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285 pages, Kindle Edition
First published August 28, 2013




My body melted onto his as I forgot what we were talking about. Nothing mattered. Jesse swept the demons away. I wanted him to sweep ours away, the one the two of us created.




















I always to try to be honest with my book reviews. Authors work so hard on these books that I always want to give them credit for their work and that is the only reason I will give this book 3 stars.I was angry, confused, and frustrated for most of the first two books in the series. The name of the series Broken And Screwed fits it perfectly. These people are definitely broken and Tijan totally "SCREWED with my head."
This was a book I couldn't put down but the whole thing was a clusterfuck of craziness.There were times when events happened in the book with no rhyme or reason. It really seemed like the writer was just trying to fill pages. This happened in the first book as well. For instance the characters all went to bar. They walked to the back had a conversation with someone and then someone said oh it's time to go. I didn't get the point of that trip to the bar. This happened in the first book not this one but this theme carried on throughout the series. The whole reason Alex's dad was ignoring her was beyond me. What did she do? The book never really said why she was the target of his madness and if it did I totally over looked it through my confusion. It seemed like this author made the story more complicated then it needed to be. I think the same story could have been told in a simpler, easier to understand method. I'm not sure if this is Tijan's writing style or if it was just in the Broken and Screwed series. I don't really care about grammatical errors or punctuation as long as I can understand the story the author is trying to tell. 90% of how I rate my books is on the story and the way the story was told. This was a good story and I enjoyed some of it but I felt that I had to work too hard to put the pieces together. Some writers have a way of letting those pieces fall into place clearly and in this series I did not feel that this writer was able to do that.
There were things I enjoyed about this book and one of them was Jesse. He really redeemed himself from who he seemed to be in the first book. We found out more of why Jesse was the way he was and I loved seeing him care for Alex in a more loving way then in the first book. Also Hannah, Beth, Tiffany, Kara and Cord were much more likable then Alex's high school friends. I liked Cord a lot and I hope he will have his own book. I would like to see what makes him tick and why he is damaged. The writer also had a way of keeping me hooked into the story even though I was frustrated and unhappy about the way the story was told I kept turning the pages because I had to know what was going to happen to these characters.
Also the final revelation about Ethan's death was a little convoluted. I think a lot of it made sense but some extra things were thrown in that the story didn't really need. I think that's the case with the whole book. The author overdid the story when this would have been a 5 star story without the extra drama. The extra drama really overshadowed the best parts of this story.
Overall I am glad I read both of these books and I enjoyed Jesse and Alex's story. The ending was a little unsatisfying for me. I would have liked to see an epilogue but I assume that there will be more to come in the series. Perhaps centering on another couple but will include cameo's or side stories of Alex and Jesse. If this is the case I would love to read the next in the series. I am invested in seeing this group of broken and screwed up people to the end.




“Ethan’s dead!” she shouted back. “Newsflash, Alex! Your brother’s been dead for two and a half years now. It’s time to move on!”





