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Cinderella
A girl with a secret and a prince on a mission
When Prince Anthony spies Eleanoria Woodston outside her family home dressed as a servant, he knows something is amiss. Pretending to be John, his cousin’s outrider, he decides to take matters into his own hands and figure out why Ella hasn’t been seen at court. And more importantly why the daughter of one of the wealthiest families in the kingdom dresses like a pauper.
Ella has had her own bout of trials, including losing her beloved father and facing the wrath and jealousy of her stepmother and stepsisters. Becoming a servant doesn’t seem all that bad until the handsome John comes into her life, now he appears to be upsetting everything. Never before has she been so unsettled. Just his presence is making her dream of a life beyond this one.
When John invites Ella to the ball and she grudgingly accepts, he wonders if he’s truly losing his mind. How would he ever pull off pretending to be John while obviously hosting the ball as Anthony? Especially when the stubborn girl has made it quite obvious she would never attend a ball with a snobbish prince.
When Prince Anthony spies Eleanoria Woodston outside her family home dressed as a servant, he knows something is amiss. Pretending to be John, his cousin’s outrider, he decides to take matters into his own hands and figure out why Ella hasn’t been seen at court. And more importantly why the daughter of one of the wealthiest families in the kingdom dresses like a pauper.
Ella has had her own bout of trials, including losing her beloved father and facing the wrath and jealousy of her stepmother and stepsisters. Becoming a servant doesn’t seem all that bad until the handsome John comes into her life, now he appears to be upsetting everything. Never before has she been so unsettled. Just his presence is making her dream of a life beyond this one.
When John invites Ella to the ball and she grudgingly accepts, he wonders if he’s truly losing his mind. How would he ever pull off pretending to be John while obviously hosting the ball as Anthony? Especially when the stubborn girl has made it quite obvious she would never attend a ball with a snobbish prince.
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First published January 1, 2013
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Rapunzel
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Return to Neverland
The Forgotten Princess
The Princess With the Golden Touch
Little Red Riding Hood
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Drowning
Swimming
Crawling
Walking
Running
Soaring
CLEAN ROMANCE FOR ADULTS:
*Eternal Realm Series*
Eternity
Destiny
Divinity
*The Jane Austen Diaries*
Pride & Popularity (Aug 2011)
Persuaded (Aug. 2012)
Emmalee (Jan 2013)
Mansfield Ranch (Dec 2013)
Northanger Alibi (Feb. 2012)
Sensible & Sensational (July 2015)
Sand & Sun (2016)
The Wilsons
Queen Sydney
*Jenni James Faerie Tale Collection*
Beauty and the Beast
Sleeping Beauty
Rumplestiltskin
Cinderella
Hansel and Gretel
Jack and the Beanstalk
Snow White
The Frog Prince
Twelve Dancing Princesses
Rapunzel
The Little Mermaid
Peter Pan
Return to Neverland
The Forgotten Princess
The Princess With the Golden Touch
Little Red Riding Hood
(and more...)
MIDDLE GRADE READERS:
Prince Tennyson (May 2012)
EARLY READERS:
*Andy & Annie Collection*
A Ghost Story
Greeny Meany
WOMEN'S FICTION:
*Revitalizing Jane Series*
Drowning
Swimming
Crawling
Walking
Running
Soaring
CLEAN ROMANCE FOR ADULTS:
*Eternal Realm Series*
Eternity
Destiny
Divinity
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November 25, 2025
3 stars ⭐️ Clean Fiction - Fairytale Retelling (non-magical)
There’s some head jumping between our main characters, but it actually didn’t bother me much—probably because I love this fairytale and eagerly read retellings of it.
The plot starts off quick, which is always nice. What was not nice was the stepmother and one of the stepsisters. They were one good yank of the hair away from having a bald patch in my mind and I would have gladly—so gladly—given them one. On the other hand, our main couple quickly share many kisses and “I love you”s to the point I was cringing because it felt super sudden. They’re cute together with their banter, but it was very rushed in the kissing and feeling department—they both had lines that were as cheesy as a Wisconsin cheese store and super poetic. That said, it was still overall cute, I particularly liked the final chapter’s catch up to what happens for them and others, and will be checking out other books in this series (as they don’t seem to be connected).
Main Content:
Anthony talks to and wishes on the moon, but then does “the Prayer of Watchfulness” which is “the prayer his kingdom had used for centuries to tell their God that they were finally willing to submit to His watchful eye. To allow Him to provide or release where He saw fit.”.
A few mentions of luck; A couple mentions of prayers; A mention of Anthony thinking that his mother is a witch for being able to read his mind (but she isn’t and it’s more a teasing comment).
No language stronger than ‘why in heaven’s name’ and ‘good heavens’; Some eye rolling.
Ella’s stepmother lies to her, belittles her, & also slaps her; A death & grief (up to a few sentences).
Mentions of deaths & grief (including Ella for her father & Anthony for a parent); Mentions of lies, lying, & liars; A few mentions of stealing.
Wanting to kiss (up to 2-3 sentences),
Hand kisses,
1 hair kiss,
2 nose kisses,
2 forehead/brow kisses,
2 cheek kisses,
2 eyelid kisses,
2 ear kisses,
1 jaw kiss,
7 kisses lasting a sentence,
2 kisses lasting 2-3 sentences,
1 kiss lasting 3-4 sentences,
2 kisses lastig 5-6 sentences.
Touches, Embraces, Snuggling, Tingles/Butterflies, Warmth, Nearness, & Noticing (up to a few sentences); Blushes.
Mentions of kisses & kissing.
There’s some head jumping between our main characters, but it actually didn’t bother me much—probably because I love this fairytale and eagerly read retellings of it.
The plot starts off quick, which is always nice. What was not nice was the stepmother and one of the stepsisters. They were one good yank of the hair away from having a bald patch in my mind and I would have gladly—so gladly—given them one. On the other hand, our main couple quickly share many kisses and “I love you”s to the point I was cringing because it felt super sudden. They’re cute together with their banter, but it was very rushed in the kissing and feeling department—they both had lines that were as cheesy as a Wisconsin cheese store and super poetic. That said, it was still overall cute, I particularly liked the final chapter’s catch up to what happens for them and others, and will be checking out other books in this series (as they don’t seem to be connected).
Main Content:
Anthony talks to and wishes on the moon, but then does “the Prayer of Watchfulness” which is “the prayer his kingdom had used for centuries to tell their God that they were finally willing to submit to His watchful eye. To allow Him to provide or release where He saw fit.”.
A few mentions of luck; A couple mentions of prayers; A mention of Anthony thinking that his mother is a witch for being able to read his mind (but she isn’t and it’s more a teasing comment).
No language stronger than ‘why in heaven’s name’ and ‘good heavens’; Some eye rolling.
Ella’s stepmother lies to her, belittles her, & also slaps her; A death & grief (up to a few sentences).
Mentions of deaths & grief (including Ella for her father & Anthony for a parent); Mentions of lies, lying, & liars; A few mentions of stealing.
Wanting to kiss (up to 2-3 sentences),
Hand kisses,
1 hair kiss,
2 nose kisses,
2 forehead/brow kisses,
2 cheek kisses,
2 eyelid kisses,
2 ear kisses,
1 jaw kiss,
7 kisses lasting a sentence,
2 kisses lasting 2-3 sentences,
1 kiss lasting 3-4 sentences,
2 kisses lastig 5-6 sentences.
Touches, Embraces, Snuggling, Tingles/Butterflies, Warmth, Nearness, & Noticing (up to a few sentences); Blushes.
Mentions of kisses & kissing.
March 15, 2015
I was going through the stories in Wattpad when I found this. It was perfect! Well, perfect enough to fill my need of cute lovey-dovey romance stuff. Yes it was a bit cliché, cheesy and not the best out there, but for me, nonetheless, it was nice to find something so simple and short yet creative and did not once made me want to stop reading it. Which is something you rarely find in Wattpad. I say good job to the author and I hope it gets more reads!
July 16, 2019
Re-read 2019
An enchanting Cinderella retelling.
An enchanting Cinderella retelling.
August 7, 2022
Cute, sweet, clean read that I couldn’t put down! Cinderella is one of my all time favorite fairy tales and this version has some fun twists. I loved that the prince knew Ella from her youth and that we get inside of his head to hear what he is thinking. If you love fairy tales and are looking for something delightful that will make you smile pick this up. I promise you will devour it quickly!
January 19, 2016
Another Cinderella
Not the best Cinderella retelling I've ever read, though certainly not not the worst. There was more kissing than I like, but I enjoyed the main plot.
Not the best Cinderella retelling I've ever read, though certainly not not the worst. There was more kissing than I like, but I enjoyed the main plot.
March 20, 2014
I couldn't bring myself to finish it. I think if Gilbert Blythe were reviewing it, he'd tell the author to take out all the "highfaluting mumbo jumbo." I couldn't take it.
October 18, 2020
Very sweet retelling
Focus was most on Ella’s understanding of her self worth and how that changed along with the Classic story of Cinderella. I imagine this would be a great book to give to an adolescent
Focus was most on Ella’s understanding of her self worth and how that changed along with the Classic story of Cinderella. I imagine this would be a great book to give to an adolescent
March 23, 2013
Sooo cute. I just love Jenni James's books. You never have to worry what you are going to find. They are clean, they are romantic. I would give them to my niece as well as my mom. Just great.
The only negative critisism I could could come up with was sometimes it seems like they fall in instant love, but it doesn't matter, still brilliant. Well done Jenni!
The only negative critisism I could could come up with was sometimes it seems like they fall in instant love, but it doesn't matter, still brilliant. Well done Jenni!
February 3, 2018
Friendship becomes romance.
Eleanoria Woodston mostly tries not to think about how her life has changed since her beloved father died. Her stepmother, Lady Dashlund, rules the home with an iron hand, with Ella receiving the brunt of it. She now lives in the attic, instead of her own bedroom, and she does all the chores. Her stepsisters get to wear all the finery and are the recipients of Ella's hard work. Even her beloved horse, Sunshine, was sold to help pay the debts.
Prince Anthony has been roped into paying a formal visit to the Dashlund household, along with his friend Lord Gavenston. On the way there, he spots a woman on the grounds, whom he is certain is Eleanoria--a friend and rival from his childhood, when he used to sneak out of the castle and enter into local horse races. It can't be her, though. She's is dressed as a servant; she, whose father was one of the wealthiest merchants in the kingdom. Prince Anthony decides he must find out what is going on, so he once again dons the old ruse and nickname "John" and leaves Lord Gavenston to make his way on his own with the Dashlund sisters.
* * * * *
This version stayed fairly close to the original. What I liked about it, though, was that Ella and the Prince renewed their friendship long before the ball. The Prince got a lot more backstory, which was nice. He was more than a cardboard cutout. In this one, the King was dying, and he had the weight of that on his shoulders.
That being said, there was a part that tended toward insta-love. It had been 3 days (I think) since Ella and Anthony had renewed their acquaintance, and she started going on about all that she loved about him, naming each facial feature in turn (yes, it was awkward even reading about it.) Then at the end, she said something about how she didn't want him to take it wrong, because she knew they were just friends. Um...what? Maybe that was just evidence of her own confusion. Anyway, they continued to meet for several more months before really declaring undying devotion to one another.
Content: Clean.
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Eleanoria Woodston mostly tries not to think about how her life has changed since her beloved father died. Her stepmother, Lady Dashlund, rules the home with an iron hand, with Ella receiving the brunt of it. She now lives in the attic, instead of her own bedroom, and she does all the chores. Her stepsisters get to wear all the finery and are the recipients of Ella's hard work. Even her beloved horse, Sunshine, was sold to help pay the debts.
Prince Anthony has been roped into paying a formal visit to the Dashlund household, along with his friend Lord Gavenston. On the way there, he spots a woman on the grounds, whom he is certain is Eleanoria--a friend and rival from his childhood, when he used to sneak out of the castle and enter into local horse races. It can't be her, though. She's is dressed as a servant; she, whose father was one of the wealthiest merchants in the kingdom. Prince Anthony decides he must find out what is going on, so he once again dons the old ruse and nickname "John" and leaves Lord Gavenston to make his way on his own with the Dashlund sisters.
* * * * *
This version stayed fairly close to the original. What I liked about it, though, was that Ella and the Prince renewed their friendship long before the ball. The Prince got a lot more backstory, which was nice. He was more than a cardboard cutout. In this one, the King was dying, and he had the weight of that on his shoulders.
That being said, there was a part that tended toward insta-love. It had been 3 days (I think) since Ella and Anthony had renewed their acquaintance, and she started going on about all that she loved about him, naming each facial feature in turn (yes, it was awkward even reading about it.) Then at the end, she said something about how she didn't want him to take it wrong, because she knew they were just friends. Um...what? Maybe that was just evidence of her own confusion. Anyway, they continued to meet for several more months before really declaring undying devotion to one another.
Content: Clean.
I blog at www.ofbooksandblooms.com
February 14, 2017
This was a cute version of Cinderella. I loved how the relationship of the prince and Ella was developed. However I thought the dynamic of the step mother should have been Developed better. I just didn't hate her much and she just wasn't a huge character. But cute story.
June 17, 2020
There’s one word for this book and series : sweet.
I immensely enjoyed this sweet romance and highly recommend this simple, sophisticated retelling of the Cinderella story. Five stars ⭐️
I immensely enjoyed this sweet romance and highly recommend this simple, sophisticated retelling of the Cinderella story. Five stars ⭐️
July 4, 2021
3.5 stars
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April 8, 2017
A very short, very simple and very sweet version of Cinderella.
July 23, 2013
Wow! I love this retelling of Cinderella better than any other. (Except for Cinder (Cinder #1) by Marissa Meyer) (Read that book if you don't know what I'm talking about). Cinderella (and Cinder) are absolutely delightful. Cinderella is recommended to readers who are at least eleven years old.
The plot isn't twisty or anything, but everything is pretty well written and fitted together. Every word flows and nothing is too wrong or anything. I like the conflict of the story, but it isn't too big of a deal, especially because I know what will happen in the end. We always do know what happens in fairy tale retellings. Usually.
The ending is so "Happily Ever After." It's a nice change after reading bloody endings and cliffhangers. I'm so sick of them and authors who love, just love, to torture readers like you and me. There should be a law that states "All books must and always not have cliffhangers or loose endings."
I like how the author uses switching POVs to tell the Cinderella story. From the hilarious Prince to the 'stubborn' girl, we see the world of Cinderella. I wish, simply wish, for a POV from one of the stepsisters. Or maybe not. I wouldn't want to listen to the rantings and selfish thoughts of the evil stepsister.
Characters:
Eleanoria Woodston, or what we and the prince call her, Ella, is a wonderful character. She's a little too ignorant and thick for my liking, but is still above the range of my hatred. The only reason I like is because this girl has guts to stand up. After all that abuse, insults, she rises against her bullies (stepmother and stepsister). Which is what every bullied kid or person should do.
Prince Anthony is so dashing. I can't help but fall in love in his character and sweet charming words. His little reactions to the hilarious pushings and tauntings of his mother are funny and innocent. He likes Eleanoria, but won't admit it to his mother, no matter what his mother says or do. (We have to love the mother).
Rating: Three out of Five
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The plot isn't twisty or anything, but everything is pretty well written and fitted together. Every word flows and nothing is too wrong or anything. I like the conflict of the story, but it isn't too big of a deal, especially because I know what will happen in the end. We always do know what happens in fairy tale retellings. Usually.
The ending is so "Happily Ever After." It's a nice change after reading bloody endings and cliffhangers. I'm so sick of them and authors who love, just love, to torture readers like you and me. There should be a law that states "All books must and always not have cliffhangers or loose endings."
I like how the author uses switching POVs to tell the Cinderella story. From the hilarious Prince to the 'stubborn' girl, we see the world of Cinderella. I wish, simply wish, for a POV from one of the stepsisters. Or maybe not. I wouldn't want to listen to the rantings and selfish thoughts of the evil stepsister.
Characters:
Eleanoria Woodston, or what we and the prince call her, Ella, is a wonderful character. She's a little too ignorant and thick for my liking, but is still above the range of my hatred. The only reason I like is because this girl has guts to stand up. After all that abuse, insults, she rises against her bullies (stepmother and stepsister). Which is what every bullied kid or person should do.
Prince Anthony is so dashing. I can't help but fall in love in his character and sweet charming words. His little reactions to the hilarious pushings and tauntings of his mother are funny and innocent. He likes Eleanoria, but won't admit it to his mother, no matter what his mother says or do. (We have to love the mother).
Rating: Three out of Five
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July 23, 2016
First Line:
"Ella picked up the last basket of clothing, her arms strained from attempting to carry the heavy, wet mass the twelve or so feet to the drying line."
This is a very non-magical fairytale retelling of Cinderella. All the aspects that made the original story wonderful for me are missing here. There is no fairy godmother, no magical transformation, no running away at midnight and leaving behind a glass slipper, and no sense of awe or wonder at the discovery of the identity of the mysterious and beautiful maiden at the ball since everybody already knows her. There are also several typos and errors that should have been edited out such as "He ran his fingers through his hair and rested his knees upon his elbows," or "Her faint worries were for not," or Ella asking "Anthony, were in the world are we?"
What I did like - the only thing I actually like - in this particular retelling is the character of Prince Anthony/John. So often in fairy tales we have just the princesses' POV, but if there is one thing I really appreciate in Jenni James' stories is that the princes are given just as much attention and a personality as the princesses. I have also read James' The Frog Prince and found it a better retelling than the original, which I've never really liked, due to the inclusion of a very 'charming' prince. And for that I'm going to try a few other of her books in this collection.
May 29, 2013
I see a lot of people have really enjoyed this book, but I did not find it very well written at all. A new character arrives 2/3 of the way through, just to provide the answer to all Ella's problems. There is no explanation as to why he waited this long to give her the answers he had, and we never hear from him again. And Ella and the Prince kiss each other a whole lot and then still apparently aren't sure of their feelings for each other!? One of the step sisters all of a sudden becomes nice, and there is no explanation as to why. Also, I expected the step mother to be more of an adversary. We were constantly told how angry and afraid she was of Ella going to the ball, but when the time came, she just let her go, and apparently got over whatever was bothering her, because the story just plodded along to the ending without any attempt by the antagonist to stop it. As a Cinderella retelling, some of the ideas Jenni James had were unique and interesting, but it was not executed or fleshed out well enough for me.
June 2, 2017
For me reading this book was like eating an overly sweet dessert- it just didn't have any substance to it. I could see the author was trying to update the story some and change up the romance but for me there just wasn't enough plot. It was far too much focus on the romantic part of the story for me. If you're a fan of sappy, sweet romances, then this one is for you!
June 23, 2024
This is completely different from any other Cinderella story that I have seen. Which is what makes it an excellent read. I highly recommend this book to anyone, and I will definitely be reading more from this author
June 19, 2016
If you want a book of cliches and corny romance lines, this is perfect for you. If you don't, I might suggest looking for a different book.
May 30, 2023
Cinderella by Jenni James is a modern retelling of the classic fairy tale that offers a fresh take on the beloved story. While it has its moments of charm and creativity, the book falls somewhat short of its full potential.
One of the strengths of this adaptation is the author's ability to capture the essence of the original tale while infusing it with contemporary elements. The story follows Ella, a kind-hearted young woman who faces mistreatment from her stepfamily. The portrayal of Ella as a resilient and determined protagonist is commendable, and readers will find themselves rooting for her throughout the book.
However, the book lacks depth and character development in some areas. While Ella's character is well-explored, the supporting characters, particularly the stepfamily and Prince Anthony, feel somewhat one-dimensional. Their motivations and personalities could have been further explored to create a more engaging reading experience.
The pacing of the story is uneven, with some sections feeling rushed while others drag on. There are moments of intrigue and excitement, but they are not consistently sustained throughout the narrative.
Furthermore, the writing style, while accessible, could benefit from more polish and refinement. The dialogue sometimes feels stilted, and the prose lacks the descriptive richness that would truly bring the story to life.
Despite these criticisms, Cinderella remains an enjoyable read for those seeking a light-hearted and nostalgic retelling. The familiar themes of kindness, love, and the triumph of good over evil are present, providing a comforting and uplifting message.
In conclusion, the book offers a modern twist on a timeless fairy tale, but it falls short in terms of character development and pacing. While it has its moments of charm, it may not fully satisfy readers looking for a more immersive and engaging adaptation.
One of the strengths of this adaptation is the author's ability to capture the essence of the original tale while infusing it with contemporary elements. The story follows Ella, a kind-hearted young woman who faces mistreatment from her stepfamily. The portrayal of Ella as a resilient and determined protagonist is commendable, and readers will find themselves rooting for her throughout the book.
However, the book lacks depth and character development in some areas. While Ella's character is well-explored, the supporting characters, particularly the stepfamily and Prince Anthony, feel somewhat one-dimensional. Their motivations and personalities could have been further explored to create a more engaging reading experience.
The pacing of the story is uneven, with some sections feeling rushed while others drag on. There are moments of intrigue and excitement, but they are not consistently sustained throughout the narrative.
Furthermore, the writing style, while accessible, could benefit from more polish and refinement. The dialogue sometimes feels stilted, and the prose lacks the descriptive richness that would truly bring the story to life.
Despite these criticisms, Cinderella remains an enjoyable read for those seeking a light-hearted and nostalgic retelling. The familiar themes of kindness, love, and the triumph of good over evil are present, providing a comforting and uplifting message.
In conclusion, the book offers a modern twist on a timeless fairy tale, but it falls short in terms of character development and pacing. While it has its moments of charm, it may not fully satisfy readers looking for a more immersive and engaging adaptation.
December 30, 2017
I found this to be a very simple retelling of the fairy tale. All in all, I enjoyed it, though I found it to be. . .underdeveloped. The editing was rough and in several places caused reading to cease and backtracking to occur to figure out what had just been read.
Very little actually *happened*, the villian/s were barely present, and when things started coming to a head. . .nothing actually happened. They did not truly *do* anything.
I did appreciate that Ella and the prince knew each other before the ball, but it was fairly clear they never really "knew" each other as children. . .just as competitors, but not as friends. As adults, this leads to a bad case of 'insta-love' with no real development on friendship or actually knowing each other. While they definitely spend more time with each other than 'just' at the ball (thank you!) the love story is a *bit* more believable. I would have liked to see more depth to the relationship. Near the end emotions were still flip-flopping around. There was not much sense of the relationship really growing in a believable manner. The prince also came across as a bit too 'perfect'. With the perfect life, perfect parents, perfect situation (apart from his father dying) and no real character developing areas.
There was, I noted, and appreciated, some effort to show the mental trauma Ella lived under. The abuse she endured and the mental state she lived with, doubting her own worth, etc. While only the tip of the iceberg for someone living in an abusive situation, it was nice to see she was not 'perfectly fine' after all that time.
All in all, a light read to be enjoyed in an evening, but not much depth to this story. Like the other three of this series I have read, it had an interesting concept, and seemed the nice framework for a deeper story, but was not fully developed and realized.
Very little actually *happened*, the villian/s were barely present, and when things started coming to a head. . .nothing actually happened. They did not truly *do* anything.
I did appreciate that Ella and the prince knew each other before the ball, but it was fairly clear they never really "knew" each other as children. . .just as competitors, but not as friends. As adults, this leads to a bad case of 'insta-love' with no real development on friendship or actually knowing each other. While they definitely spend more time with each other than 'just' at the ball (thank you!) the love story is a *bit* more believable. I would have liked to see more depth to the relationship. Near the end emotions were still flip-flopping around. There was not much sense of the relationship really growing in a believable manner. The prince also came across as a bit too 'perfect'. With the perfect life, perfect parents, perfect situation (apart from his father dying) and no real character developing areas.
There was, I noted, and appreciated, some effort to show the mental trauma Ella lived under. The abuse she endured and the mental state she lived with, doubting her own worth, etc. While only the tip of the iceberg for someone living in an abusive situation, it was nice to see she was not 'perfectly fine' after all that time.
All in all, a light read to be enjoyed in an evening, but not much depth to this story. Like the other three of this series I have read, it had an interesting concept, and seemed the nice framework for a deeper story, but was not fully developed and realized.
May 22, 2020
I like the notion of Cinderella and her prince meeting each other prior to the ball so there's no "fell in love after one night of dancing" thing. But having them meet in advance is rendered completely pointless (in terms of romance) if they fall in love immediately!!
Ella and John used to race each other as children. It's not made clear where these races all of the kids had were held or how this was "a thing" for what I assume is middle class children(they have to be rich enough to own horses but weren't necessarily nobility). But Ella use to win all the time with John in second apparently. That was their entire "we used to know each other" history. Ella's been gone for years and clearly the two haven't thought anything about the other.
But one day John sees her and is like hey that's so and so! Why's she dressed like a servant? Has a short chat with her. Comes by the next day and they spend some time together. Then on their third encounter as adults they start off their meeting with kissing. So after one brief conversation, and a few hours the next day together they're now in love.
Oh, but John had just said earlier how he wouldn't fall easy. *eye roll*
So that's our romance. John knows who Ella is the whole time and invites her to the ball and even picks her up. There goes the mystery girl at the ball and the leaving at midnight because of magic and a glass slipper, etc. No magic at all in this story or hunting to find the mystery girl. There's also no pressure for the prince to pick a bride at this event and it isn't expected that he will.
One of the stepsister's suddenly has a change of heart and becomes super nice to Ella. Once Ella gets an official invitation to the ball from the queen the stepmother backs off. She has one of her daughter's give Ella a dress, offers to have Ella ride with them at the ball, and is basically unseen for the rest of the book. She's not a problem at home or at the ball. It makes her very lackluster as a villain. The other stepsister is similar with no big confrontation and only her making a tiny shriek at the ball when Ella shows up.
I would've quit at about 50% but since the story is short I figured I might as well trudge on. Instalove, no suspense, missing some key cinderella plot points, and a meh antagonist were enough to make this a bleh read for me.
Ella and John used to race each other as children. It's not made clear where these races all of the kids had were held or how this was "a thing" for what I assume is middle class children(they have to be rich enough to own horses but weren't necessarily nobility). But Ella use to win all the time with John in second apparently. That was their entire "we used to know each other" history. Ella's been gone for years and clearly the two haven't thought anything about the other.
But one day John sees her and is like hey that's so and so! Why's she dressed like a servant? Has a short chat with her. Comes by the next day and they spend some time together. Then on their third encounter as adults they start off their meeting with kissing. So after one brief conversation, and a few hours the next day together they're now in love.
Oh, but John had just said earlier how he wouldn't fall easy. *eye roll*
So that's our romance. John knows who Ella is the whole time and invites her to the ball and even picks her up. There goes the mystery girl at the ball and the leaving at midnight because of magic and a glass slipper, etc. No magic at all in this story or hunting to find the mystery girl. There's also no pressure for the prince to pick a bride at this event and it isn't expected that he will.
One of the stepsister's suddenly has a change of heart and becomes super nice to Ella. Once Ella gets an official invitation to the ball from the queen the stepmother backs off. She has one of her daughter's give Ella a dress, offers to have Ella ride with them at the ball, and is basically unseen for the rest of the book. She's not a problem at home or at the ball. It makes her very lackluster as a villain. The other stepsister is similar with no big confrontation and only her making a tiny shriek at the ball when Ella shows up.
I would've quit at about 50% but since the story is short I figured I might as well trudge on. Instalove, no suspense, missing some key cinderella plot points, and a meh antagonist were enough to make this a bleh read for me.
October 2, 2017
Somehow there was absolutely no conflict in the book. Ella was just a girl who let everyone walk all over her and had low self esteem. The Prince was a pampered boy who got everything he wanted and his parents were perfect. The Prince mentions at the beginning that he didn't want to marry someone he didn't know and would not fall in love easily, but they somehow contradicts himself on what seems like the next page when he falls for Ella after seeing her just once. They say they have "been friends since childhood", but really they only "knew" each other because they raced horses against each other once; that is not actually knowing someone. There is no fairy godmother and no real glass slippers, I'm not even sure besides her name and that she has a stepmother why this is a Cinderella story? It reads like a Hallmark movie that is so cheesy and ridiculous that at times it was hard to get through without taking a break for laughing and heavy eye rolling. I don't think I would read this again, and I would only recommend this book to those who are in for a quick read and low expectations on character development and plot.
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February 16, 2017
The Daddy Issues in this book were too real.... Got me in the feels big time! But it was a cute read, and I enjoyed it.
Although this doesn't seem like a very different retelling... There was no Fairy-Godmother, and no 'When the clock strikes 12...' business.
There are so many different re-tellings of this story. The one where she goes to the ball wearing her step-sister's stuff, and they shred the clothes off her and scratch her face bloody....
And the other version where she loses the slipper and when the Prince gets to her door to make the girls try it on her stepsisters cut off their big toes in hopes of the shoe fitting.... it still didn't and during the Prince and Cinderella's happily ever after they made the sisters dance on hot coals... possibly while black birds plucked out their eyes.... not sure - BUT TRUE STORY!
A good read, definitely cute, and a good love story. I'm just not so sure about the retelling part. It seems basically the same to me.
~Simone
Although this doesn't seem like a very different retelling... There was no Fairy-Godmother, and no 'When the clock strikes 12...' business.
There are so many different re-tellings of this story. The one where she goes to the ball wearing her step-sister's stuff, and they shred the clothes off her and scratch her face bloody....
And the other version where she loses the slipper and when the Prince gets to her door to make the girls try it on her stepsisters cut off their big toes in hopes of the shoe fitting.... it still didn't and during the Prince and Cinderella's happily ever after they made the sisters dance on hot coals... possibly while black birds plucked out their eyes.... not sure - BUT TRUE STORY!
A good read, definitely cute, and a good love story. I'm just not so sure about the retelling part. It seems basically the same to me.
~Simone
May 6, 2020
This was a cute story and a fun retelling of Cinderella. Okay so at first I didn't love Anthony. I thought he was a bit arrogant and seemed like he was just talking with Ella to help her so he could feel good about himself. Some who read this may wonder where I got that idea but that is how I felt at first. I loved Ella. Some of the supporting characters were great too. But Anthony redeemed himself and I thought their relationship was so cute. I loved that they had met before and it wasn't just an insta love at first sight unbelievable deal. Their interactions were cute and sweet and I quite enjoyed this book. It was a quick but entertaining read.
June 16, 2022
Another delightful book by Jenni James! This was a sweet retelling of Cinderella with new twists to it that differ from other retellings. The first novel I read in this series was The Frog Prince retelling. This book was a little longer, but still a reasonably short one-sitting read. It also seems to be a little more suited to an bit older audience. There was more kissing (still less description which made it much more innocent.)
I very much enjoyed the story! The characters definitely sang “fairy tale character” with their goodness and sweetness. Would definitely recommend as a fun summer read.
I very much enjoyed the story! The characters definitely sang “fairy tale character” with their goodness and sweetness. Would definitely recommend as a fun summer read.
July 17, 2020
Wonderful twist to the original fairytale
I loved this sweet romance based on the fairytale Cinderella.
Ella is such a wonderful, sweet girl. Although treated horribly after her father’s passing away it does not make her bitter or vengeful. Price Anthony is any girls dream.
I loved the relationship that developed between Ella and Anthony as they grew to love each other. Would recommend for any age.
I loved this sweet romance based on the fairytale Cinderella.
Ella is such a wonderful, sweet girl. Although treated horribly after her father’s passing away it does not make her bitter or vengeful. Price Anthony is any girls dream.
I loved the relationship that developed between Ella and Anthony as they grew to love each other. Would recommend for any age.
March 25, 2024
Ella has been abused by her stepmother & sisters since her father died & Prince Anthony is wondering why. They meet in secret & Ella discovers that she's the one who's inherited everything from her father & not her stepmother. Now, it's time for some karma. I enjoyed seeing Ella get engaged to the new King & her stepfamily getting their dues when they realize that they've lost everything to the rightful owner & future queen.
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July 29, 2022
I loved it!
Cinderella is my favorite fairy tale. I know few retellings actually match the original but I love the concept they all share. This was a very quick read and I enjoyed every page! Jenni James has a way with words that captivates the imagination. I am looking forward to reading more of her books.
Cinderella is my favorite fairy tale. I know few retellings actually match the original but I love the concept they all share. This was a very quick read and I enjoyed every page! Jenni James has a way with words that captivates the imagination. I am looking forward to reading more of her books.
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