I don't know how many stars to give this book. It had the makings of a great mystery with some twists along the way, but it is also a very frustrating, annoying and ultimately disappointing read. The author repeats himself a lot (a lot!) and some of his inventions were a bit too contrived to be believable (there is a journalist who is disgraced (before we meet him) because he ran a campaign to have a convicted man released from jail. According to the author the journalist is the reason the man was released, and that man then killed two children before committing suicide, thanking the journalist in his suicide note - but the court will surely base their judgement on evidence or the lack thereof, not on articles in a random newspaper? Or, when he claims that a minister was elected because the Danish people loved his anti-abortion stand, I found it unbelievable. We were the first country in the world to legalise abortion and it is not an issue that takes up any space in the press at all. That a minister could get votes by opposing abortion is simply ludicrous. To me those examples screamed "I must bend reality to fit my purpose".)
So, let's start with the negatives:
None of the characters are likable or interesting, and it annoyed me that all the adoptions portrayed had unhappy outcomes. All the adoptive children are lonely, miserable and in some way responsible for other people's deaths and all of their adoptive parents seem to not care about the children at all - with only one exception. It's a very bleak outlook on life and adoption.
The book is waaaayy too long. We get long descriptions of every character's childhood and they are so effing boring and should have been either cut or cut down to a very few sentences. The story would have been twice as good by being half as long.
The author kept talking about Destiny and the God of Friendship and Fate and how said Fate keeps laughing at us when we make plans, because all plans are futile, we will follow the road dictated to us. We are told that repeatedly throughout the story and it gets annoying. The author also keeps throwing in sentences like "if I had only stayed, things would have been very different" or "if they had listened, they would have heard Fate digging their graves, but of course they didn't" and "in six months two of the three men would be dead" and it annoyed me that the author kept hinting at stuff to happen instead of making the pages I was on interesting. When you are slogging through a boring read you want stuff to happen now, not getting hints that six months from now something will have happened. Also, he used some weird metaphors from time to time.
It's a decent mystery but the author could learn a trick or two from Agatha Christie or other crime writers. The clues are often too heavy or obvious even though the author thinks he has been very subtle, so you can easily figure out big reveals hundreds of pages before they come. And then the big reveal is repeated a few times, just in case you forgot what you have just read.
Another annoying thing: The author kept insisting that the mystery surrounding Kongslund was of such a scale that it would explode and destroy Kongslund and everyone residing there, plus a minister who was held in such high regard. It would utterly destroy him and his career, and I couldn't help thinking that it wouldn't. It would be on the front pages for a week, but then something else would take the headlines and everyone would forget about it. It's like the author is crying: "The secret is a super morally corrupt plot executed by depraved and cruel people and everyone will be shocked at the big reveal" but the secret can't live up to that label. In fact, the secret would have had more of an impact if the author hadn't kept insisting that I would be shocked and horrified at the big reveal. If he had kept his mouth shut, then maybe I would have.
Most of the story is told by Marie who lives at Kongslund and besides being a lying, annoying, lonely woman who loves destroying other people's lives, she is also malicious and weirdly enough able to describe details she couldn't have known. And that makes it problematic to have her as the storyteller, because we get information that she can't possibly possess. That annoyed me too.
The positives:
I wanted the mystery solved which is why I kept reading. The plot is not bad, it's just dragged on for too long. And despite it not being a page-turner, I never thought of quitting it. So, I guess it is a meh-book that couldn't live up to its potential, but I am glad to have read it. Many things annoyed me, but the overall storyline didn't. I still think it is a decent plot, and in the hands of a better author (sorry, Erik Valeur) it would have been a gripping page-turner with a fresh, new idea. And I still like the book for that. It dared to try something new, and while it didn't always succeed, it deserves praise for its daring and novel approach. And no, I hadn't guessed all the details of the Big Reveal, so the book kept surprising me to the end. And that works in its favour too.