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My Alpha, My Hero
I was hated in the pack, the reason unknown since as far back as I could remember I never knew what it was like to be loved. To be honest I wouldn't have thought it existed if it hadn't been for me watching as couples mated over the years, it was both painful and amazing to watch.
I didn't think I would ever find a mate which was what made it painful.
Anyway, I'm getting off track, but to put it both crudely and bluntly my family hated me. Again I didn't know why, since I was sure I hadn't done anything to offend them in such a way, but I cannot remember. I was treated worse than a slave, the reason being that it was my pack, my family, my parents who were treating me in such a way and not some random person I was taking orders from.
Nothing changed for me when my brother became the next Alpha. He was an incompetent Alpha and in many ways I was more capable than he was.
I could see he was running the pack into the ground it was seemingly oblivious to everyone else. It wouldn't be long until they had to align themselves to another pack, give over control to another Alpha due to having no other choice. It didn't bother me; I didn't have that long left anyway.
Shifting back into my human form I pulled on my shorts hastily, since the wolf hadn't decided to try and run there was no point in staying in wolf form. Both Ryan and Paul were behind me in case anything happened unexpectedly anyway, so if they made a move to attack I would just give them the go-ahead to fight back with the intent to kill. So with that I walked into the snow-covered clearing with an annoyed and furious expression on my face, intending to get this over with as quickly as possible.
"Who are you and what are you doing here?" I snapped coldly as I walked out, my eyes widening when I took note of the pure white female wolf which I was greeted with. She was clearly startled from my tone as she backed herself as far as was possible against the tree behind her, the whimpering falling from her muzzle making my heart clench for some reason I didn't understand.
Frowning, I soon found my emerald eyes locked onto her gorgeous amber ones and with that I knew exactly what had happened. The pull in my chest, the delicious scent she seemed to have which was temping enough to make my mouth water...this rare colored female was my mate, and I couldn't have been happier.
I had always both wished for as well as despised the idea of having a mate, a number of reasons behind it. I wished for the closeness, the feeling of love which would surely follow but I also hated how whipped it seemed to make a wolf. Both Ryan and Paul had imprinted and mated for life, it was literally all that was on their minds whenever we were in wolf form after all. You see we could only have a mind link while in wolf form, it was both a blessing and an annoyance that while we were in human form they had the privacy of their thoughts, yet if there was a threat is was an inconvenience they couldn't communicate.
I was brought back to the present when my mate's whimpers grew louder with the sound of Pauls and Ryan's growls, my face softening dramatically as I growled lowly in my throat. I made sure not to raise it loud enough for her to hear, I didn't want to startle her even more since it already pained me to see the look of fear in her eyes.
My pack mates immediately shut up with their growling, but it seemed to do little to calm my mate's distress as she continued to whimper softly. It broke my knowing that she feared me.
I didn't think I would ever find a mate which was what made it painful.
Anyway, I'm getting off track, but to put it both crudely and bluntly my family hated me. Again I didn't know why, since I was sure I hadn't done anything to offend them in such a way, but I cannot remember. I was treated worse than a slave, the reason being that it was my pack, my family, my parents who were treating me in such a way and not some random person I was taking orders from.
Nothing changed for me when my brother became the next Alpha. He was an incompetent Alpha and in many ways I was more capable than he was.
I could see he was running the pack into the ground it was seemingly oblivious to everyone else. It wouldn't be long until they had to align themselves to another pack, give over control to another Alpha due to having no other choice. It didn't bother me; I didn't have that long left anyway.
Shifting back into my human form I pulled on my shorts hastily, since the wolf hadn't decided to try and run there was no point in staying in wolf form. Both Ryan and Paul were behind me in case anything happened unexpectedly anyway, so if they made a move to attack I would just give them the go-ahead to fight back with the intent to kill. So with that I walked into the snow-covered clearing with an annoyed and furious expression on my face, intending to get this over with as quickly as possible.
"Who are you and what are you doing here?" I snapped coldly as I walked out, my eyes widening when I took note of the pure white female wolf which I was greeted with. She was clearly startled from my tone as she backed herself as far as was possible against the tree behind her, the whimpering falling from her muzzle making my heart clench for some reason I didn't understand.
Frowning, I soon found my emerald eyes locked onto her gorgeous amber ones and with that I knew exactly what had happened. The pull in my chest, the delicious scent she seemed to have which was temping enough to make my mouth water...this rare colored female was my mate, and I couldn't have been happier.
I had always both wished for as well as despised the idea of having a mate, a number of reasons behind it. I wished for the closeness, the feeling of love which would surely follow but I also hated how whipped it seemed to make a wolf. Both Ryan and Paul had imprinted and mated for life, it was literally all that was on their minds whenever we were in wolf form after all. You see we could only have a mind link while in wolf form, it was both a blessing and an annoyance that while we were in human form they had the privacy of their thoughts, yet if there was a threat is was an inconvenience they couldn't communicate.
I was brought back to the present when my mate's whimpers grew louder with the sound of Pauls and Ryan's growls, my face softening dramatically as I growled lowly in my throat. I made sure not to raise it loud enough for her to hear, I didn't want to startle her even more since it already pained me to see the look of fear in her eyes.
My pack mates immediately shut up with their growling, but it seemed to do little to calm my mate's distress as she continued to whimper softly. It broke my knowing that she feared me.
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Published June 4, 2023
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November 5, 2024
Cute story… lots of spelling errors and plot holes. How could they not communicate in human form at the beginning but they could later on? How could a toddler shift when it was said shifting was the sign of adulthood and happened (normally) a bit before 16? What happened with the bratty kids? Last we saw them they cowered from the fmc without a real resolution.
I like the idea of the story, but overall it left a lot to be desired.
I like the idea of the story, but overall it left a lot to be desired.
July 23, 2023
Good story, terrible writing
The storyline itself had so much potential, but I really struggled with the incredible amount of spelling mistakes and incorrect words, whilst the story ended happily it also didn't have much of a climactic end.
The storyline itself had so much potential, but I really struggled with the incredible amount of spelling mistakes and incorrect words, whilst the story ended happily it also didn't have much of a climactic end.
November 25, 2024
Wanted to enjoy this one but so many errors that it made it impossible
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