The first 3 stories in this book, those by Joshua Millburn are potentially terrific. I really enjoyed them. My only complaint is that he seems to love big complicated words when the more regularly used word would be just as good. It's like he does it out of a deliberate attempt to sound more academic & literary, like a university student who uses big words to try for bigger marks. And I'll be honest - I'm no slouch in the brains department (and a litetature student myself), but I am a regular person & I found myself constantly referring to the dictionary. If this author wants to continue to attract readers he is going to have to tone it down - really, most of the time it was totally unnecessary. If you want to write about real life, use real life, conversational words.
Now to move onto the guest authors. Here is where I got really disappointed. The stories COULD have been quite good but were time & time again let down by editing errors (particularly the final story) such as spelling mistakes, incomplete or missing words, or the wrong version of a word eg. 'they're' & 'their'. To me, that sort of stuff is just laziness. You don't have to hire an editor, you've just got to check your work & your Kindle formatting.
So, all in all, a collection that never quite meets its potential, & it's such a true pity.