Edited by Ben Estes and Alan Felsenthal. Introduction by Geof Hewitt.
Alfred Starr Hamilton (1914-2005) was an American poet from Montclair, New Jersey. Though Hamilton wrote thousands of poems during his lifetime, only a small percentage of them ever found their way into print. His poems appeared in small poetry journals during the '60s, '70s and '80s; two chapbooks, The Big Parade and Sphinx; and one full-length collection, The Poems of Alfred Starr Hamilton, published by The Jargon Society in 1970. In this new volume, Ben Estes and Alan Felsenthal present a collection of Hamilton's poems from these publications, along with many of Hamilton's poems that were previously considered lost and poems from posthumously found notebooks.
"Hamilton is the author of spare, wry, slightly surreal poems that have, so far as I can see, no real equivalent in American English."—Ron Silliman
"Alfred Starr Hamilton 'wrote to the governor of poetry / And simply signed [his] own name.' Consider this collection—assembled by two very dedicated allographers—an essential expansion on said letter. People who've encountered Hamilton's work previously will be glad for the chance to see familiar poems alongside many marvelous new ones. And how I envy first-time readers of this most generous and genuine American writer."—Graham Foust
"It is a hidden world, a hushabye place that Alfred Starr Hamilton occupies, a secluded place where he is free to summon daffodils and stars, chimes and angels, thread and old-fashioned spoons. There is Hungarian damage, blue revolutionary stars, a sedge hammer (which is not a typo). He is obsessively drawn to fine metals—bronze, silver and gold. He would be golden, but can never grasp the elusive sad: 'One cloud, one day / Came as a shadow in my life / And then left, and came back again; and stayed' like "Anything Remembered" which is the title of that poem. He is too removed to see things any other way but his own. It is a silver peepshow in the wonderbush, and there is always a moon to scrape from the bottom of his view."—C. D. Wright
"We are living in the Badlands. Dorothy's ruby-slippers would get you across the Deadly Desert. So will these poems."—Jonathan Williams
Generally, I can wall-to-wall read a poetry collection, no problem. For this one, I needed a break. Hamilton's style is so repetitive and the poems so similar that they begin to wear a reader down. He even takes one of my favorite poetic techniques -- anaphora -- and beats it to death.
And what would that death look like? A bit like Dr. Seuss (paramour of Fox "News"), I fear. To the point where you can simply read the end of lines and entirely skip the beginnings. Example:
Dark Continent
What do you know of its players What do you know of its populations What do you know of this amber theatre What do you know of its wintry cities What do you know of St. Johns What do you know of New York What do you know of its glamour What do you know of its short aptitudes What do you know of city lights What do you know of its urge What do you know of its fast bubbles on the surface What do you know of its orange contempt
That times 190 pp. (no, not all, but many) takes its toll. What intrigues me about the poem, though, is the last line and how it anticipates the years 2016-2020, wherein a lot of orange contempt from New York was endured. How did Hamilton, who died in 2005, anticipate this?
Here Hamilton mixes things up a bit:
Xerxes
it was all so Xerxes the other night the path they travelled was so slender the bridge they were crossing was being torn asunder by the storm, and I in my bonnet was sound asleep, and the bully whip of the winds and the storm lashed the troops of Xerxes, and Xerxes in his rage ordered the river itself to be lashed back, and the river responded, and the storm abated, and all was as calm as ever, and the engineers returned to their work
Interesting. Different. In small doses, maybe a lot of fun for SOME poetry readers. Ones with fond memories of green eggs and ham.
Weird in so many ways, this compendium of A. S. Hamilton's mostly short, irreal poems is playful, enigmatic and jaw-droppingly fresh. A true outsider, Hamilton wrote prodigiously but published very little. An earlier collection by Jargon Society is long-out-of-print, so we are lucky to have this new edition from The Song Cave. Here's a poem that could have been written by William Carlos Williams, but Williams lacks the mystical power of association that is the hallmark of Hamilton's brilliant, illuminated lyrics:
THINK THIS OVER
just before you left
just before you shouldered a gun
just before you left
the thunder there is in the grass
It feels like I'm conversing with a holy man. Subjects seem simple, but where he takes them is surprising, enchanting, poetry of the sublime. You will not find these poems in anthologies, but you should, you really should. Tell the anthologists: time to make some corrections to the history of poetry.
Reading this book I am reminded what a consolation poetry is. The world is often hard or forbidding, yet there are other worlds we can make for ourselves or escape to in poetry.
Hamilton allowed himself to be free, to be unique, independent of any outside gaze. Really, simply to be happy and to allow himself to be enchanted by ordinary things like birds and moons and wheat. The poems are short and structured simply; they hop from stone to stone.
His enchantment is contagious and inspiring. It’s a strength to allow yourself so much enjoyment without care for the mood to the times, general trends, the exclusive societies of writers, academia or anything really except your own apprehension of the world and experience.
They Are the Scarlet Birds
Why, they are the birds That wanted to come to life and sing again That only the poets knew of
Why, they are the scarlet birds that everyone said Were too scarlet ever to be remembered again
Why, these are the places to be remembered, And whenever these birds are to be remembered again, Singing
Why, they are the scarlet birds and the bright flowers No longer with us
But these are the empty places remembered And shall be no more birds singing
But they’ll sing in your hearts, poets, They’ll sing ever again
They are the scarlet birds, and the bright flowers, That ever came to be, and to sing again
I've had a long relationship with the work of Alfred Starr Hamilton, and even tried to look him up via phonebook and internet at one point. His poems are compulsive, but as they forge through the compulsions, they somehow sidestep that trajectory and make discoveries. These strange, get-under-your-skin poems are not quite like anything else:
Ride
for this has been our last bequest how little do you know of our old fashioned silver spoons how little do you know of the snowflake in the jar how little do you know of the ride in the valley how little do you know of the thread that rides through and through our old fashioned silver spoons how little do you know of our painstaking over the years how little do you know of the donkey on the end of a spoon happily, how little do you know of preserving our sedge we are only bled and gone
There is not so much needed to say. This is a very mysterious book alive with shy beauties and awkwardly new-born ways of seeing As Ben Estes and Alan Felsenthal say in their introduction:
"prepare to enter a house of metaphor, where life is a poem and in it there is always more to be discovered. Hamilton's is an extremely gentle language cultured in loneliness, the product of encountering a world while staying away from it. His poem is miraculous in its humility, inviting as ever, and filled with warmth and concern for its readers."
Here are two poems:
VINELIKE
even a green leaf turned and toiled
and said to the twig that turned to the trunk
at length that pulled at the living roots of the matter that pulled and toiled to the end of its vinelike travels. *
SUNBURST
I was urged I couldn't say no I didn't say no It was stronger than myself I was going to do what girls do I was going to be a beautiful nurse I flowed with the sunburst on the classroom window I tied a ribbon in my long brown hair I began my life's ambition I began my soul.
Are you swept daily at a Looking Glass? Have you your books at a bookshelf That stared back at you?, That you came upon A stairway that led three flights upstairs Are you contented if you ever could be? Are you a member of a dark room?, swept daily
A dizzying yet melancholic collection of poems. Stripped of reality and full of wordplay and repetition. Short and sweet poems that will take you miles away.
Small, strange, quiet, generous poems with the whimsy and musicality of song lyrics for an imagined art college rock band. Some poems seem almost linked as Hamilton explores recurring images (daffodils, parlors, moons, stars, clouds, colors, mirrors, months, and so on) - there is a hermetic but not sealed quality to the poems, a distinctive world that you enter like a peaceful room or a mysterious clearing in the woods.
A very nice collection of short poems by a not-so-well known poet. The breadth of topics is quite impressive, as are the different styles of poems. Some of the poems are rather mystical (reminding me of Rumi); others playful (almost as silly as Dr. Seuss). But pretty much all are easy "to get" and appreciate, unlike much of modern poetry which seems to be deliberately obtuse.
These poems are sweet, innocent, magical, and dreamlike. Each poem is a play on the sound, rhythm, rhyming, and repetition of words. It really sounds like the author, Alfred Starr Hamilton, is playing with words like a child. The actual meaning or story of each poem often got lost in this playfulness. Many times, it seemed like the author was just riffing impromptu without purpose or intent. I liked this because some poems would meander around a theme slowly and then a quick turn of phrase would happen. Hamilton was a recluse and self-described simpleton. You can tell this is true by the photo on the book's cover. It shows the author looking into the camera with stiffened arms positioned unnaturally at his sides and almost smiling in the same way my 6-year-old looks when we tell him to pose for a picture...awkward. But when you read the poems, it makes sense that this was the person who wrote them because they are almost childlike. Below is one of my favorites called Cinderella that I read to my son.
were you ever a little reindeer out in the clear not too tiny a reindeer but a little reindeer and the way was clear
were you ever a little reindeer out in the rain not a big rain but a little rain and the way was clear
and you had your umbrella with you not too big an umbrella but a little umbrella and your name was Cinderella
wonderfully you were invited to a ceremony not too big a ball but a little ball and you had your umbrella with you
The collected work of a little-known American poet, one who is far too-little-known, in my opinion. While Hamilton had some work published during his lifetime and a fair amount of serious critical attention, he is considered, wrongly I'd say, an "outsider" poet whose main merit is as a curiosity instead of as a leading poet of the later twentieth century. In the latter consideration he should stand, as he provides in these pages work that is unique and steps outside of what his better-known peers have accomplished. He moves between the lines of the very personal (without being confessional, coying, or overly self-aware) and the non-narrative, articulate, examination of place and thing removed from any false or forced context. He can in a few words consider a small detail of something or dwell on much larger issues, but none of the self-stuck speaking-to-the-reader approach too common in poetry after 1950 is present in his poems. And that is very refreshing.
I reviewed this book for Coal Hill Review and my review in full is here: