Read D,and found it to be extremely rich in language. Good use of alliterations(" She might have been my muse,but I was her mouse",one more: It was time to pick a side, or run and hide.)also one specialty I found in the language is use of opposites blending nicely with the flow.eg: "I could make other such tall claims,but I knew that I was falling short."
Secondly a self deprecating humor,makes you laugh,especially shopping experience with D,left me in splits.
The topic chosen was little vague for a 24 yr old,shows his maturity to handle the topics such as destiny,karma,luck etc. The way he learns from his own experiences,in conversation with Destiny.
The flip side I found little monotony setting in later half of the book. Like suddenly drifting from the topic and dont know how to end the book.
All in all could not make out this novel is of a debutante's.
Enjoyed reading,all the best for future books.