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357 pages, Paperback
First published August 6, 2013
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The story itself was intense, which is why I had a hard time not finishing it; I did want to see how it ended.
Brent is an ex-con, don't worry, you won't forget that since they remind us every 5 seconds. At age 16 he killed his abusive father who had beaten his little brother into unconsciousness. He hit him over the head with a bottle and his dad died. You're going to tell me a town of a couple hundred people sneer and turn away now that he's out because he had a bad lawyer and got 20 to life?! They knew those boys were being abused and they knew he'd done it in defense of his brother. All of that town is stupid. So now Brent is out and has made a name for himself as an amazing artist. He's worth a ton of money. Yet the town can't ever see him as anything but a killer.
Anna's dad went to prison for embezzling a million bucks. He maintained his innocence, but did his time and got out. Then he got another job and worked it, and worked it well for 4 years. The company he worked for looked like they were setting him up for embezzling $60 mil. He knew that no one would ever believe him so he sent hid the money and made copies of everything and got the heck out of dodge. But the company figured it out before he'd even left sight of the building. He'd mailed the papers but was killed in the process.
Anna is one of my problems with this book. Look I am under no illusions that I would magically turn into Rambo (Rambette? Rambina?) if I were caught up in this type of scary situation. BUT if I were sent by my dad to the one man he trusted, the one man who could help, and that man was doing everything possible to avoid jail again, you better believe I'd take it seriously and not be in denial about how dangerous it was. I would not try to go back home. I would not try to go to my mom's house, my grandmother's house, my dad's house, I would not do anything but what he told me. Seriously.
Brent is in great shape. But he's not a Navy SEAL or anything, so I'm not sure what his skills are at avoiding professional mercenaries. That being said, his brother is former Special Forces, his soon to be sister-in-law is a Mountie and her dad is the Director of the Mounties. I like that Brent went to them, but I hate that he ran off and tried to do it alone.
The ending was good, the plot was good, but I'm glad this series ended at 2 books. I don't want to read another. That being said, I've been recommended this author's books so many times from people I trust, that I'm wondering if her other series would work for me.
This book has excitement and intensity, and a good plot. I just didn't like the characters all that much. It's much more a Romantic Thriller than a Romantic Suspense (I know that I made up a genre, but it feels more accurate here). I'll be giving this author another chance, but I don't think this series worked for me.
***I got the book via Kindle Unlimited.
Anna, I’m in big trouble. But I didn’t do anything wrong, I swear it.... I’m on my way to the FBI offices, but they’re too close. I’m never going to make it. They’re gonna kill me. They’re going to be looking for their money. I mailed you the printouts, but they don’t know where I sent it. You know. Take the information to the feds.”
She squeezed her eyes shut and held the phone so tight it was a wonder the casing didn’t crack. What had he been involved in? Something illegal?
“You need to get out of there until things quiet down.” The fine hairs on the nape of her neck stood upright. “Dammit, I’ve done it again.” Please, no, Papa. “I love you. And I’m sorry for everything. There’s only one person I trust besides you, you know that, right? Go to him, tonight. Tell him I’m cashing in those promises we made one another.”
The two of them stood close in the darkness. Too close. The hollows of her collarbone and graceful line of her neck called to something primitive inside him, and he had to force himself not to touch. She’d grown from the pretty teen he’d seen in photographs, into a pretty woman—maybe even beautiful. But her oval face was punctuated by that stubborn jaw that would have told him she’d be trouble even if she hadn’t landed in his lap in the middle of the night. Harsh gasps made her breasts stretch the thin fabric of her shirt, but as her expression once again morphed into fear, he worked very hard not to notice.
Fear wasn’t the same as weakness. Everyone in jail was intimately acquainted with the difference.
“Look.” He held his hands aloft and stepped back. “You can leave any time you want. I don’t want you here any more than you want to be here, but…” Her bottom lip stuck out just enough to set off a chain reaction in his body that ended at his dick. Off limits, partner. “Your dad was the only friend I had in prison and more like a father than my own.”