Madeline is a kind and good person, but she was often too preachy and pushy. It was almost unbelievable the way she preached at every opportunity. If there’s such a description as too spiritual or holy, it would fit her well. Yes, she is deeply concerned for Justain and her father, but there is no need to preach at every opportunity, especially when the timing isn’t right! Truthfully speaking, if I were Justain, I would have fled far away from her. Her preachiness got on my nerves many times.
I didn’t really like the imbalance and wide difference between the two main characters. If I were to look at it from a realistic point of view, it is impossible for Madeline to have such an angelic character and for Justain to have such a heathenish/brutish character. Surely Madeline must make mistakes sometimes and Justain can’t be pure evil since he isn’t the villain in the story. Even the villains weren’t painted in such a bad light as often as Justain was! I couldn’t believe how nearly every time something wrong happened, it would be Justain’s fault. No wonder the poor guy was weighted down by guilt! Madeline is no saint and her “holy” martyr attitude was annoying. It was unfair that she could get away with her anger and stubbornness while it was always a different story for Justain. Take for example their marriage. The marriage isn’t Justain’s fault, although I don’t deny that he gained from it, and yet Madeline was terribly disappointed with her marriage. If anything, she should be disappointed with her aunt for the meddling that resulted with the marriage! That was just one of the many situations that frankly, cheesed me off.
The never ending tension was unbearable throughout the book. It seemed that for every one step Madeline and Justain took forward in their relationship, they went back 10 steps. I enjoyed the action in the story, but nearly every page was filled with relationship problems. It got really old and tiring after awhile, especially when every problem was the fault of one person.
There is no specific rising action or climaxing event. There was something big that took place very near the end and the pages with that were my favorites. It was a welcomed break from the usual drama. I would have preferred more variety in the story, though. By the end of the book, I was glad to have finished reading it. I didn’t end up liking Madeline (her character was a bit too extreme for me to handle and sometimes moderation is good) but I was glad the ending was satisfactory.
Conclusion: I enjoy reading stories in the regency era. The culture, traditions, people, and basically everything is so different and interesting. I didn’t like the main character and some of the events were heavily saturated with bias, but it was still an interesting read. The little drama that did not involve the relationship between Madeline and Justain was intriguing. Madeline’s Protector would have been a captivating read for me had there been more balance, but at least the story isn’t all bad.
Disclosure of Material Connection: Special thanks to Tyora Moody for sending me a review copy. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255: “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”