She swallowed... licked her lips... and the muscle in his jaw clenched.
Morgan didn't have it easy. Abducted and abused in the worst ways imaginable, she finally gets a chance to leave the horror behind, with the help of a tall dark stranger named Blade. But her past comes back to haunt her, as she knew it would. She is stronger now, determined never to be a victim again, and this time Blade is by her side to protect her. But will it be enough? And will she find the strength to not only exist but to live life again?
"Hunted" starts out magnificently. Chilling atmosphere, fast-paced action and memorable characters set it out on a very promising route - but it quickly goes astray. Sadly, it does not live up to the expectations it builds.
And Morgan, bless her soul, had some serious saliva issues.
It may seem minor, but it really bugged me: Whenever Morgan feels uncomfortable while someone else speaks, she swallows. If she is uncomfortable while she speaks herself, she licks her lips. Over and over and over again. Around page 100 I had to check how many times it had happened. Well, in less than a hundred pages, Morgan swallowed 14 times and licked her lips 9 times. Many more occurrences followed. Blade, on his part, has a spasm in his jaw. Whenever he is pissed, which happens frequently, we are told about the muscle in his jaw being clenched or pulled. These repetitive physical reactions render the characters kind of robotic and end up making it difficult to feel for them as actual people. Which is the book's biggest flaw.
Both the hero and the villain are obsessed with Morgan, believing her to be the most special woman on earth. This humble reader, however, could not figure out why. Morgan was not likeable in any way. I understand that her ordeal left her emotionally scarred. Never expected her to be cheerful or chatty. The problem was not that she had PTSD, but that she *WAS* PTSD. She had barely any personality beyond her traumatic reactions. I never felt I got to know Morgan as a person, broken as she was, and understand what attracted others to her beyond her beauty. In this kind of story, which is basically Morgan's story of suffering and recovery, it was a huge drawback. I needed to care for her, to love her, to root for her. But I never had more sympathy for her than I would for any other victim of abuse. But she is the MC, she can't be just anyone, she has to be SOMEONE.
Other characters fared no better. Not much to like or feel connected with.
And the story... well, it got slow. And repetitive. I'm all for reading what a character thinks and feels - but not when I've already read it a few pages back. It gets tedious. When the story does move on, it is fairly interesting, although does not always make sense (Interpol squads don't just kill people on a whim do they?). Morgan's PTSD is realistically and sensitively written. It is really too bad there wasn't more character development instead of all the swallowing and licking. As it is, "Hunted" is not a bad book, but it could have been so much better.