I am very conflicted over either I like the last book of the trilogy or not...
I don't usually write as much about a book, but I had to share my opinion... because I had so much hope for this trilogy.
Unfortunately, it turned out not as good as I would've hope. I've never been this deceived by a book/trilogy that started so interesting.
Either I really didn't understand all the subtleties throughout the trilogy, or there are some major flaws in the plot line.
Maybe I'm getting too old, but I felt that there was a lack of complexity in the main plot. I mean don't get me wrong the world and setting are complex... The story and how it unfolds is not...
Most of the second book, we are waiting for something to happen, just like the characters in the story... yet nothing interesting enough happens. Then, something somewhat major happens and it gets somewhat exciting, I could see the prospect of some sort of interesting development...
Which led me to have some hope for the third book, but then in 275 pages...everything is solved with one snap of fingers... (Although, in that department, I must admit that Hunger Games and Divergent were not really better in my humble opinion)
My first impression from the first novel was : This is intriguing.
A mysterious floating city in a distant dystopic future. (which is actually a part of earth that has been detached from the planet over time...)
Up there, People of Internment live within the cities limit. There is one ruler, a King. (which year are we in... by the way?) The citizens passively live their daily lives without questioning or daring to question the strict set of rules and regulations which "help" the city function properly.
Ok, So far so good, it looks a bit like Divergent, the Setting, strict rules to dictate what your life should be, what your faith will be. Seems overall interesting enough.
Then, you have this teenage girl, Morgan, we read everything from her point of view (I always preferred POV). At first, she seems average, she actually really wants to fit in, to hide the fact that she, secretly, dreams of earth, of the unknown. She dreams of something more, something different, something beyond the borders of the city.
And, then, happens the miracle, something, more likely someone shatters her "perfect" life. She meets this mysterious (maybe murderer) young man, Judas, and finds him intriguing. And in a series of event, gets involved in an escape to the below….Earth is below and they found a way to reach it...
I believe(very personal opinion here) that major plot flaw is actually the main character... and her passive aggressive attitude towards what is actually going on.
I think her character is all over the place.
It's not that she is annoying or boring, she just doesn't really stand out. She’s definitely not a Katniss Everdeen or Tris Prior. She’s not a fighter, nor a hero which is acceptable to a certain extent. In the first book, she’s interesting enough. She seems to be one of the few individual who actually question life. she questions everything around her, which makes her NOT a robot, which is the case apparently of everyone in the city. Accepting their faith. Turning a blind eye to everything wrong with their perfect floating city.
When the second book starts, You, as a reader, basically understands that Morgan's character is either, only your eyes and thoughts to witness and understand the story unfolding itself... or you just realize, like I did that her character is too weak(poorly portrayed) to be the lead in the story.
I feel like she's really passive aggressive throughout the series.
There are too many characters. Which most of them fades in the background. She is the main character, but I feel like she's often overshadowed by basically everyone else. She falls into a crack and just let things happen, and for some reason, she's basically a nobody and accidently turns out to be the most important character (which by the way, she's not)
And then suddenly, there's a war, which she has no power over, but she's somehow involved and she’s the one everyone turns to for some reason…
Even the last sentence of the book (which is like the only decent thing she says in the last book-reminded me why I liked her in the first book) cannot make-up for the entire poor plot and turns of events.
Unlike the Second book, which was too slow, the third book 's pace is way too fast, over several months (almost 9 months I think) where nothing happen directly related the main character.
They decide to do a revolution and eliminate the problem of earth and Internment: the rulers, which isn't really a revolution, since everything that happens is not explained, only mentioned: "Oh yeah that happened so now all is good. now let's patch the broken pieces" I think this is really where the author totally lost me. I started writing this review even before reading the ending...
Nothing is really explained: The lack of technology on both earth and Internment, what happens to the other kingdoms? The too many love stories/betrothed relationships and seriously, isn't there any adult in this story?!? I mean, they either all die... or oh wait they all die... (I'm okay with the next generation leading the future... but it's unrealistic a bit, the non-existent adult presence in any decision making)
Although, it is not a real love story, there are some love scenes and emotions in the trilogy. I think the end game here is wrong. I would've prefer for her to end up alone or with Judas (who also completely fades in the background in the 3rd book. alone on earth) I believe he could have been a better suitor as he symbolizes the main things Morgan always craved for: freedom and passion. but once again, I felt that Morgan just accepted the fact that well Basil is her betrothed and she accepts that she should love him, therefore will remain with him "forever"
And, well, Basil...he seems perfect and sweet and nice and he loves her deeply because he was meant to... and all, but quite frankly, he is BORING and brings well, not much more to the table!!!
The plot is all over the place. There are some interesting themes here and there, some other themes seems to be only fillers, but also lot of missing substance. I don’t know… I had some high hopes but the third book just completely ruined it for me…
Maybe I should remind myself that I am no longer a teenager and therefore shouldn't be hoping for a more complex story...