I've gotten into long reviews so here it is, even if you don't like fanfictions, parade of the Sun is a masterpiece. It's one of the most gripping, emotionally rich, and brilliantly written stories I’ve ever read, fanfiction or not.
The way Draco is written is absolutely perfect. He’s sharp, witty, bitter, reluctant, and absolutely insufferable. The way his relationship with Hermione is built is a masterclass in slow burn: tense, prickly, frustrating in all the right ways, and so incredibly satisfying when the cracks finally start to show. Which takes a looooong time.
and that's what makes this fic stand out because it’s not really a romance story. The survival storyline and the quest they both go on is what this story is. Eventually it's about two people stuck in the wilderness, forced to rely on each other, not just for practical reasons, but for survival on a deeper level. It’s about tension, grit, and gradual trust. It never feels like the author is just pushing them together. Their relationship unfolds naturally out of necessity (and painfully slowly, in the best way).
The dialogue, especially the interruptions and overlapping speech, threw me off at first, but I eventually thought it was an interesting style choice. It worked. It added a raw and real fewling to their dynamic, like you were in the middle of the fight or the banter with them.
The only thing I would have as an improvement is that I personally would have loved an epilogue. The ending is super beautiful like this, but I just kind of always want to see what happens after. I wanted that final glimpse of them in the real world, together, beyond survival. Still, that’s a personal preference more than a flaw.
This isn’t just a great Dramione fic. It’s a great story, full stop. I loved every second of it. Honestly change the names of the main characters and give it to a publisher.