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My Vampire System: Book 23
The human race is at war with the Vicious Dalki and when they needed help more than ever, THEY started to come forward.
Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.
Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.
Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.
But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.
He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.
"It is time to feed!"
"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"
"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."
Humans who had hidden in the shadows for hundreds of years, people with abilities.
Some chose to share their knowledge to the rest of the world in hopes of winning the war, while others kept their abilities to themselves.
Quinn had lost everything to the war, his home, his family and the only thing he had inherited was a crummy old book that he couldn’t even open.
But when the book had finally opened, Quinn was granted a system and his whole life was turned around.
He completed quest after quest and became more powerful, until one day the system gave him a quest he wasn’t sure he could complete.
"It is time to feed!"
"You must drink human blood within 24 hours"
"Your HP will continue to decrease until the task has been completed."
171 pages, Kindle Edition
Published June 6, 2023
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August 22, 2026
This series is a mashup of so much!
This series is a mashup of so many desperate things like vampires space travel odd beast from many different places vile evil creatures that want to kill mankind and technological innovations I mean it's it's so many different things Justice for all all these different things are there that it's kind of got something of everything in it the only problem is it's still incredibly badly edited and I know that the author refers to having an editor but if he does that's one piss at poor editor
This series is a mashup of so many desperate things like vampires space travel odd beast from many different places vile evil creatures that want to kill mankind and technological innovations I mean it's it's so many different things Justice for all all these different things are there that it's kind of got something of everything in it the only problem is it's still incredibly badly edited and I know that the author refers to having an editor but if he does that's one piss at poor editor
March 2, 2024
Good action
It was a good part of the story .plus it was full of action. I would recommend this book to anyone who is a fan of action adventure storie.
It was a good part of the story .plus it was full of action. I would recommend this book to anyone who is a fan of action adventure storie.
June 5, 2024
Still needs editing
I love this guy's storytelling. I just wish that he would get the editing taken care of. He is absolutely a creative genius though.
I love this guy's storytelling. I just wish that he would get the editing taken care of. He is absolutely a creative genius though.
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