His Tentacles

by Charlotte Mistry

When John ducks into a bar in an alien city he's only looking for a drink, but it's not every day you get hit on by a tentacle monster. His day is about to get a whole lot more interesting... If he can take it.

Reader advisory: contains explicit gay sex, tentacles, double penetration, and breath play.

4200 words

Genres: Aliens, Science Fiction, M M Romance, Erotica

16 pages, ebook

First published September 12, 2012

About the author

A writer. A dreamer. A hand holding a wicked pen.

Reviews

[Jyanx · Rating 4 out of 5]

Just as sexy, and fun as I hoped it would be. PWP that didn't pretend to be anything more or anything less than what it was. No hea, no true love, just sweet, sweet smut.



I got it for a present.



Do I want to read it?

Am I going to spend $2.99 for 16 pages?

[Trix · Rating 2 out of 5]

Interesting use of an alien species (and one with many, skilled tentacles) but I wasn't awed by the story. Nice enough, just not overly impressive to me. There is not enough information to form a clear picture of John so I can relate or like him more. This is basically a PWP.

The use of the present tense was rather distracting but I managed to ignore it as I progressed. John is some spaceship captain, stopping at a spaceport to do some business and ducks into a place just to escape the heat of the streets. He comes across an alien half human, with his lower part made up of tentacles alone. Our John turns into an idiot, unable to string 2 sentences together but luckily Veran, the friendly octopus, wastes no time to get John alone in a room.

The intercourse includes anal and some breathplay. It was interestingly done, made you understand why John liked it and wanted it.

Not much else to say. It's a handful of pages describing a sex scene with tentacles and breathplay.

[Ayanna · Rating 2 out of 5]

Okay, I'm framing this within the realms of PWP, so yeah.

I'm rather disappointed that there's no anal penetration with said tentacles. It's mostly focused on the breathplay which, don't get me wrong, isn't bad. It's just, you know, not tentaclesex, per se...

And it's pricey.

[Justin · Rating 3 out of 5]

Decent tentacle erotica.

[Niquie · Rating 3 out of 5]

2.5

I like Charlotte Mistry's writing style and world building, I think she does a good job there. However, this like Gay Tentacles from Space reads more like a porno than a story, still it was enjoyable and I really liked the idea of this bar and alien life forms. Charlotte Mistry isn't afraid to make her alien characters not humanlike, but still manages not to make them come off repulsive.

This is short and feels pricey for it's length, but was enjoyable and kinky without being creepy.

[Liz (Bugetta) · Rating 2 out of 5]

I liked another Charlotte Mistry book I read (Gay Tentacles from Space), but this one didn't really work for me. The writing was good again, but this one actually lived up to my expectations of the title of the book I actually liked.

[Cassie Richards · Rating 3 out of 5]

Fun read - erotica, not romance.