Simon Says

by Rachel McClellan

Michael comes from a family of serial killers. They kill those on The List because “Simon Says” to. However, Michael has had enough and wants out.

But not doing what Simon Says may have severe consequences.

13 pages, Kindle Edition

First published January 1, 2013

About the author

Rachel lives in New Hampshire, a place secretly known for its supernatural creatures. When she's not in her writing lair, she's partying with her husband and four children. Her love for storytelling began as a child when the moon first possessed the night. For when the lights went out, her imagination painted a whole new world. And what a scary world it was…

Reviews

[Stuart Aken · Rating 4 out of 5]

A truly gothic and demonic horror story. The narrator’s voice carries all the bile, disapproval, confidence and uncertainty of the youth well.
This is a short but powerful read and one to produce nightmares if read too close to bedtime in a lonely place.
The conflict of denial against the reality of the situation leaves the reader wondering about the outcome until the very end, when it is seen as inevitable.
One for those who prefer their horror laced with menace rather than bathed in blood.

[Stephanie · Rating 5 out of 5]

If you want a quick read to get your heart pumping, this short story will do just that! You may have to sleep with the light on afterwards for a week, but worth the scare! Creepy good!

[Robert Zimmermann · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a fun and creepy story. Michael and his family are basically slaves to a demons named Simon. They must kill twice a year when he meets with them, or else they'll suffer for not doing as he says. This year, though, Michael doesn't want to go through with it, he doesn't believe Simon's even real. To him, it's all a twisted game.

Is it?

I thought the whole premise was great and I enjoyed how the story unfolded. It's a great short read with a shocking outcome. I do wish to get more detail about a few things, but it's not due to the lack of anything in the story. It's just my curiosity getting the best of me...a sign of great writing, I'd say.

[Gayla · Rating 5 out of 5]

Great story...I still think about it and certainly never want to play the game. For real. Get it..it will stay with you for a long time. What a creepy thrill!

[Don Gubler · Rating 2 out of 5]

Dark

[Tera Comer · Rating 5 out of 5]

Love this book it was strangely creepy more so than I am use to from this author LOL but a good read