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640 pages, Hardcover
First published January 1, 2012
I found this book extremely disappointing.
Over the last thirty years, I have read all the Falco and Albia novels and most of Lindsey Davis’s standalone books. They are fast-paced, entertaining stories with well-developed main characters. Needless to say, I am a fan of LD’s work. Or I was...
The enticing blurb for Master and God claims it is a story about Gaius and Lucilla and how their lives are affected by Rome’s terrifying emperor. Sadly, the pair remain underdeveloped, although they sometimes reminded me of characters from LD’s other novels, e.g. Caenis and Vespasian from Course of Honour, and Albia and Tiberius from the Albia series.
The bland figures of poor Lucilla and Gaius drown under the heavy weight of background information.
In LD’s other novels, the author supplies just enough historical information to provide context. This story, however, contains pages and pages – whole chapters, in fact – of plodding historical data, much of which seems irrelevant. For the first time, I found myself skim-reading LD’s story while muttering, ‘Blah, blah, blah’. The exercise reminded me of high school historical texts – and not in a good way.
Master and God is a long story with a sizeable cast. Many characters have similar names, as per the ancient Roman style. The chronology sometimes jumps back and forth, and the narrative is repetitive in places. These issues confused me and added to my frustration. There is a definite lack of strict editing.
It appears LD has collated her research on the era and stuck in a couple of characters to create a storyline. Although this showcases her impressive knowledge of ancient Rome, it is misplaced in fiction and somewhat dissatisfying for readers hoping for another of LD’s enthralling novels. Perhaps the author was under pressure to produce something, and this filled a gap. Maybe the publisher felt the fanbase would buy it anyway, so it did not matter if the story was below par. Of course, I am speculating here, but if I am right, this is a shoddy way to treat loyal readers.