Sharing Naomi

by Tess Mackenzie

When Naomi’s boyfriend asks her to have a threesome with one of his friends, her first reaction is to wonder how he knows his friend is interested. Her second is to be embarrassed by how much Matt’s told Harry, and her third is to enthusiastically agree. Who wouldn’t, when offered two men with no guilt or consequences?

Unfortunately there are consequences, and there is guilt, and Naomi herself becomes part of the problem when she gets a little too interested in the sex, and a little too unwilling to respect other's limits, once the fun starts.

The sex is good, and everyone seems to enjoy it, but then there’s the morning after. Naomi keeps going, and apparently wasn’t meant to, and then the shouting and conflict begins. Naomi knows she can fix things with Matt. She wants to fix things with Matt. She just wants to have her actual orgasm before she does.

It turns out that stopping halfway through a threeway really messes with her ability to think clearly, and she isn’t quite sure what to do next.

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First published March 9, 2013

About the author

Hey goodreads! Um, hi. Wave.

So first, thank you to everyone for being interested enough to read this. And the stories. Really, just thank you all heaps for reading what I've written until now, and wanting to read other things, and just for everything, really. I'm really, really grateful to everyone who's interested.

And thank you also to whoever is putting books up here. That's cool, and I really appreciate it!

So what’s going on with my books is a bit weird and kind of confusing, and I just wanted to explain properly so it’s clear.

Basically, everything I write is free to read on my website, or on Wattpad, and usually on Smashwords too, including all the stories in the anthology collection books that are for sale some places.

What happens is I mostly write short stories, and as I write them I put them up those places. Then, after a while, the anthologies collect the existing stories, and bundle them into tidier ebooks and print books.

So the stories in the anthologies are the same ones as are in the individual, single ebooks, and the ebooks can be read free, all over the place, if you’d rather to that.

So this is just to say all that, so no-one doesn’t realize and feels cheated or something. And also, I hope I used enough bold!

The anthologies at the moment are...

Getting Into a Girl's Shorts: Short Sometimes-Erotic Fiction about Women With Women

It Doesn't Always Rain: A Collection of Literary Erotica

Squishy Group Hugs: Collected Smut

...and the book pages at Amazon or wherever say which stories are in where.

So basically, there's no need to pay for anything unless you want to, and there’s nothing unique in the paid books, so don’t go thinking otherwise.

Which all sounds a bit weird right? Everything's free except it isn't?

Basically, while it would be nice to sell billions of books one day, I really also just want people to read what I write, and I also don't want anyone to feel pressured to hand over money, and this is how it ended up. So all a bit Wattpad, and that way of doing things, rather than the more normal print-book kind of model. And also yes, it is basically a devious plan to, um, I don't know, win you over, I guess, and guilt you into one day eventually buying things. But really, really mild guilt, I completely promise. So don't worry if you never end up buying anything. Read all the same!

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Reviews

[Kim BookJunkie ~ Editor & Proofreader · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 stars rounded up
Sharing Naomi is a short, sexy story story about a couple (Naomi and Matt) and Matt's best friend Harry. Basically, it's the story of what happens when Matt and Naomi agree to invite Harry to join them for a threesome.

There are thousands of ménage stories out there yet I found this one particularly refreshing due to how realistic it was. For example, Matt and Naomi don't simply ask Harry to jump into bed with them; the way the threesome is arranged is a bit more complicated than that. I was very impressed by Ms. Mackenzie's ability to write in a way that allowed me to practically feel the character's emotions, excitement and at times their tension and anxiety. At times, the emotions and insecurities were palpable. I am confident that if I was Naomi's, I would've had the same concerns and feelings she had. I can also imagine many men behaving and feeling similar to how the male characters in this story did. Because this book was so realistic and believable, I enjoyed it much more than most of the other ménage stories I have read.

Although I liked this book, it wasn't perfect. Unfortunately, the story ends rather abruptly and, in my opinion, ends in an odd way. There's no cliffhanger yet for me, there was some unfinished business related to Harry. Also, there were several typos and words were completely missing in several places. I did enjoy the story though and will definitely be reading more books by McKenzie.

[DD11 · Rating 3 out of 5]

Humm again people saying they want to share then when their partner is into it they get pissed off and jealous. It’s hot they voice their fantasies but you have to have the stones to stand up for it

[djdavis~*Sivad* · Rating 2 out of 5]

Wow. One of the worst books this year. Grammar was horrible, story was whack, and I'm still waiting for a build to the climax.