A much more promising entry in the series than the first two books. I realised when I finished Flyte that I had missed this, and so have read it slightly out of order, although from the fact it has excerpts from Fyre, I am assuming it was written after publication of the the 6th major work in the series.
If this is correct, it would perhaps explain why this seemed to be written better, as the author would have a bit more experience. I suppose being only a very short story, there's less opportunity for plot holes to arise, but even focusing on the actual writing as opposed to the story, it still seemed a lot better to me. There weren't as many instances where the writing felt juvenile, which I did find with the first two major works.
There was still an occasion or two where I felt the characters behaved slightly oddly, and seemed to be focusing on something small, when they could have dealt with the main antagonist fairly easily, but that does seem to be par for the course in this series, unfortunately.
Hopefully the increase in quality means that the books do get better as the series progresses. I hope this is the case, and I was more disappointed with the second than I was with the first, but this was a definite step up. I guess I'll see soon enough.