This is gonna be long...
I finished the book a couple days ago, but waited to review it. It felt like a puzzle that had all the pieces to make it work, but none of them fit together. Trying not to spoil the book’s plot or the major events is gonna be hard, however, that’s what I’m going to attempt to do. My review might have slight spoilers so I can convey what worked and what simply didn’t for me. I will do my best to warn anyone reading this of when we enter spoiler territory.
First I want to give some kudos where they are deserved. The idea is really cool and unique. There are characters: like Aunt Bren and Frangi that are interesting and serve to give information. Especially Aunt Bren, who was full of wisdom and I enjoyed our time spent with her. Frangi was a fun pop in character that seemed like an annoying little sister in the best of ways. She added a bit of lightness to the story. There was also Darad, whom we met briefly (too briefly) but seriously intrigued me. (I’m anxiously optimistic about his book) The leopora was a cool creature- one that seemed to be kitten/dragon/bird and who Ariel (the main female) tamed quickly. As an animal lover, I would totally die trying to tame one too.
The plot itself had some interesting points. Racism and prejudice (in this case against a certain species) filtered throughout the book and forced some characters to face how they viewed others. In that respect, I enjoyed it. I’m always pleased when deep ideas get sprinkled into what most would consider a book that wouldn’t even try.
This unfortunately was also where the downfall started for me. Let’s start with Ariel- she’s a mess. At times she seemed like a young teenager without a brain and other times she was really deep and self aware. But by the end, I still couldn’t tell you much about her. Other than the beginning where she revealed that she has been to therapy (a thing she does A LOT) and that she didn’t have a great home life, she wasn’t very flushed out. Days later all I can remember about her was that she has some sexual proclivities that some would find extreme. That does not a character make. Because so much was left out of her development, the end for me didn’t have the necessary punch needed, but I’ll get to that later. While reading, I did see some potential in Ariel that kept me from DNFing the book.
That leads us to Orkah. The male lead was… another empty shell. The start of a great dark, brooding, grumpy gus of an Orc was there. I was actually pretty hopeful at the start, but it fell off the cliff. He called the main female, what I can only take as (by how it’s decried by Aunt Bren and how it’s used later) racial slurs. He only stopped when Aunt Bren admonished him and even then he still thought them. The main attribute of the male Orc is that they protect women (it’s gallantry), but it never felt gallant. His vendetta against another male never felt important. He talked about it and it became a huge point later, but because there was nothing for the reader to latch onto (no memories shared, no great emotional talk about how he felt and why he wanted revenge -beyond “this happened and now his blood must cover my blade”), so I just didn’t care. There would have been so many ways to make that weighted topic mean something, especially in a 200 plus page book, yet it never happened.
That leads us to the biggest issues I had. 1: The plot moves slowly while trying to be a fast paced book. I found myself being disengaged and skimming until something interested me. It was only at the 56% (yes I know that is specific but I was watching the percentage a great deal) mark that it felt like we were getting somewhere. 2: The spice of the book was nice but at the same time, extremely rushed. In this case the book went from 0 to kink in 60 seconds flat. I have no issues with revving up the heat, but the way it happened was the problem. At no point did I feel like there was tension or desire beyond the “he’s hot and big, she’s sexy” moments. 3: The emotional punch at the end was flat because there wasn’t enough build-up of the characters. I just didn’t care, which is the one thing you don’t want a reader to feel. Hating a scene or loving one is all passionate responses. Not caring is indifference. By the time I finished the book, I still didn’t know the characters. I didn’t feel like they fit together. The puzzle remained broken.
Having said all this: I did purchase the second book. I feel there was potential and I liked the main male protagonist when he appeared in this book. So fingers crossed.