Review: 4.5 stars. It's pretty slow to start, the author is way overly verbose and redundant, and at least 100 pages should've been edited out, but the story and characterizations were great.
Summary:
--Part 1--
Four Jarada ships pursue the Defiant, doling out massive damage--and killing Commander Vaughn's daughter Prynn, who was at the conn. Unable to fire back for political reasons, Vaughn makes a last ditch decision to drop out of warp while cloaked, leaving the Jarada searching aimlessly and giving them time to repair.
The USS Mjolnir docks 3 weeks earlier than expected, and Admiral Akaar asks Kira to come aboard and meet with him, where he asks endless questions about the Europani on Bajor, the Cardassian aid efforts, and her command of DS9. He also says the Mjolnir is not staying at DS9 while the Defiant heads to the Gamma Quadrant, and she realizes the Federation is headed for Bajor.
First Minister Shakaar receives notification from Ghemor, the head of the provisional Cardassian government, that the Cardassians want to normalize diplomatic relations with Bajor.
Bashir tells Vaughn that his daughter Prynn will make a full recovery in a few days. He is afraid she will hate him even more because of the accident; he made her life hell in an incident 7 years ago.
Taran'atar asks Kira to train in a holosuite program he concocted; she reluctantly agrees, but cannot complete the training. She thanks him for the custom knife he made her at least.
Vaughn visits Prynn while she convalesces in her quarters. He says he's sorry for everything, and that even though she hates him, if she wants to travel to the Gamma Quadrant, she has to stop acting like it as she's undermining his authority. He apologizes for what happened to her mother, and she agrees to work with him--though inside she will never forgive him.
--Part 2--
The Defiant's repairs are behind schedule for their 3 month mission to the Gamma Quadrant, and it might have to be pushed back. Vaughn asks Taran'atar if he's ever been to any of the sections they'll be traveling to; he says that he has, and that they are unremarkable.
It has been 2 months since Jake disappeared and no one knows what happened to him. The Starfleet Corps of Engineers completely decontaminated Europa Nova in less than a month, and Gul Macet, cousin of Gul Dukat, arrives at DS9 on the Trager to help relocate the refugees off of Bajor. He says Admiral Akaar sent him, though Kira wasn't informed.
Upon arriving at DS9, Akaar immediately visits Vaughn in his quarters, where they share a dinner. Afterwards, Akaar tells Vaughn he's reassigning Prynn to another ship, since a commander shouldn't have his family on his crew; Vaughn desperately please for him not to, seeing this as his last chance to reconnect with his daughter. Akaar agrees to let her stay, hoping neither of them regret it later.
Nog gives Kassidy a surprise visit at her new house on Bajor, before he's due to ship out on the Defiant. He tells her that he's sure Jake will be back, even though he has no evidence, and not to worry. Kassidy believes him and feels just a little bit better.
Shar's mom Zhavey is aboard the station and he feels obligated to have dinner with her before leaving on the 3 month mission. When he enters her quarters, his 3 bondmates are also there waiting, and he feels ambushed; he is so angry he almost attacks Zhavey. They plead with him to return to Andor to finish their shelthreth, but he won't concede, feeling that the arranged partnerships in Andorian culture are not going to save his homeworld. As he's boarding the Defiant, Thriss pleads with him to come back to Andor; he finally concedes, but says it will be when he gets back.
With Dax as his XO, Bashir in medical, Bowers at tactical, Nog in engineering, ch'Thane at the science console, and his daughter Tenmei at the helm, Vaughn takes the Defiant into the wormhole.
--Part 3--
Prylar Eivos visits Kassidy, bringing her a beautiful figurine unearthed at B'hala in memory of Jake. He also mentions that there is a good deal of unrest in the Vedek Assembly due to the translated Ohalu texts that Kira uploaded.
6 days into their mission, the Defiant receives a subspace transmission from the Vahni system inviting them to their world. It is an immensely beautiful planet; the Vahni speak with gestures and color changes in their skin. Vaughn is about to beam back to Defiant to continue on with their mission when there is a great quake, and the tower he's on, with a Vahni named Ventu, collapses. Vaughn finds Bowers and Roness in the rubble, and they beam aboard the Defiant, who says they were hit by an unknown something.
The Vahni moon exploded. The Defiant and its shuttle set out to vaporize the bigger hunks of lunar debris, hoping to avert a nuclear winter on the planet. Ezri's shuttle gets hit taking out one of the last large chunks entering the atmosphere; she is knocked unconscious. She awakes aboard the Defiant, which tractored her shuttle before it hit the ground. Bashir says she will be OK, but he doesn't tell her that the pilot, Gerda Roness, has died before Dax passes out again.
The Defiant crew attends a memorial service for those lost. The Vahni say that for hundreds of years, an unidentifiable energy pulse has been passing through their system, continually growing stronger and occurring at more frequent intervals. If not for the moon, the planet itself would have been destroyed.
Kira has another meeting with Akaar, and after more pointed question from him about Bajor's rehabilitation, she finally snaps. He tells her the questions are to gauge Bajor's readiness to enter the Federation, and that there will be a delegation coming to DS9 shortly to decide it's fate.
Taran'atar gets caught shrouding in a school, then again later at Quark's. This frightens the observees, but Ro says he has not committed a crime.
The Defiant traces the source of the pulse to another star system, where seemingly all of the planets have been turned to rubble. Upon closer inspection, they find a lone class M planet that seems to be the source of the blast. They send a probe through the dense atmosphere, but lose contact before it transmits any data. When they try to move Defiant closer, a discharge from the clouds hits the ship. They find an opening in the clouds and send a probe through.
Kira meets with Ro, who tells her about Taran'atar. Kira tells her about the Federation delegation coming to vote on Bajor's admittance, and Ro tells her that she and Akaar don't get along--but that she'll do her job the best she can.
The probe finds industrial ruins on the planet, along with an unknown energy source that Nog and Shar determine will unleash again in 3.5 days. Vaughn, Prynn, and ch'Thane harrowingly take a shuttle to the planet's surface to try and stop the pulse at its source, leaving Dax in charge of the Defiant.
Kira tracks down Taran'atar in the holodeck, who is shockingly doing calculus. He explains what happened at Quark's and, sympathetic, she says he should stop shrouding so people get used to seeing him.
Nog's best theory only gives them a 3% chance to deflect the pulse with deflector shields. The engineering console blinks out right around the time Bowers reports that they found a small hull breach where the Defiant was hit by the energy blast.
Ro realizes DS9 is starting to feel like home, and is worried that if Bajor joins the Federation, the Bajoran militia will be incorporated into Starfleet and they'll arrest her.
The shuttle is suddenly pummeled by multiple bursts of energy, ripping open a hole in the roof. A gray wisp reaches in and touches Shar, who screams in anguish just before they crash.
In one of Defiant's Jeffries tubes, they find a small glob of gray goo that seems to carry the same electrical charge as the pulse and clouds. Ezri asks Bashir to study it, but they can't get a lock on it to beam it to sickbay. It moves, making contact with Ezri and she lapses into a coma.
Treir, Quark's new dabo girl, tells him that she hired Hetik to be a dabo boy, thinking the variety would draw in new customers. Quark is furious and tells her to fire him.
Vaughn, Prynn, and Shar are banged up--Shar has a broken leg--but they're still alive, thanks to Prynn pulling off an emergency maneuver called the "Sulu Shuttle Stunt" right before they crashed. Prynn says she might be able to salvage the shuttle's transporter to beam them closer to the energy source. Vaughn tells her to work on that, but he's going to try and walk to the pulse, which could be 50-250km away.
Ezri wakes up after several hours. Before Bashir puts her back to sleep with a hypo, she says the blob was a being and that she thinks it took her to another universe. After running some tests, they find that while it's not in another universe, it does exist partly in subspace. They conclude that the pulse might similarly extend to other domains of the universe.
Quark returns to the bar to find Hetik running the dabo table. He plans to fire both he and Treir, but she makes a wager with him to try Hetik out for a week and he agrees. After he closes the bar, Ro hits him up and they talk for hours; he even walks her back to her quarters (where she tells him to stop wearing his cologne).
Vaughn walks all day and makes it about 50km. It's dark, but scans reveal a dead city ahead. He's just outside communication range, but Prynn says she has had some success with the transporter.
Quark finds his bar more packed than it has been in some time, thanks to Hetik on the dabo table. Treir flirtatiously asks to be a junior partner, but Quark turns her down--though he says perhaps a merger is in order. Ro sees him flirting with Treir and seemingly gets jealous.
Vaughn's scans of the city reveal it has been dead for 200 years, all the humanoid inhabitants seemingly committing mass suicide--whereas the other cities they'd flown over had died in myriad other ways, like fire, panic, war. Suddenly, Vaughn sees a 50 year old man in a Starfleet uniform beckoning him down the street. He follows him, but the trail abruptly ends. His tricorder confirms that it was exactly who he thought it was: John Harriman from the USS Enterprise.
Vaughn comes to a dark tower that seems to be identical to the one in the Vahni city. At the top of the tower, he sees Ventu again. He tries to talk to him, but the tower collapses, again, and Ventu is once again killed.
Kira meets with Minister Shakaar upon his arrival, and is happy to find that he is still willing to speak with her even though she's been Attainted, and even asks her opinion on who should be the next kai.
Ezri touches the gray goo and enters a coma again, but this time her vitals remain stable for a while. Eventually they drop off and Bashir pulls her back out.
Vaughn sees his daughter Prynn lying near-dead from the explosion on the Defiant again. He knows it's not real, but feels the sorrow again, all the same. He continues on and sees the energy clouds touch down to the ground like a tornado; he realizes they are reorganizing matter into people and places and events from his past. He soldiers on and eventually makes it to a complex with a circle of darkness.
Somehow Prynn experiences herself lying injured on the Defiant the same way her father did, making her feel sorry for him. She gets the transporter working, but the interference is too great to teleport very far, though she has some ideas for workarounds. Shar asks what happened between her and Vaughn, and she says he sent her mom on a mission that led to her death. Shar asks if it was the right decision, and she is shocked, never having thought of it that way.
Vaughn sees a vision of his mother, on the night she told him she was dying of a disease. He realizes he feels abandonment for his mom the same way Prynn does. He thinks about throwing himself into the camp fire, but ultimately vows to finish the mission so as never to abandon his daughter again.
Dax senses the other beings, but cannot communicate with them. However, she can see visions of the away team on the planet, as well as the Prentara, those who has populated the planet before. They relied heavily on virtual reality, and somehow they opened up a rift into another universe called the thoughtscape, which they integrated into their VR. However, the thoughtscape ended up being the minds of living beings called the Inamuri. The pulses are the Inamuri trying to invade our universe, the clouds the interface the Prentara used to tap into the thoughtscape. With this info, Nog gets to work on developing explosive devices similar to the Jem'Hadar Houdini mines that will be capable of exploding in our space and subspace, hopefully sealing the pulse gateway.
Vaughn makes it to the center of the complex and finds a singularity 100 meters across. His scans indicate the next pulse will trigger in 4 hours.
Prynn and Shar get both transporters working, but just as they're about to "skip transport" to the site of the pulse, a probe lands. Inside is a padd detailing the plans devised the Defiant, along with the subspace bombs. Prynn programs the probe to find Vaughn, but the power cell was damaged by an energy blast from the clouds. She replaces it with a cell from one of the transporters and sends it off, leaving them with only one working transporter again.
Quark finally gets a chance to apologize to Ro for flirting with Treir, and his earnest pleas eventually win her over. She finally tells him that the summit he's been catering has been about Bajor entering the Federation, and he's devastated, since they have a no-money economy. She commiserates that she is unsure about her future as well, since Starfleet might not take her back.
The probe finds Vaughn, who immediately gets to work setting the charges. Suddenly, he realizes the mists are part of the interface with Inamuri, and he gets a surge of understanding: the energy clouds squeezing through such a small interface are causing the pulse. The Inamuri are trying to use the clouds to reorganize the matter of this world into a form that they can inhabit. The Inamuri is a single consciousness, and it was only trying to establish contact with the Prentara, not intentionally trying to destroy them. Vaughn cannot bear to condemn it to a life of loneliness, so he disarms some of the mines so the interface will be opened wider instead of destroyed, allowing the Inamuri to come through. He feels terrible for abandoning Prynn yet again, but with only seconds left before the detonation, Vaugn throws himself into the vortex.
Shakaar makes an announcement on the Bajoran news net, not just to announce the summit, but to say that Bajor's petition for Federation membership has been approved. Bajor will be admitted in 6 weeks.
--Part 4--
Kira goes to Akaar's quarters and asks why he has given her such a hard time during his time there. Surprisingly, he says he was judging her personally, not as a Bajoran representative, and that his vote was up grant her a captaincy and keep her in charge of DS9 when Bajor enters the Federation. He does not have a similarly high opinion of Ro, and Kira says she deserves another chance.
Gray clouds surge violently and cover the entire planet, but the energy pulse appears to be gone. 2 holes open and the Defiant detects 3 life signs.
Quark waits for Ro after closing up shop. He thanks her for buying him a drink earlier, and walks her give He asks if she will go out with him, and she says "yes."
Prynn wakes up and when she realizes she's in sickbay, she cries, mourning the loss of her father. Bashir says Vaughn will be just fine.
The thoughtscape protected Vaughn when he jumped into the vortex, and he's perfectly well--aside from the depression he feels from opening all his emotional wounds back up. He tells Dax to contact the Federation and the Vahni, as he promised the Inamuri that he would make sure it's never alone again. When he returns to his quarters, Prynn comes to visit; they embrace and cry and tell each other they're sorry and that they need each other.