Interesting but lacking
The storyline was interesting, but lacking in all aspects. I am only giving 1 star for the interesting plot. However, the whole book was lacking and the FMC was conflicting and immature.
RH: 3 guys, 1 FMC. Witch/Wizard, other mythical and supernatural creatures.
4 reasons 4 stars were lost:
1. The biggest fault of this book is its underdevelopment. There is no world building and we are left with so many questions.
2. The second is the FMC. She is badass one moment, a weepy child the next moment then a unrealistic immature teenager the next. She says “sup”, “yeet”, and other worse immature things at the worst moment, its so cringey I skipped over the whole scene (even though it was that one scene when stuff goes down!). Then she is a polite, perfect student with the perfect quip to a bully. The next moment she is so struck with social anxiety she cries or has a weak ptsd like symptoms. The entire book she was giving me whiplash.
3. All of the scenes were underdeveloped. They ended too short and too awkwardly. For instance (little spoiler) she was kidnapped, talked immaturely, was crowned like a queen for a cult, then her mates break in, “rescue” her and go back home all WITHIN like 10 Paragraphs. No talk about what happened after the scene ended: no reflection, no changes, no information, nada. All scenes are like this, awkward, cut short, vague and overall weak.
4. All interactions between characters were awkwardly written. They were either so terrible scripted, useless (page fillers), so underdeveloped (vague interactions with no development or informative(, cut short And/Or weak. I honestly don’t think I can explain it, but you will see and understand by at least the third chapter.
I’m sure there are more reasons, but I completed the book because of the plot; Which, might I add, ended awkwardly with no information and no questions answered. I wont be reading the next book.
I will read the book again if it is rewritten and detailed and such. I apologize to the author for a bad review, but a review is necessary.