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Personal Demon

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When Merle steps into the Rodeo to sample the fine spicy fare and visit his demon brother who happens to be bonded to the owner of the restaurant, he does not expect to fall hard and fast for the adorable red head that waits on him.

Cally notices the incredible attractive man sitting at one of her tables, but he was so out of her league. Little does she know that he'll come to her rescue a couple of times in the course of a day and eventually draw her into his demon world forever.

* Personal Demon is the second adult romance novella in the Demon Barbecue series *

78 pages, Kindle Edition

First published November 16, 2012

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December 29, 2017
This short read has the potential to be a really good paranormal romance. There's one thing that really bothered me all the way through, though - it needs a good run through a grammar and spelling program. I'm not sure if the author's primary language is not english or what really happened here, but there were often words out of order or missing entirely. Sometimes the wrong word was used in place of a similar one. It hurt my overall enjoyment of the book.

That being said, the story itself was not unlike your typical paranormal romance. I joined this series having not read book 1 in this series. I don't think that really impacted my overall enjoyment (see the first paragraph for my real issues). The world itself was interesting and unique, with a bit of a sci fi twist on the average otherworld-type story. Merle is a very serious scientist who also happens to be a demon. His brother's new mate runs a great bbq restaurant and one of the waitresses ends up catching both his and his inner demon's eye.

Turns out, demons don't really do the whole courtship thing. Instead, Merle ends up bonding Cally to him pretty quickly, relatively rescuing her from her life of poverty and protecting her from her potentially abusive ex. There's some smut, some evil trolls, and a HEA. If the author could just edit this book, it would inspire me to continue reading the series.
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