I was a mite worried opening up this book's jacket. Ben is a decent write, but these are Space Marines.
And we don't forget the Soul Drinker Abomination Trilogy.
What's more is that he is now writing about the Imperial Fists, a chapter/legion rich in history and legend, not some disposable made-up chapter for his own devising (yes, I am well aware all the components of this mythology are made up).
Lysander's tale is a good one. A lost hero from his Legion, he washes up out of the warp after 1,000 years. Lost in Chaos after a horrific defeat, he returns to the 'here and now'. He's been proven to still be untainted, still pure grade-a psychotic fighting machine. So they suit him up and send him back with 30 fellows to punish the monsters who have been torturing him for the last aeon.
His tale of return-and-revenge is overlaid with his tale of what-happened-the-first-time-around, in interleaving chapters. All in all, the book is vaguely reminiscent of Memento, where you realize you are watching two separate stories (albeit those two are converging).
There are problems here, though. Big shocker. There has to be a dramatic reveal, so Lysander has to have hidden some details from the Inquisition/Interrogation upon returning to real time. Which would have been utterly impossible. It breaks canon. Ben again discards items of canon that he finds uncomfortable for his narrative. The Space Marine Legion/Chapter psycho-conditioning and indoctrination would disallow for some of the moral ambiguity Lysander is running into.
Moreso, in this new attempt at tale-telling, Ben introduces us to rage, which is probably his attempt to steel up the assassination of canon. Oh yes, Lysander is very mad he is not a proper Space Marine. Very angry. Wrathful. FULL of rage. Except its just a word. Rage should be enormous and force very stupid people to do pretty short-sighted things. Otherwise, its just anger, and its easily controlled. Like Lysander finds the ability to do.
There are nice things in here. Lysander's flying dutchman compatriot Ha... umm.. Haleastus, was a great idea... but was pretty much ignored. ANother brother, Skelpis by name, ran through the same unimaginable ordeal, only to die offstage in the beginning of the book for no real purpose. In fact, he should have even been in the story. You deliberately took a solider out of the hospital and put him in a triage unit on a warship, where he could lay and... not contribute in any meaningful way? That was dumb, sorry.
My real hope for Ben's next book is that they return him to another fictitious chapter/legion so he can't damage anything that is is value to the franchise. Someone get this guy a copy of Abnett's books so he can understand the laws of the 40k universe.