The Chosen One is a definite improvement over The Last Testament, the first book in the Maggie Castelo series, but it still falls short of being truly satisfying.
The pacing is better, the plot is more focused, and the narrative flows more smoothly this time. In fact, the storytelling style often reminded me of Brad Meltzer, short chapters, rapid shifts, and a sense of urgency driven by political and historical intrigue. Unfortunately, while the resemblance is noticeable, the execution doesn’t quite reach that level of polish or impact.
Maggie Castelo is more confident here as a protagonist, and the stakes feel higher. The conspiracy is clearer, and the novel spends less time drowning the reader in exposition. That said, the book leans heavily on momentum to carry it forward, and once you start questioning the logic behind certain events, cracks begin to show.
The biggest disappointment is the climax. After all the buildup and the suggestion of a meticulously planned grand scheme, the resolution feels surprisingly flimsy. It’s hard to believe that a mastermind capable of orchestrating such an elaborate conspiracy wouldn’t anticipate such an obvious and easily exploitable weakness. The ending undermines the intelligence of the antagonist and, by extension, the entire plot.
There are also several logical loopholes that go unaddressed, especially in the final stretch. Instead of feeling clever or inevitable, the conclusion feels rushed, as if the story simply needed to end rather than resolve itself organically.
Still, The Chosen One is more readable and engaging than its predecessor, and it shows that Sam Bourne was refining his approach. It just doesn’t fully deliver on its ambition.
Rating: 2.5/5
Better than The Last Testament, with improved pacing and clarity, but let down by a weak climax and too many unanswered questions.