (Writers Guild of America-West) actor turned best-selling author, screenwriter, and comic book writer began his career as a Hollywood actor appearing on numerous television shows, most notably on 150 episodes of Mighty Morphin Power Rangers, Power Rangers Zeo and Turbo A Power Rangers Movie. Opting to pursue his passion for writing he transitioned into the creative side of the film and TV industry. He is currently authoring his 'Red Riding Alpha Huntress Series' and writing multiple Power Rangers novels for Penguin/Random House.
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April 13, 2013
Owoooooooo!
Who's that I see walkin' in these woods?
Why, it's Little Red Riding Hood.
Hey there Little Red Riding Hood,
You sure are looking good.
You're everything a big bad wolf could want.
Listen to me.
When I first settled down to read this book, Little Red Riding Hood by Sam the Sham and the Pharaohs, popped into my head.
When you read the title and blurb you get an image in your head of what you think the tale is going to be about, now take that idea and remove it from your head. Expect the unexpected. What I thought this was going to be and what I read where two different things, and well that's not a bad thing.
This could have went two ways, a flop because you have to be careful when working with something that is based on the fairytale or anything that's already in the public mind. Or it can be fantastic and different. It was the latter.
We have Red (aged 14 soon to be 15), an orphan who knows nothing about herself, where she came from, she doesn't even know what her last name is. One day she gets a letter from her Grandmother who she didn't know existed telling Red to come to her house in the Wayward Woods. On the way she runs into another, a boy "Wolf Boy" as she decides to call him, who helps her find her way to her grandmothers and warns her not to stray off the path. Red eventually meets up with her friends from childhood, rather toddler years, Ash and Dote (who is adorable by the way, I would hug her and pet her on the head if I could).
I do need to say this, there were a few things that bugged me slightly. The way Dote, Ash and Red act regarding the things they did together as toddlers seem to a bit of a stretch for me. The memories should get a little toned down, made more hazy because how many people can remember events from when they are three?
Over all I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Reuniting with family and friends, new friendships, potential love interests, adorable characters.
There were many funny moments, with some amusing dialog.
"Why, Wolfgang, what amazing stealth you have," Red said.
"The better to sneak up on you with, Little Red."
And we can't forget protecting the town of Wayward from the evil sorcerer Ragnarok!
This was an interesting twist on the story Little Red Riding Hood and I have to say when reading, and visualizing this little world, it was like an anime was playing in my head. I'm looking forward to spending time with these characters again, can't wait to read the next in the series. As well as checking out other projects Mr. Edmund is involved with.
**I would like to thank Neo Edmund for gifting me a copy of his novel in exchange for an honest review.**
Who's that I see walkin' in these woods?
Why, it's Little Red Riding Hood.
Hey there Little Red Riding Hood,
You sure are looking good.
You're everything a big bad wolf could want.
Listen to me.
When I first settled down to read this book, Little Red Riding Hood by Sam the Sham and the Pharaohs, popped into my head.
When you read the title and blurb you get an image in your head of what you think the tale is going to be about, now take that idea and remove it from your head. Expect the unexpected. What I thought this was going to be and what I read where two different things, and well that's not a bad thing.
This could have went two ways, a flop because you have to be careful when working with something that is based on the fairytale or anything that's already in the public mind. Or it can be fantastic and different. It was the latter.
We have Red (aged 14 soon to be 15), an orphan who knows nothing about herself, where she came from, she doesn't even know what her last name is. One day she gets a letter from her Grandmother who she didn't know existed telling Red to come to her house in the Wayward Woods. On the way she runs into another, a boy "Wolf Boy" as she decides to call him, who helps her find her way to her grandmothers and warns her not to stray off the path. Red eventually meets up with her friends from childhood, rather toddler years, Ash and Dote (who is adorable by the way, I would hug her and pet her on the head if I could).
I do need to say this, there were a few things that bugged me slightly. The way Dote, Ash and Red act regarding the things they did together as toddlers seem to a bit of a stretch for me. The memories should get a little toned down, made more hazy because how many people can remember events from when they are three?
Over all I thoroughly enjoyed this book. Reuniting with family and friends, new friendships, potential love interests, adorable characters.
There were many funny moments, with some amusing dialog.
"Why, Wolfgang, what amazing stealth you have," Red said.
"The better to sneak up on you with, Little Red."
And we can't forget protecting the town of Wayward from the evil sorcerer Ragnarok!
This was an interesting twist on the story Little Red Riding Hood and I have to say when reading, and visualizing this little world, it was like an anime was playing in my head. I'm looking forward to spending time with these characters again, can't wait to read the next in the series. As well as checking out other projects Mr. Edmund is involved with.
**I would like to thank Neo Edmund for gifting me a copy of his novel in exchange for an honest review.**
March 10, 2013
I received this book ARC threw the Lovers of Paranormal Group
Stars: 5+
Overall: What a kick-ass fairy tale remake. Red Riding was witty, resourceful and just straight up bad-ass. When the story first starts out i was a little confused about the mystery rider, but once we get to Granny's house all the fun starts to happen. After a few attempts on her life and a surprised birthday ball we get down to the nitty gritty of why Red must save Wayward for the evil power. I loved all the witty banter that happened between all the characters. I also really liked that Red wasn't the damsel in distress. She was the one all the males were running to, to have her help them. Score one for Neo Edmund you did an AMAZING job.
Characters: Little Red (Alpha Huntress) ; Wolf Boy ; Ash (my favorite) ; Dote & the BadGirl Ice Seether
Page Turner: Oh yeah! It's like a mini movie
Series Cont: It better! =D
Recommend: Yes!!
Stars: 5+
Overall: What a kick-ass fairy tale remake. Red Riding was witty, resourceful and just straight up bad-ass. When the story first starts out i was a little confused about the mystery rider, but once we get to Granny's house all the fun starts to happen. After a few attempts on her life and a surprised birthday ball we get down to the nitty gritty of why Red must save Wayward for the evil power. I loved all the witty banter that happened between all the characters. I also really liked that Red wasn't the damsel in distress. She was the one all the males were running to, to have her help them. Score one for Neo Edmund you did an AMAZING job.
Characters: Little Red (Alpha Huntress) ; Wolf Boy ; Ash (my favorite) ; Dote & the BadGirl Ice Seether
Page Turner: Oh yeah! It's like a mini movie
Series Cont: It better! =D
Recommend: Yes!!
February 22, 2017
When I first approached this book for a read for review program, I thought it seemed worth a read. While the synopsis was written with some clichés, it seemed like it could be interesting, and the cover was really cool. I detest writing negative reviews, but unfortunately, that's what I'm going to have to do for this book.
First off, the plot was somewhat interesting. The story was original enough, being a re-telling of the Grimm Fairytale, Little Red Riding Hood. It was the main thing that intrigued me in the first place- I generally enjoy a good fairy tale re-telling. This story does have the potential to be good, and I can see where the author was going with it. Unfortunately, that's basically the only thing I liked about the book.
The characters were one of my two main issues with this book. Mainly the lead character, Red Riding, who was completely undefined and confused. She was written to be a young teen, orphaned for over a decade and lost in the cold care of a city orphanage system, having to practically provide for herself. Despite her childhood, she spoke and carried herself with the attitude and tone of a spoiled, selfish brat. A 20-year old spoiled, selfish brat, at that. Her conversations with one of the other main characters in particular, were completely unrealistic. In general, nearly-starving orphans tend to be grateful for clothes, help, food, family, etc. Red looked to each of these things with a spoiled, arrogant eye, not fitting for the character she was supposed to be. This issue could be easily fixed, if her character was changed to be several years older, and not necessarily an orphanage-hopping kid.
My other main issue with this book, were all the random assumptions the reader is made to accept. Such as the fact that an orphanage-hopping 13-year old, with barely enough money to put food in her stomach or clothes on her back, somehow has her own motorcycle? Not only that she has a motorcycle, but one that someone apparently sold her years before, and she can ride it around in the city, alone? Uh hu. Too many things make me head scratch with that, and that's just one of many examples. From the very first page, this book had me thinking “Hu? That made no sense, did I read that right?” A lot of the details just down-right didn't make sense, if you were actually paying attention. There were several other issues I had with this book, such as the dialogue, but without revealing spoilers, I'll leave it at what I've explained already.
Overall, I'm disappointed by this book. It has the potential to be a pretty cool story, and an interesting fairy tale re-telling. The flaws in it, however, make it something I sadly didn't enjoy, and don't think I'd recommend to others.
*I was given a complimentary ecopy of this book, from the author, to read in exchange for an honest review.
March 19, 2013
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review via the Read to Review program of Lovers of Paranormal Group.
The idea of Red Riding being the wolf herself fascinated me since I've seen it on Once upon a Time, so I was very excited to read this book, also I really liked the idea behind the Alpha Huntress Story.
But I very soon got the feeling that Red, with her 15 years of age, was just too young for it, somehow that little girl was no great leader to me and it just seemed delusional when she stepped up to fulfill her destiny.
Also I had a hard time dealing with the writing style of the book and couldn't let myself be carried away, but that might easily just be my own quirk.
About the characters I have to say there where some I liked, but not one I really got a feeling for - they where so incoherent in what they did and said, that they slipped away every time I thought I figured it out.
Only Prince stood out in that matter, always being loyal and ready for battle and always speaking in the same way - but also a bit of a laugh.
Red appeared very dualistic to me and I have to say I don't like her one bit, somehow I just found her stupid and too extreme in her mood swings and the way she is so though in one scene and a little girl in the other.
The world-building was very intriguing, even though I would have liked to know more about it - which is probably to come in the next book.
The story was good, but there are some details that could use a little makeover.
The only things that in the end really bothered me where the characters - they could use a little depth and personal style, - and the end, which was just a little to improbable.
The idea of Red Riding being the wolf herself fascinated me since I've seen it on Once upon a Time, so I was very excited to read this book, also I really liked the idea behind the Alpha Huntress Story.
But I very soon got the feeling that Red, with her 15 years of age, was just too young for it, somehow that little girl was no great leader to me and it just seemed delusional when she stepped up to fulfill her destiny.
Also I had a hard time dealing with the writing style of the book and couldn't let myself be carried away, but that might easily just be my own quirk.
About the characters I have to say there where some I liked, but not one I really got a feeling for - they where so incoherent in what they did and said, that they slipped away every time I thought I figured it out.
Only Prince stood out in that matter, always being loyal and ready for battle and always speaking in the same way - but also a bit of a laugh.
Red appeared very dualistic to me and I have to say I don't like her one bit, somehow I just found her stupid and too extreme in her mood swings and the way she is so though in one scene and a little girl in the other.
The world-building was very intriguing, even though I would have liked to know more about it - which is probably to come in the next book.
The story was good, but there are some details that could use a little makeover.
The only things that in the end really bothered me where the characters - they could use a little depth and personal style, - and the end, which was just a little to improbable.
February 17, 2013
I really like the idea behind the plot, but the writing is so sophomoric and choppy I just can't finish. I made it through over 20 percent of the book, but half the time I am wondering what's going on (dream sequences are badly segued) and the other half of the time I struggle with childish dialog. So much potential, so little substance.
March 6, 2013
RedRiding is a fast pasted action pack book that makes you love the heroine!!
Imagine being a orphan then to be thrown into a magical world!
The characters were fabulous I loved them!!
Another male author who won my heart!!!
Bravo!!
I was given this book for an honest review by author
Imagine being a orphan then to be thrown into a magical world!
The characters were fabulous I loved them!!
Another male author who won my heart!!!
Bravo!!
I was given this book for an honest review by author
June 2, 2013
Wow!!!
This book is amazing. A fresh take on red Riding and werewolves. The story is compelling and the characters are easy to relate to. I can't wait to read the next book!!!
I won this book as a first reads on Goodreads.
This book is amazing. A fresh take on red Riding and werewolves. The story is compelling and the characters are easy to relate to. I can't wait to read the next book!!!
I won this book as a first reads on Goodreads.
March 7, 2013
*WARNING: There may be spoilers in this review, but big ones will be marked.*
Cover Love: 4/5
Favorite character: Dorkus "Ash" Ashley and Wolfgang Helheim :)
Okay, first I must express my love for the cover...c'mon, couldn't you just look at that all day?? :)
Anyway, I adoreDorkus Ash!! And how can I not love bad-boy heartthrob Wolfgang Helheim? Seriously, if there's a bad boy in a book...I'm there :)
Now, I was glad to find minimal grammatical errors (Which always has a place in my reviews) which I'm very glad to find. I think I found, like, 4 mistakes in the whole thing!! Which was excellent!!
I enjoyed the plot, but I've always been a bit "Meh" towards 'powerful stones and amulets' and what not, for me, objects aren't the ones with real power :) Another thing that I didn't particularly like, was Red's Grandmother.
But, really I enjoyed the book a lot, and although that language was different. it was a different different, not a bad different :) The names were unique and I LOVE unique names!!!! And, Neo, there had BETTER be a sequel for this amazing book!! :) I need more of Ash and Wolfgang. Please!??! Pretty please? :)
Now, I must add a couple quotes from the book: SPOILERS:
"I don't know which is weirder, that Ice keeps a stone of such great power on her bedroom nightstand or that you know it's there" Dote to Ash.
"That girl loved you with all her heart." Red to Wolfgang
Cover Love: 4/5
Favorite character: Dorkus "Ash" Ashley and Wolfgang Helheim :)
Okay, first I must express my love for the cover...c'mon, couldn't you just look at that all day?? :)
Anyway, I adore
Now, I was glad to find minimal grammatical errors (Which always has a place in my reviews) which I'm very glad to find. I think I found, like, 4 mistakes in the whole thing!! Which was excellent!!
I enjoyed the plot, but I've always been a bit "Meh" towards 'powerful stones and amulets' and what not, for me, objects aren't the ones with real power :) Another thing that I didn't particularly like, was Red's Grandmother.
But, really I enjoyed the book a lot, and although that language was different. it was a different different, not a bad different :) The names were unique and I LOVE unique names!!!! And, Neo, there had BETTER be a sequel for this amazing book!! :) I need more of Ash and Wolfgang. Please!??! Pretty please? :)
Now, I must add a couple quotes from the book: SPOILERS:
"I don't know which is weirder, that Ice keeps a stone of such great power on her bedroom nightstand or that you know it's there" Dote to Ash.
"That girl loved you with all her heart." Red to Wolfgang
March 24, 2013
A Tale of Red Riding is definitely a new welcomed twist to the beloved children's book.
Red is an orphan, who one day gets a note from her grandmother saying it's time to come home. Red is drawn by her grandmother's note and goes in search for her true hometown, Wayward. But once Red enters this mysterious place, her life forever changes. First off she meets a mysterious rider, who we soon learn is Wolfgang, a mysterious boy that can get on Reds nerves but pull at her heart too. Her life continues to unravel the longer Red is in Wayward, including finding out that she is the one to receive the Alpha Power. Red's life is in danger, but she fights to keep her place and continues on to claim her legacy.
I love the new concept that Neo brings to the Classic tale. I would have given five stars but I do have a few issues with the book. And do remember when reading these complaints, they are my own personal peeves so they might not even bother you.
1. I could not stand the repeated use of names in the dialogue, especially since their names are so unique.
Example:
"So you got anything yummy in your good basket, Little Red?"
"What are you going on about, Wolf Boy?"
The rider reached down and tried to open the basket tied to the back of Red's motorcycle, but she smacked his hand away.
"Never without my permission, Wolf Boy."
"Whatever you say, Little Red."
I think you get it. Again, my own peeve.
2. I can see that Edmund had his reasons for making Red the age she was, but I would have liked to seen her a little older. Again just my opinion, I still love Red and the story. Edmund did an awesome job.
3. I wasn't sold on Red's "memories." I understand that a flashback had to happen for Red to remember her hometown and her parents/friends BUT I just can't believe that a 3 year old would have remembered as much as she did. Little glimpses, maybe, whole scenes/conversations, not so much. I would have been sold on this more if Red had been 5 but hey they are in Wayward so who knows.
4. Last gripe, the word Wowzers kind of got on my nerves but not as much as the whole "we were best friends when we were 3 and even though I haven't seen you in umpteen years, we are BFFs" when Red meets Dote and Ash made me cringe just a bit.
Okay, by now you're probably thinking, jeez could she gripe anymore and with so many complaints, why did she give this story a 4? Simple, A Tale of Red Riding: Rise of The Werewolf Huntress is a good read, with a great concept, plot, and good characters to keep you interested and wanting more. Neo had created a great read and personally, I did enjoy it!
Red is an orphan, who one day gets a note from her grandmother saying it's time to come home. Red is drawn by her grandmother's note and goes in search for her true hometown, Wayward. But once Red enters this mysterious place, her life forever changes. First off she meets a mysterious rider, who we soon learn is Wolfgang, a mysterious boy that can get on Reds nerves but pull at her heart too. Her life continues to unravel the longer Red is in Wayward, including finding out that she is the one to receive the Alpha Power. Red's life is in danger, but she fights to keep her place and continues on to claim her legacy.
I love the new concept that Neo brings to the Classic tale. I would have given five stars but I do have a few issues with the book. And do remember when reading these complaints, they are my own personal peeves so they might not even bother you.
1. I could not stand the repeated use of names in the dialogue, especially since their names are so unique.
Example:
"So you got anything yummy in your good basket, Little Red?"
"What are you going on about, Wolf Boy?"
The rider reached down and tried to open the basket tied to the back of Red's motorcycle, but she smacked his hand away.
"Never without my permission, Wolf Boy."
"Whatever you say, Little Red."
I think you get it. Again, my own peeve.
2. I can see that Edmund had his reasons for making Red the age she was, but I would have liked to seen her a little older. Again just my opinion, I still love Red and the story. Edmund did an awesome job.
3. I wasn't sold on Red's "memories." I understand that a flashback had to happen for Red to remember her hometown and her parents/friends BUT I just can't believe that a 3 year old would have remembered as much as she did. Little glimpses, maybe, whole scenes/conversations, not so much. I would have been sold on this more if Red had been 5 but hey they are in Wayward so who knows.
4. Last gripe, the word Wowzers kind of got on my nerves but not as much as the whole "we were best friends when we were 3 and even though I haven't seen you in umpteen years, we are BFFs" when Red meets Dote and Ash made me cringe just a bit.
Okay, by now you're probably thinking, jeez could she gripe anymore and with so many complaints, why did she give this story a 4? Simple, A Tale of Red Riding: Rise of The Werewolf Huntress is a good read, with a great concept, plot, and good characters to keep you interested and wanting more. Neo had created a great read and personally, I did enjoy it!
December 20, 2014
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review.
To be perfectly honest with you, the best thing about this book is it's cover. I find it as one of the best book covers this year.
I wish the story was as much as good, but it wasn't.
From the very beginning I had that feeling like I was missing something (and it came back on and on trough the story). Story was developing too fast and yet too unclear at some parts.
As for the characters, I so didn't like the main protagonist. I find Red too childish and annoying.
And for Grenda, I'm not sure which granny would invite her granddaughter to live with her and then just disappear in the morning for whole day and not check her out through the nights... I don't know. Their granny-granddaughter relationship just didn't work for me.
I think the writer was trying to describe Dote even more silly then she really was.
Ash and Ice were characters I was fine with.
What I really hated in this story was those friend reunions Red had with her friends.
So let's discuss it a little bit. Red was 3 years old the last time she saw them and was gone for 12 years. Now when she's back they are all out of their minds because their best friend is back and they can be BFFs again just like in the old days. And they have strong memories about their life together 12 years ago. Really? I mean really? Do you remember your life when you were a three year old kid? And even if it was possible to remember, would you really have that strong feeling of friendship and loyalty for someone you were friends with when you were 3 years old and haven't seen in 12 years? I don't think so...
So here is my conclusion: this is not a great story, but I think it could be good for younger readers.
World building is solidly done.
It ends with happy ending and a cliffhanger.
I know Edmund is working on his second book in this series. I really hope he will develop his characters into more mature persons.
As for me, I'm don't have an urge to read the sequel.
To be perfectly honest with you, the best thing about this book is it's cover. I find it as one of the best book covers this year.
I wish the story was as much as good, but it wasn't.
From the very beginning I had that feeling like I was missing something (and it came back on and on trough the story). Story was developing too fast and yet too unclear at some parts.
As for the characters, I so didn't like the main protagonist. I find Red too childish and annoying.
And for Grenda, I'm not sure which granny would invite her granddaughter to live with her and then just disappear in the morning for whole day and not check her out through the nights... I don't know. Their granny-granddaughter relationship just didn't work for me.
I think the writer was trying to describe Dote even more silly then she really was.
Ash and Ice were characters I was fine with.
What I really hated in this story was those friend reunions Red had with her friends.
So let's discuss it a little bit. Red was 3 years old the last time she saw them and was gone for 12 years. Now when she's back they are all out of their minds because their best friend is back and they can be BFFs again just like in the old days. And they have strong memories about their life together 12 years ago. Really? I mean really? Do you remember your life when you were a three year old kid? And even if it was possible to remember, would you really have that strong feeling of friendship and loyalty for someone you were friends with when you were 3 years old and haven't seen in 12 years? I don't think so...
So here is my conclusion: this is not a great story, but I think it could be good for younger readers.
World building is solidly done.
It ends with happy ending and a cliffhanger.
I know Edmund is working on his second book in this series. I really hope he will develop his characters into more mature persons.
As for me, I'm don't have an urge to read the sequel.
March 26, 2013
A Tale of Red Riding: Rise of the Werewolf Huntress
(I received a free copy, in exchange for a review)
Begins another telling of the classic story, Little Red Riding Hood. But, in this version, all is not what it appears to be! Red, an orphaned girl has been on the chase, to find out her true life story. One day, she receives a letter, from someone claiming to be her Grandmother and invites her to her home, in Wayward. Riding her motorcycle, she goes toward Wayward, to only discover there are such things as magic, trolls, witches and such. This begins her journey, to becoming the protector of Wayward and to channeling her inner wolf.
"That is why you and none other must wield the Alpha Power." A beautiful woman emerged from the forest wearing a red cloak over a flowing green dress. Her braided red hair was adorned with ribbons and white wildflowers.
"I know you/" Red somehow recognized this woman to be the one that has come before her, the first Red Riding.
"You carry much fear in your heart, young Alpha Huntress. You must bury it down deep if you are to face the darkness that is upon us," the first Red Riding said.
I love reading classic fairy tales that have been turned to a different perspective and this story was definitely that! I enjoyed the juvenile banter between the characters, since it reflects their age so well. I'm really excited to see what happens in future books!
(I received a free copy, in exchange for a review)
Begins another telling of the classic story, Little Red Riding Hood. But, in this version, all is not what it appears to be! Red, an orphaned girl has been on the chase, to find out her true life story. One day, she receives a letter, from someone claiming to be her Grandmother and invites her to her home, in Wayward. Riding her motorcycle, she goes toward Wayward, to only discover there are such things as magic, trolls, witches and such. This begins her journey, to becoming the protector of Wayward and to channeling her inner wolf.
"That is why you and none other must wield the Alpha Power." A beautiful woman emerged from the forest wearing a red cloak over a flowing green dress. Her braided red hair was adorned with ribbons and white wildflowers.
"I know you/" Red somehow recognized this woman to be the one that has come before her, the first Red Riding.
"You carry much fear in your heart, young Alpha Huntress. You must bury it down deep if you are to face the darkness that is upon us," the first Red Riding said.
I love reading classic fairy tales that have been turned to a different perspective and this story was definitely that! I enjoyed the juvenile banter between the characters, since it reflects their age so well. I'm really excited to see what happens in future books!
October 6, 2017
I don't even know where to begin with how to review this book. I wouldn't have even read this book, or gotten past the first chapter if it wasn't for the fact that I was reading it as a buddy reading challenge for Crazy About Young Adult Books here on goodreads.
There was little to no character development, and I felt absolutely no connection to the characters at all. So many scenes and characters just popped up seemingly out of nowhere, and for no apparent reason other than to be just thrown in there for the heck of it. The scene was then over just as quickly and the story moved on to something else. The writing was juvenile, like it was written by a high school student. Actually I know lots of high school students who write way better. The dialogue was silly at times, and ridiculously trite at others. And all that stuff about the stones, the gate, and Ragnarok? Huh??? I haven't a clue what all that was about. It didn't make a darn bit of sense. I wanted to give the book only one star, but I'm going to be generous and give it two since I did get more than a few chuckles from some of the things that Red's two childhood friends Dote and Ash said and did. They were both annoying at heck, but also pretty funny most of the time.
There was little to no character development, and I felt absolutely no connection to the characters at all. So many scenes and characters just popped up seemingly out of nowhere, and for no apparent reason other than to be just thrown in there for the heck of it. The scene was then over just as quickly and the story moved on to something else. The writing was juvenile, like it was written by a high school student. Actually I know lots of high school students who write way better. The dialogue was silly at times, and ridiculously trite at others. And all that stuff about the stones, the gate, and Ragnarok? Huh??? I haven't a clue what all that was about. It didn't make a darn bit of sense. I wanted to give the book only one star, but I'm going to be generous and give it two since I did get more than a few chuckles from some of the things that Red's two childhood friends Dote and Ash said and did. They were both annoying at heck, but also pretty funny most of the time.
March 18, 2013
A flipping AWESOME tale!
I love re-telling of old stories and I love it even more when an author (say Neo Edmund) takes that story and makes it MIND BLOWING!
Red starts out as an orphan only to become one kick butt, don't lie to me type of girl...SWEET!
She's not protecting granny from being eaten...she's protecting the whole land from an evil tyrant determined to escape prison with Red's help. You would think it would be easy...LOL
With all the twists and turns through out this tale, it starts to make you guess who's good and who's bad right down to the very end..Thank Heavens Red has her friends by her side, even if at first she has no clue who the heck they are.
I am in love with the way the story just keeps you guessing, you think one way and BAM...you're wondering "What the heck just happen?"
Neo does a spot on job kicking this story out of the park! I will never look at Red Riding ever the same again!
I totally look forward to her next adventure!!!
I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review
I love re-telling of old stories and I love it even more when an author (say Neo Edmund) takes that story and makes it MIND BLOWING!
Red starts out as an orphan only to become one kick butt, don't lie to me type of girl...SWEET!
She's not protecting granny from being eaten...she's protecting the whole land from an evil tyrant determined to escape prison with Red's help. You would think it would be easy...LOL
With all the twists and turns through out this tale, it starts to make you guess who's good and who's bad right down to the very end..Thank Heavens Red has her friends by her side, even if at first she has no clue who the heck they are.
I am in love with the way the story just keeps you guessing, you think one way and BAM...you're wondering "What the heck just happen?"
Neo does a spot on job kicking this story out of the park! I will never look at Red Riding ever the same again!
I totally look forward to her next adventure!!!
I received this book from the author in exchange for an honest review
August 16, 2013
First off I would like to thank the author Neo Edmund for allowing me to read his book. I was given this bok for an honest review.
Wow what a great twist on the classic story of Red Ridding Hood! I was intrigued as soon as I saw the cover and was not disappointed. The author keep the book flowing at a fast pace. I was able to read the book in just under 2 days. The plot had tons of twist and turns. Just when you thought you knew what was going to happen somthing different would. I had no problem imagining the characters. ( I even saw Dote wearing susspenders and a pocet protector *giggle*). I understand the whole just got with it or be defeted by it attitude that Red had! The only thing that bothered me in this book one word "wowzers" (very Scooby Doo) It became slightly annoying but hey everyone has a word they use.
I love a good twist on fairy tales and I hope the next book in the series is just as well written and full of twist as this one is.
Wow what a great twist on the classic story of Red Ridding Hood! I was intrigued as soon as I saw the cover and was not disappointed. The author keep the book flowing at a fast pace. I was able to read the book in just under 2 days. The plot had tons of twist and turns. Just when you thought you knew what was going to happen somthing different would. I had no problem imagining the characters. ( I even saw Dote wearing susspenders and a pocet protector *giggle*). I understand the whole just got with it or be defeted by it attitude that Red had! The only thing that bothered me in this book one word "wowzers" (very Scooby Doo) It became slightly annoying but hey everyone has a word they use.
I love a good twist on fairy tales and I hope the next book in the series is just as well written and full of twist as this one is.
September 22, 2013
This has been on my to-read list for awhile now, and sadly, I wasn't impressed with it. I felt like the characters were too immature. In moments like when they were camping in the woods after escaping Ice's palace and staking out Granny's house to see if it was safe. Both of those times, Wolfgang snuck up behind them and told them how loud they were being. Shouldn't they have been taking those situations more seriously? Yes, I think they were all like 14, but they are battling for their lives. Wouldn't that mature them a little bit? Red's "sarcasm" annoyed me also. You can only tell us how sarcastic and witty she is so many times and most of her sarcasm seemed unnecessary anyway. I'm sure there are lots of people who do like this book, but it just didn't live up to what I expected.
March 15, 2013
I really enjoyed this book, as I was intrigued from the first time I saw it and knew I had to read it. I really liked the characters especially Red, she was a good strong character who has to face up to the fact that she has to try to save Wayward when she didn't even know it existed until a short time a go. She is not the lonely little orphan girl she once thought and has family and friends to help along the way. What a different take this was on the whole fairy tale thing I wasn't expecting Red to turn out the way she did.
January 6, 2013
Five stars all around. I was pleasantly surprised how much I loved this book. Sometimes authors who try to take on a well known fairy tale just don't get it right but Neo Edmund sure did. While the story had loads of twists and turns and was full of suspense and excitement, it is also clean. No curse words, no sex scenes, which makes it a prefect read for my 12 and 14 year old step daughters also. I look forward to the continuation of this story in the next book.
February 3, 2013
This was a fun and refreshing take on the classic fairy tale. I loved that Red Riding was not the traditional Damsel to be rescued, with her Grandmother a frail old woman. Instead both are strong and capable characters, often doing the rescuing and heavy thinking themselves. The ending left me wondering, will there be any more?
February 10, 2013
This book is a definite must read! The characters jump right out and grab a hold of you and you just want to keep learning more and more about them and Wayward Woods. Very fast paced...I didn't want to put the book down. Can't wait to read Mr. Edmund's next book!!
January 13, 2013
I loved the twist to this classic story line. Neo Edmund never fails to deliver! Can't wait until his next project.
March 15, 2013
I love this book. I love the chacters. I'm giving this book5 stars
August 29, 2013
3.5 stars
*this book was given to me by the author for an honest review*
it's refreshing to read about a girl who is not mopey, glum, woah is me, etc. She's her own little superpower who tries to take on forces that are trying to attack. . . her grandmothers neighborhood LOL! We all saw that coming of course. I was never bored, and the story went from one "action" scene to another so it moved pretty quickly.
In this (which i think is the first in a series) we meet her cast of friends who i have to admit, get annoying at times. Their spunk and confidence seemed unrealistic but I then remember what the ages are of Red (15) and her sidekicks and realize that's what teenagers act like. They're Very confident and self assured LOL! When you realize that her newly reunited friends are willing to help her (at the risk of their lives) you forgive their dips into silliness.
The writing can be sometimes hard to follow if you're not used to that type of writing. It's a mix of world building and there's sometimes too many details you have to remember to make the story flow. I think the author was trying to go for a 'storytelling' type of narration which can be difficult, but grammatically pretty spot on.
this is a cute twist to a classic, i read it in one afternoon.
ETA: I know now what this reminded me of, the Wizard of OZ! not a bad thing but I was wracking my brain trying to figure out what kind of story was similar . . .
*this book was given to me by the author for an honest review*
it's refreshing to read about a girl who is not mopey, glum, woah is me, etc. She's her own little superpower who tries to take on forces that are trying to attack. . . her grandmothers neighborhood LOL! We all saw that coming of course. I was never bored, and the story went from one "action" scene to another so it moved pretty quickly.
In this (which i think is the first in a series) we meet her cast of friends who i have to admit, get annoying at times. Their spunk and confidence seemed unrealistic but I then remember what the ages are of Red (15) and her sidekicks and realize that's what teenagers act like. They're Very confident and self assured LOL! When you realize that her newly reunited friends are willing to help her (at the risk of their lives) you forgive their dips into silliness.
The writing can be sometimes hard to follow if you're not used to that type of writing. It's a mix of world building and there's sometimes too many details you have to remember to make the story flow. I think the author was trying to go for a 'storytelling' type of narration which can be difficult, but grammatically pretty spot on.
this is a cute twist to a classic, i read it in one afternoon.
ETA: I know now what this reminded me of, the Wizard of OZ! not a bad thing but I was wracking my brain trying to figure out what kind of story was similar . . .
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
January 9, 2013
As a fan of everything that is fairy tale and fantasy-fiction, I was pleasantly pleased with Neo Edmund’s imaginative tale Red Riding: Rise of the Alpha Huntress. I found this story to be a refreshing take on the beloved Grimm’s favorite, with the subtle flavors of Harry Potter, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, and Twilight. I loved how Red Riding is not the damsel in distressed that is to be rescued by the woodman, but rather the heroine of the story whose destiny is to stop the evil moon spirit, Ragnarok, from destroying the world. Yet, Red is not the only strong female character in this story. Introduced is Red’s seductively wicked archnemesis, Ice Seether, who enjoys slaying innocent creatures while keeping up with the latest fashion trends. Also there Red’s long time friend and witch-in-training, who seems a little strange, but completely loveable. While the story begins with an awesome motorcycle ride through the forest, as an appetizer, through the main course of accepting one’s destiny, the dessert of the story would then be the romantic love-hate relationship between Red and bad-boy Wolfgang Helheim. Wolfgang is one of those creatures who will take his place among the heartthrobs of YA literature. If anyone is seeking for a wonderful new fairytale, I highly recommend Neo Edmund’s Red Riding: Rise of the Alpha Huntress.
March 26, 2013
3.5 Stars
I recieved this book for free in exchange for an honest review.
When I first started reading this story, I wanted to put it down. Wait, wait, wait...put that tomato down!! I didn't realize the author was English!! As in, Great Britain, England. Ummmmm, awkward pause. He's from Los Angeles. The story took place in England!!! I think...Oh wait, it's a Grimm Fairytale!!! Let the tomatoes fly!!
Anyhoo, so I kept reading it. After I acclimated to the Grimm-like foliage that was growing out of Wayward Forest I came to two conclusions:
1. Ok, pretty funny in an odd ball kind of way.
2. I'm feeling awkward again, cause I actually liked it!!!
This author moved things along really quick with this story. I felt like I started it, got into it, and then it was over! Boo-hoo! It took me a bit to warm up to the writing style. The dialogue in particular. Seemed a little off to me, not really realistic. But, maybe it was just me??? Not sure.
Neo Edmund takes you into Little Red Riding Hood's world....the one you think you know?? Hmmm, not so much. This one is better, with a twist I did NOT see coming!! I really didn't, I swear!! What am I rambling about? You'll have to read the book to find out!
Overall, a fun and quick read with a very young heroine. Good, clean, fun!!
I recieved this book for free in exchange for an honest review.
When I first started reading this story, I wanted to put it down. Wait, wait, wait...put that tomato down!! I didn't realize the author was English!! As in, Great Britain, England. Ummmmm, awkward pause. He's from Los Angeles. The story took place in England!!! I think...Oh wait, it's a Grimm Fairytale!!! Let the tomatoes fly!!
Anyhoo, so I kept reading it. After I acclimated to the Grimm-like foliage that was growing out of Wayward Forest I came to two conclusions:
1. Ok, pretty funny in an odd ball kind of way.
2. I'm feeling awkward again, cause I actually liked it!!!
This author moved things along really quick with this story. I felt like I started it, got into it, and then it was over! Boo-hoo! It took me a bit to warm up to the writing style. The dialogue in particular. Seemed a little off to me, not really realistic. But, maybe it was just me??? Not sure.
Neo Edmund takes you into Little Red Riding Hood's world....the one you think you know?? Hmmm, not so much. This one is better, with a twist I did NOT see coming!! I really didn't, I swear!! What am I rambling about? You'll have to read the book to find out!
Overall, a fun and quick read with a very young heroine. Good, clean, fun!!
March 18, 2013
I am in the middle disappointed and happy with this book. I really loved the description it's what got me excited about this story especially when Little Red is not so scared and fragile. I liked that the twist with this book was that Red had a gift to transform into a Wolf. That part of the plot reminded me a lot of the character Red on the Once Upon a Time TV show, which I love.
To start of, I was disappointed with the beginning of the story. I was really really annoyed by how the first conversation went between Red and the first character we are introduced to, a certain Wolf Boy. I didn't like how she was so annoyed by this mysterious rider and when he finally reaches Red she is so into him.
I really did like the all the action and twist the story had but that is about it. The fairy tale world the author creates in this book is really intriguing and enjoyable. I never thought I would be disappointed by a protagonist but I was not a fan of Red or her friends. I found them childish and annoying.
To start of, I was disappointed with the beginning of the story. I was really really annoyed by how the first conversation went between Red and the first character we are introduced to, a certain Wolf Boy. I didn't like how she was so annoyed by this mysterious rider and when he finally reaches Red she is so into him.
I really did like the all the action and twist the story had but that is about it. The fairy tale world the author creates in this book is really intriguing and enjoyable. I never thought I would be disappointed by a protagonist but I was not a fan of Red or her friends. I found them childish and annoying.
July 6, 2013
I purchased this as an ebook from Amazon.
I read this as part of my monthly reading challenge.
This was the first of my fairytale genre which I found it to be an interesting read and not all what I expected. So much better than the standard Red Riding Hood fairytale. The plot flowed smoothly and the descriptive and intriguing writing kept me interested throughout. Looking forward to reading the next book in the series if ever written.
I read this as part of my monthly reading challenge.
This was the first of my fairytale genre which I found it to be an interesting read and not all what I expected. So much better than the standard Red Riding Hood fairytale. The plot flowed smoothly and the descriptive and intriguing writing kept me interested throughout. Looking forward to reading the next book in the series if ever written.
March 16, 2013
What a wonderful story. It's one you want to relax and enjoy as you read it. Not one to be rushed thru. Mild paranormal, a hint of red riding hood,drama, romance. I can't say enough good things about the story. It's a book that I will read again and will be looking for more stories by him. Keep up the great work Neo!!
March 12, 2018
I loved this book. I thought it was going to be boring, but I was so wrong. I loved that the author used a old children's tale as the base of the book, but turned it in too something more modern, and unique! I can't wait until the next book comes out! I really hope people will read this book because it is amazing!
July 8, 2013
I absolutely loved this retelling of Little Red Riding Hood! The idea of there being another world other than the one we see today is well played out. Red is our young protagonist, has the temperament of someone her age normally has, but is also quite a butt kicker. I did think she fell into Wayward a bit too easily, but liked the fact that she was still skeptical about many of the things she encountered. She can be very daring (playing chicken while on motorcycles) and also naive at times, but that can be expected. Honestly at fourteen years old she shouldn't be worrying over whether or not she should take up being the Alpha Werewolf Huntress, but you can't always pick and choose what fate throws your way. The other characters were also quite enjoyable to read. Granny was great and could be hilarious at times. However, you would not want to mess with her when she starts throwing her spellcraft around. Dote and Ash are the type of bestfriends you would want to keep forever. They would stand by Red through thick and thin and everything in between. Wolfgang was a bit hard for me to figure out, but like Red, I was drawn to the bad boy outcast. He was such a butthead during certain passages and I couldn't quite figure out whose side he was really on, though I liked what he chose in the end.
The story was definitely fast paced and action packed which I find enjoyable to read. I really liked the way Wayward Woods was portrayed especially with the different clans the inhabit the land. In this book, the wolf has multiplied into wolves and more so, have evolved into werewolves. Although I can say that this doesn't detract from the story. The basic elements are still there; Red Riding, granny, the woodcutter, and more than enough wolves to sate Red's appetite. There were some parts of the book that reminded me of Norse Mythology. For example Ragnarok, which in mythology is the literal ending of the world. In this book, Ragnarok takes physical form as a werewolf (of course), but the idea is still the same (as in he will bring the world into darkness). Not only this, but some of the name of the stones also come from Norse mythology (which I don't mind at all since I love it).
There was a lot of fighting, limb hacking, and beating people unconscious in this book which is lacking in the original fairytale. Like I said, all that just adds to the allure of the story and keeps the reader turning the pages (or swiping the screen).
So for all my raving of this book, there were some aspects that I wasn't too keen on. The part that the main characters are basically 14-15 years old doesn't bother me, but it seems like their memories are highly advanced. Red hadn't seen her bestfriends since she was three, but somehow once together, they could remember almost every single detail of their toddler days. Like every.single.detail. I feel that is a bit surreal, but it's Wayward so maybe it's different there. Another part I could do without was all the "wowzers!" I get it...there are a lot of new and shocking things that are revealed, but saying "wowzers!" pretty much every time was getting on my nerves. At least vary it up a bit. But other than these two I just listed, I would recommend this book to anyone who wants to read a retelling on Little Red Riding Hood. It's quite a howl (yes, pun intended).
The story was definitely fast paced and action packed which I find enjoyable to read. I really liked the way Wayward Woods was portrayed especially with the different clans the inhabit the land. In this book, the wolf has multiplied into wolves and more so, have evolved into werewolves. Although I can say that this doesn't detract from the story. The basic elements are still there; Red Riding, granny, the woodcutter, and more than enough wolves to sate Red's appetite. There were some parts of the book that reminded me of Norse Mythology. For example Ragnarok, which in mythology is the literal ending of the world. In this book, Ragnarok takes physical form as a werewolf (of course), but the idea is still the same (as in he will bring the world into darkness). Not only this, but some of the name of the stones also come from Norse mythology (which I don't mind at all since I love it).
There was a lot of fighting, limb hacking, and beating people unconscious in this book which is lacking in the original fairytale. Like I said, all that just adds to the allure of the story and keeps the reader turning the pages (or swiping the screen).
So for all my raving of this book, there were some aspects that I wasn't too keen on. The part that the main characters are basically 14-15 years old doesn't bother me, but it seems like their memories are highly advanced. Red hadn't seen her bestfriends since she was three, but somehow once together, they could remember almost every single detail of their toddler days. Like every.single.detail. I feel that is a bit surreal, but it's Wayward so maybe it's different there. Another part I could do without was all the "wowzers!" I get it...there are a lot of new and shocking things that are revealed, but saying "wowzers!" pretty much every time was getting on my nerves. At least vary it up a bit. But other than these two I just listed, I would recommend this book to anyone who wants to read a retelling on Little Red Riding Hood. It's quite a howl (yes, pun intended).
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
August 29, 2013
I received a free eBook copy from the author in exchange for an honest review via the Read 4 Review program of Never Too Old For Y.A. & N.A. Books Group.
I can’t remember ever reading a retelling of any fairy tale. I’ve watched a few, yes, but I can’t find the interest in reading them. But when I see a blurb of this, I knew I just to get my hands on it. And it did not disappoint!
Let’s talk a little about the story (no spoilers)...
Red grew up an orphan. She was passed between orphanages until she received a letter from a certain Grenda Stalk telling her that she needs to get back to her hometown. Red did, and she must now face her destiny.
The book is a light, entertaining read. It’s a little confusing at the start, what with Red not knowing what’s actually happening around her, but the up side of that is it actually makes this a page-turner. You just won’t be able to put it down. And the twists! I sure didn't see them coming. And those definitely add cool points for this book.
It took me a while to relate to Red. Not because she’s hard to relate to but because she’s… complicated. It’s hard to figure her out. She wants something and then she doesn’t. She’s cool with something and then she’s not. But despite that, you’ll learn to like her. And once she started standing up to face whatever destiny she’s supposed to fulfill, you’ll really love her. She’s strong and loyal; she’ll do anything for the people she cares about, and she can seriously kick ass.
There’s also this guy called Wolfgang Helheim. A werewolf I like to pretend is ten years older than he really is so it’s not too weird having a crush on him. Yes, I seriously said that. HE’S CUTE, OKAY. You have to understand that. Okay, Chester, back to business. Wolfgang, or Wolf Boy as Red would call him, is a wild card. If I think Red is complicated, Wolfgang is whole other level of complicated. You just can’t figure out what his real intentions are. You don’t know whether to love or hate him. To trust him or not. But despite that, you can’t help but fall helplessly in love with him. Okay, okay, stopping now.
Prince De'Mere, ladies and gentlemen. He’s… weird, but really funny. I’ll just let you judge him. *wink*
Dote and Ash, Red’s best friends, are the cutest of the bunch. I must admit it took me a while to like Ash because, well, he’s a little wimp at the start, but he pulled through in the end. Dote is funny but can seriously kick your ass. I’d love to have these two as friends. :)
I know this book would most likely have a sequel, and I am so ready for it!
This review also appeared on Amazon.
I can’t remember ever reading a retelling of any fairy tale. I’ve watched a few, yes, but I can’t find the interest in reading them. But when I see a blurb of this, I knew I just to get my hands on it. And it did not disappoint!
Let’s talk a little about the story (no spoilers)...
Red grew up an orphan. She was passed between orphanages until she received a letter from a certain Grenda Stalk telling her that she needs to get back to her hometown. Red did, and she must now face her destiny.
The book is a light, entertaining read. It’s a little confusing at the start, what with Red not knowing what’s actually happening around her, but the up side of that is it actually makes this a page-turner. You just won’t be able to put it down. And the twists! I sure didn't see them coming. And those definitely add cool points for this book.
It took me a while to relate to Red. Not because she’s hard to relate to but because she’s… complicated. It’s hard to figure her out. She wants something and then she doesn’t. She’s cool with something and then she’s not. But despite that, you’ll learn to like her. And once she started standing up to face whatever destiny she’s supposed to fulfill, you’ll really love her. She’s strong and loyal; she’ll do anything for the people she cares about, and she can seriously kick ass.
There’s also this guy called Wolfgang Helheim. A werewolf I like to pretend is ten years older than he really is so it’s not too weird having a crush on him. Yes, I seriously said that. HE’S CUTE, OKAY. You have to understand that. Okay, Chester, back to business. Wolfgang, or Wolf Boy as Red would call him, is a wild card. If I think Red is complicated, Wolfgang is whole other level of complicated. You just can’t figure out what his real intentions are. You don’t know whether to love or hate him. To trust him or not. But despite that, you can’t help but fall helplessly in love with him. Okay, okay, stopping now.
Prince De'Mere, ladies and gentlemen. He’s… weird, but really funny. I’ll just let you judge him. *wink*
Dote and Ash, Red’s best friends, are the cutest of the bunch. I must admit it took me a while to like Ash because, well, he’s a little wimp at the start, but he pulled through in the end. Dote is funny but can seriously kick your ass. I’d love to have these two as friends. :)
I know this book would most likely have a sequel, and I am so ready for it!
This review also appeared on Amazon.
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