A flawed but fascinating first novel. Former Florida prison chaplain Michael Lister has created a believable detective hero, Florida prison chaplain Jon "JJ" Jordan, a divorced man and recovering alcoholic who before his call to the ministry was a cop from a family of cops. Jordan has disappointed nearly everyone in his life but now at last feels like he has found his true calling, ministering to the men behind bars at Potter Correctional Institution in Pottersville in the Florida Panhandle. But then he witnesses what at first appears to be an escape attempt gone wrong, later exposed as a murder, and the superintendent of his institution asks him to poke around and find out what happened.
Lister has set up an intriguing mystery, and put it in a revolutionary setting. I've read a lot of thrillers and can't ever recall one where the murder occurred inside a prison and the suspects were all inmates or prison staff. He clearly knows his way around the institution, too, painting believable scenes in the chapel, the infirmary, the isolation ward and out on the exercise yard.
His writing can sometimes come across as stilted, though, and he lets Jordan give a few speeches that go on far too long (we even get his entire sermon from a funeral!), trying the reader's patience. He commits some other common sins among first-time novelists, too. Every single woman Jordan encounters has to be drop-dead gorgeous, which seems highly unlikely to occur both among prison staffers and small Florida towns. He tends to write the dialogue of the black inmates in a dialect that sounds like phony Ebonics. There are some scenes where he's supposed to be reporting to his superintendent in which he never tells him what he's found out, which seems unlikely to occur in real life. And he messes around with that old staple, the threatening letters sent to the hero, tracking down the sender without really explaining why that person would do such a thing.
But those are problems he can work out with practice, and I look forward to reading the next several books in his series in hopes they improve in quality, because this one's a really good start.