By all accounts – this is a title I should have loved: the synopsis of a WWII era story told from the POV of a young woman in England doing her all to survive and bring her family through unscathed had plenty of promise.
I love my historic romances, and have truly enjoyed the several titles I have read dealing with WWI and WWII Europe, with perspectives imagined and real throughout the conflicts. I had hoped that Lily Baxter would create a character that, despite her relocation to the countryside for safety would have more to say about her own destiny.
Sadly, what emerged was a writer getting in the way of her story: to everyone’s detriment. Too much tell, little show, overuse of clichés and a wholly passive voice with little character development had me unconvinced and uninterested in the story early on. But I kept reading, hoping that Ginnie would start to be more proactive rather than wholly reactive, lacking in any real evidence of determination. It was harder still to believe the relationship as her passivity made her as appealing as milquetoast, with few to little traits to engender emotional reactions: good or bad.
Truly, this was not the book for me, and I gave up at about 70% with no significant events encouraging me to read on. I’m usually not one to not complete a book, but it was impossible to not want to question choices of word use, red-pen the multitude of clichés and highlight large swathes of text with a SHOW not tell note. Frustrated and more than a bit disappointed, I put the title aside without finishing or rating.
The author, however, shows some promise in her ability to describe a scene and build the visual imagery, I just felt the disconnect between the author and character that left the development of them in the realm of “this is the character and she has this, this and that trait’, rather than proving her traits and giving a more emotionally available active character rather than the reactive one that is here.
I received an eArc copy of the title from the publisher for purpose of honest review for The Jeep Diva. I was not compensated for this review: all conclusions are my own responsibility.