Indiana, the "Crossroads of America", is stop number nine on the American Chillers tour. Fifth-graders Travis Kramer and Mandy McKinley live in the city of Elkhart. It's a warm summer day, so Travis goes for a swim, but his plan takes a weird turn when he spots a metallic locust by the river. The locust flies off after a minute, but Travis knows he witnessed something extraordinary. A few days later he sees a metallic grasshopper near his house. Wanting proof, he captures the grasshopper in a jar to show his friend Mandy tomorrow, but by morning it has chewed through the lid, plus the screen on Travis's bedroom window, and escaped. Will he ever see another of these bugs?
That same morning, a metallic beetle shows up in Mandy's yard along with the silver grasshopper, and the beetle demonstrates the damage it can do with its sawlike pincers. Travis and Mandy barely evade a direct attack. Travis disables the beetle by swatting it out of the air with a tennis racquet, and a close inspection reveals the letters "BTC" printed under its wing. A bit of research reveals this is probably the Boogaloo Toy Company, headquartered in Elkhart until the factory abruptly shut down years ago. Is the company secretly making metal insects? A phone call to a BTC representative lets Travis and Mandy know that the factory is slated for a return to business soon, but when Mandy mentions the metallic insects they found, the voice on the line asks them to come to the factory immediately to discuss the matter with the company president. Why would a busy executive set aside time for a pair of kids?
Entering the factory complex is an unsettling experience. The huge, run-down building and its extensive parcel of land appear deserted, but someone requested Travis and Mandy meet the company president here. The front doors close and lock behind them, sealing the two inside the factory. They wander through the vast building, then take an elevator deep underground where they encounter metallic insects similar to the ones from before. It turns out there's a technology war at Boogaloo Toy Company. The founder wants to create state-of-the-art children's toys, but a former employee sees the iron insects as a means to world domination. With millions of metallic bugs sweeping the globe as soldiers, who could stop this rogue employee from taking over? It's up to Travis and Mandy to infiltrate his base of operations and install a Trojan horse computer override so the founder of Boogaloo Toy Company can dismantle his rival's evil plan. Are Travis and Mandy ready to fight hordes of deadly iron insects to get the job done?
The plot of Iron Insects Invade Indiana lacks originality, and the writing is awkward and unprofessional, but this is still one of the more enjoyable early American Chillers. The narrative atmosphere is decently evocative, an area of strength for Johnathan Rand in his best books. I rate Iron Insects Invade Indiana one and a half stars, but I'll round to two; the story makes better sense than most of the first nine American Chillers. This book falls well short of what R.L. Stine's Goosebumps offers, but it's a passable diversion for fans of middle-grade horror.