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Following the vicious attack by a psychotic colleague, and reeling from the suspicion that Matthew Lynes is not all that he seems, Professor Emma D'Eresby flees her college teaching position in Maine to her hometown in England-- taking the mysterious seventeenth-century journal she stole from the college's archives with her.

Broken physically and emotionally, Emma drifts until, fearing for their daughter's sanity, her parents invite a family friend to assess her. In the course of their conversation, Emma discovers that he spoke to Matthew over thirty years before.

This finally spurs her into action and soon, when she finds what certainly must be a reference to Matthew in the journal, she begins to understand Matthew's profound secret.

But when Matthew arrives to confess his love for her, she must decide if she can trust him--and he must decide if he can share his extraordinary secret with her. Drawn by a deep connection that both feel but don't quite understand they find they must set aside their doubts and trust each other.

Readers will be thrilled by the second installment in The Secret of the Journal from British author C. F. Dunn. Mixing suspense, romance, and the supernatural, Death Be Not Proud explores the profound moral implications of a life seemingly invulnerable to time.

384 pages, Paperback

First published April 19, 2013

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C.F. Dunn

9 books47 followers
Studying history at university, Claire Dunn followed a vocational route founding a specialist school dedicated to the needs of children with Dyslexia, Autism and related language difficulties.

Returning to her academic roots to incorporate elements of history into her stories of romance, mystery and suspense, Claire began writing Mortal Fire - the first in the five-book The Secret Of The Journal series - winning Gold in the ForeWord Book Of The Year Awards, 2012. She now writes full-time in the South-West surrounded by restless seas, ancient landscapes and wild, wide skies.

She is currently working on a major new Wars of the Roses series: The Tarnished Crown.
Book One - Wheel of Fortune (pub. 2023 Resolute Books; revised edition pub. 2025 Sapere Books)
Book Two - Sun Ascendant (pub. 2024 Resolute Books, revised edition 2025 Sapere Books)
Book Three - Degrees of Affinity (pub. 2025 Sapere Books)

Book Four - Legacy of Steel (pub. Sapere Books 2026)

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Author 15 books389 followers
January 27, 2015
I had some mixed feelings about this book. First the positive: C. F. Dunn is clearly an excellent wordsmith. I was drawn right into the story from the beginning, wanting to know more about her character Emma. I loved the family dynamics between Emma and her sister and parents. The dialogue was great. The plot was well paced and intriguing. Maybe I'm just not the target audience for this tale. I think Twilight fans would probably be much more suited for it (I haven't read Twilight personally though).

Granted, this is Book Two in a trilogy, and I haven't read Book One. That might be part of the problem as I didn't seen how the character of Matthew developed, and why Emma is so enthralled with him. My negative feelings about the story are really all about Matthew. The author paints him as the perfect guy... in some ways. He's handsome, charming, intelligent, cares deeply about his family ... but frankly, I have a problem with how controlling and borderline abusive he is. Now this might be the author's intention. Maybe I'll read Book Three and realize she was painting him in this light from the beginning, but I'm not sure if that's the author's intention or not. But for crying out loud, the guy actually bruised Emma when he kissed her (in Book One) and gets so mad that he threatens how he could rape and kill her if he really wanted to in this story. He feels horrible about it later, but this should send up red flags to any sensible girl. Emma comes across sensible in some ways, but acts like a complete idiot at times! I would think the absolute first thing she'd ask Matthew once she finds out he's really four-hundred-years-old is HOW? Yet we wait many chapters before she addresses it because Matthew puts her off saying it must wait until he takes her away from her family to his personal home in America. He arranges this without even asking her if she wants to go. (Another red flag... taking the girl away from her family.)

I really wanted to like this book. And in some ways I did. C.F. Dunn is a skilled writer. I just hope Matthew ends up being a bad guy in the end. We'll see.

This novel is being marketed as inspirational/Christian fiction, but be warned it does have more language than most CF (hell, damn, bastard, bitch) and the Lord's name is taken in vain by a character (though it is pointed out as being wrong). Maybe that's the way British CF is written, I don't know. Little as far as Christian content is included, though Emma does keep herself pure because of her beliefs, and this is brought up as the characters are strongly attracted to each other several times.

I'd still recommend to fans of Twilight-type novels with the warning to remember that if a guy in real life acts like Matthew, run away with everything you've got! Luckily, this is fiction. (I mean, there really aren't four-hundred-year-old guys walking around... right?) ;)
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716 reviews53 followers
August 9, 2014
This second book in C.F. Dunn's, "The Secret of the Journal" series, presents much of the background material on the nature and origin of characters presented in, "Mortal Fire," the first book of the series. As so many of us experience from time to time, our heroine, Doctor Emma D'Eresby, has so many doubts regarding who she is, what she is to enigmatic, Dr. Matthew Lynes, who he is, what they mean to one another and why all the secrets. The book starts out slowly with our heroine back in her hometown, recovering from injuries sustained during book one. As she tries to make sense of it all, she falls back on what she does best, historic research, to find the answers to her questions regarding Dr. Lynes. The book starts out slowly and halfway through, the pace picks up and sets the reader up for the third book in the series, "Rope of Sand". The story was compelling and I stayed up way too late to see how it all turned out. The story is suspenseful and well-crafted. Dunn's writing is exquisite with several ruminations by historic poets laced throughout the story.
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May 13, 2013
Very much enjoyed this second book in the Secret of the Journal series. It answers many of the questions put forth in Mortal Fire, but leaves just as many. Which is what I would expect in a continuing series.

I was initially drawn to Mortal Fire because the back of the book read something like, "historian searches for 17th century journal." Well, shoot, I'm a historian and there you go. You had me at searches. In this book the search is all about relationships, past and present. One thing I like about Dunn's work is that if you want to read the book quickly just for fun you can, but if you want to search it for clues and meaning on different levels you can do that too. The gems are there waiting to be found. Dunn is a master wordsmith and an excellent historian in her own right. In the end it's a good story, told by a brilliant storyteller. I can't wait for book three to see where it takes us.
7 reviews
May 6, 2013
A great fast paced read, loved the relationships between Emma and her family in England, especially her father. I also love the details of the places visited, lovely descriptions of towns and scenery. I find myself increasingly disliking Matthew, and wanting to shout at Emma about her infatuation - how many times will she paper over the cracks? Looking forward to the next instalment, and getting closer to understanding more about the mysterious Matthew.
387 reviews14 followers
June 17, 2024
I started this series because I very much liked the author’s recent historical fiction novels, Wheel of Fortune and Sun Ascendant. This novel and the first in the series Mortal Fire are well-written and have some interesting historical bits, but I simply dislike the romance genre with a heroine whom no man can resist—and the perfect hero. And the fact that the perfect hero is also immortal makes things worse for me..
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274 reviews
May 25, 2025
it was cheesy, it was clichéd, it was the thinking woman's twilight. it was perfect.
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1,613 reviews94 followers
July 16, 2013
Be advised if you are contemplating reading Death Be Not Proud by C.F. Dunn, make sure you read Mortal Fire, the first book in the Secret of the Journal Series first, otherwise you will be quite confused at where this one picks up in the story. First and foremost, this is supposed to be a Christian title, and I would strongly caution readers that there is more behind the cover than what we are led to believe. There is some profanity throughout the story and the premise leaves one to question just how "Christian" based this storyline truly is. I would label this series, a paranormal romance over anything with a "Christian" label that would offend most readers who are expecting that genre than what this one delivers.

Without giving too much of the plot away, this novel picks up where Mortal Fire left off. It follows the complexity of a relationship between Professor Emma D'Eresby and Dr. Matthew Lynes. This story picks up with Emma being in the process of recovering from a terrible accident which we are never told what happen. Apparently it had something to do with Matthew and now Emma is dealing with coming to terms with the aftermath of her long healing with involves broken ribs, a stitched up arm and a broken arm along with a sense of ongoing depression that has her wondering just what great secret Matthew is hiding. It seems that he has an amazing ability of healing, super human strength, and is incredibly fast. Not only that the relationship between the two is more than strained. Matthew believes Emma should try and forget him, that he will only bring more pain and hurt her way, and Emma has apparently fallen in love with him.

In order to discover the secrets to Matthew's super human abilities, she ventures back home to England using a journal her grandfather compiled. It leads her to discover that Matthew is actually about four hundred years old and soon she wonders just what he really is. The story is long and drawn out as Emma finds source after source to validate her claims and what she learns through her grandfather's journal. Starting to sound vaguely familiar? (Think Twilight!) The novel finally gets around to Emma confronting Matthew about his past and why the hidden secrets. Their relationship soon moves beyond what most would consider healthy with Matthew at times, becoming violent and threatening to Emma. Yet she has lost her heart and possibly her soul to Matthew and she vows to stick by him no matter what she learns.

I received Death Be Not Proud by C.F. Dunn compliments of Kregel Publications for my honest review and did not receive any compensation for a favorable review. I would honestly rate this one 3.5 out of 5 stars just based on the overall length of this one to get through the points of Emma's research and discovery of Matthew's secret. For me it simply moved too slow, and had me rereading pages over and over to gain an understanding of where this one was headed. Yet to be fair, I did not read Mortal Fire to see where this novel began so I can't tell how it would blend together after reading the first novel in this series. I can however question the validity of this being a "Christian" based book just due to the violent nature of the character Matthew is, his actions and the language between Emma and Matthew is more than what I would call a family friendly book. This would do extremely well in the secular market for Paranormal Romances that are flooding the bookshelves.
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73 reviews8 followers
August 12, 2013
I'm done reading romance novels for the purposes of a review. I'm finding less and less redeeming value in them. They may provide some good escapism, but there are just too many other good books and types of literature out there.

Death Be Not Proud is the second, in what will be a trilogy by C.F. Dunn. I have not read Mortal Fire. I think you can make it through book #2 without having read book #1, but it won't be easy. There are several pieces missing, which I can only assume Mortal Fire provides. Death Be Not Proud doesn't build up the characters enough for them to be able to stand alone. If you've read book #1, you'll get along just fine with this. If not, like me, you'll need to just figure it out.

One of my questions for readers of romance literature is this: do women in the real world act like Emma? Do they really make the most inane decisions about men, whether it's men they might be 'in love' with or men whom they know are dangerous, harmful or even life-threatening? I finally had to put the book away about 2/3 of the way through. I just couldn't stand it anymore. Granted, Emma's a full-grown woman, but if my daughter's acted like this, I might have to do some serious fatherly counseling.

As to the issue of Matthew's 'immortality', because I've read science fiction and fantasy literature for many years, I didn't struggle too much with this concept. However (you knew there was going to be one of those, didn't you?), it never appears, as brilliant as Matthew is, that he has done much exploring to discover what has gone on to make him over 400 years old. He has children, who seeming to have many of his traits of immortality, will not live as long because of the mixed blood of a mother. Not anywhere near enough is said about this (unless this is fodder for book #3).

One last 'beef', and it's not about Death Be Not Proud alone. A book does not have to be written by a Christian author to be good or have redemptive value to it. A piece of literature written by a Christian does not have to be explicitly Christian (a clear gospel proclaimed, faith in Jesus Christ alone made a central tenet of the work rather than just some odd, generic 'faith in God' or just 'faith in a deity', struggles by main characters to live out said faith and the list could go on). I just get miffed at publishers (I'm assuming it's them, not the authors so much) who want to promote 'Christian romance novels' (Amish, western, sci-fi, fantasy, Victorian) with no clear Christianity in them. Just put it out there as a 'romance novel.'

I found no clear gospel within the pages of Death Be Not Proud. That doesn't make it an evil book; just no different than a worldly book. I didn't keep a tally, but I'm not sure if Jesus Christ was ever mentioned, let alone one's great need to repent of their sins and follow Him for the rest of their lives. Even the generic 'I have faith in a god above' was barely noticeable. Again, if this was the author's intent, fine. I'm okay with that. Kregel Publications, however, needs to not list this as 'Christian romance' simply because it may have a believing author.

I'm not really sure what to do with Death Be Not Proud and any sort of recommendation. You may attempt to do so if you wish. If you've read Mortal Fire. and are already caught up in the story, then by all means do so. If not, well, go read The Count of Monte Cristo or something similar.
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2,035 reviews66 followers
August 18, 2013
C. F. Dunn in her new book, “Death Be Not Proud” Book Two in The Secret Of The Journal series published by Monarch Books continues the adventure of Emma D’Eresby in a contemporary thriller.

From the back cover: Following the vicious attack by a psychotic colleague, and reeling from the suspicion that Matthew Lynes is not all that he seems, Professor Emma D’Eresby flees her college teaching position in Maine to her hometown in England– taking the mysterious seventeenth-century journal she stole from the college’s archives with her.

Broken physically and emotionally, Emma drifts until, fearing for their daughter’s sanity, her parents invite a family friend to assess her. In the course of their conversation, Emma discovers that he spoke to Matthew over thirty years before.

This finally spurs her into action and soon, when she finds what certainly must be a reference to Matthew in the journal, she begins to understand Matthew’s profound secret.

But when Matthew arrives to confess his love for her, she must decide if she can trust him–and he must decide if he can share his extraordinary secret with her. Drawn by a deep connection that both feel but don’t quite understand they find they must set aside their doubts and trust each other.

Readers will be thrilled by the second installment in The Secret of the Journal from British author C. F. Dunn. Mixing suspense, romance, and the supernatural, Death Be Not Proud explores the profound moral implications of a life seemingly invulnerable to time.

The adventure and suspense continue as Emma returns home to her parents in England to rest and recuperate from the events of book one. She also wants to get away from Matthew, read the journal and sort things out. Obviously that was not going to happen as Matthew appears on her doorstep and offers to take her back to America. Through bits we learn from the doctor in England, the journal and from Matthew himself we find all is not what it seems. And even though Emma has feelings for him I have to say I, personally, do not trust this guy. ”Death Be Not Proud” is also a mystery filled with twists and turns that will make a roller coaster kneel in surrender. I think C. F. Dunn is an extremely talented writer who really knows how to tell a story that will grab you and keep you flipping pages until you find out what is going on. ”Death Be Not Proud” is a very exciting book that will keep you engrossed in the characters. I am looking forward to all being revealed in the next book.

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1,644 reviews15 followers
August 11, 2016
The second book picks up where the first left off and answers some questions, but also leaves many to be answered!

Emma D’Eresby has left Maine and Matthew Lynes behind after the vicious attack she suffered by a psychotic professor at the college where she was teaching. Matthew might have saved her during the attack, but she still doesn’t know what to make of him. Back home with her family, she is more distraught than ever. She knows she is falling in love with Matthew, she just isn’t sure exactly what he is. All signs point to him not being “normal,” but she doesn’t know more. As her physical and emotional state continues to deteriorate, her parents invite an old family friend to come evaluate her. During their conversation, Emma realizes that this doctor has spoken to Matthew more than thirty years before, and his description matches the Matthew she knows now. She goes into research mode and determines that Matthew has roots close to her home. Using the journal, she is led to understanding Matthew’s secret. Unexpectedly, Matthew arrives and professes his love for Emma. She now must decide if she can trust him and he has to decide if he can share all of his deep secrets with her, things he has told no one before.

Once again I find myself comparing this second book in The Secret of the Journal to the second book in the Twilight series. Not once is a vampire mentioned here, but I find the similarities between Emma and Bella striking. They are both smitten by a tall dark man and taken with him before they realize what is happening. They also know that he might not be the safest person for them to be with but they refuse to see the logic in that and follow their hearts regardless. Emma uses her skills as a researcher to determine what Matthew has been hiding. These attributes suited her well. I’m not sure if it was intended, but Matthew came across as too mean and rough at times. In the first book, the obvious love he had for her was seen with the care he took in tending to her needs, especially after her injuries. I like the way Emma isn’t portrayed as totally dependent on someone and completely helpless. She does rely on Matthew but at times you can see the fighter in her come out. The negative reviews I’m seeing for this mostly go with having not read the first in the series making this less enjoyable. I think it is important to read the first before diving head first into this one, mainly to understand the context of the relationships and how they might change throughout. I did like the dynamic change between Emma and her father. That relationship really developed the best of all of the characters, which probably shouldn’t have been the case since Emma and Matthew are the main characters. Overall this was an enjoyable read and very quick. I recommend romance lovers, especially those that enjoyed the Twilight series pick this up and give it a go.

I received a complimentary copy of the book from Kregel Publications for an honest and thorough review. The views and opinions expressed within are my own.
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682 reviews169 followers
August 13, 2013
If you are an astute reader, you can tell a lot about a book even before you begin to read the story that’s contained within. So – when I studied the opening pages of C.F. Dunn’s latest novel, Death Be Not Proud, and observed that the introductory pages contained not only a Contents page, but also a 2-page listing of characters, 2 maps, and a section entitled “The Story So Far” – it was obvious that I wasn’t holding a light summer read in my hand.

Quite the contrary.

Instead, I discovered that Death Be Not Proud – the second book in The Secret Of The Journal Series – is a romantic thriller with a plot so complex, I recommend that you read the series from the beginning if possible.

Death Be Not Proud tells the story of Emma D’eresby – a college professor who becomes obsessed with researching her family’s past, as documented in a 17th century journal passed down to her by her grandfather. When she is attacked by a crazed colleague in Book 1, Emma steals the journal from the university where it is housed and flees from the United States to her parents’ home in England to recover. This is where we find Emma at the beginning of Book 2.

While Emma is home recovering, she tries to make sense of the mysteries that surround Matthew Lynes – the surgeon she has fallen for. It’s become increasingly apparent to Emma that Matthew is keeping secrets from her, and she’s determined to discover what those secrets are. As their relationship grows, however, Emma finds it increasingly difficult to maintain healthy boundaries in their relationship, in spite of her concerns. What will happen when she learns the truth about the man she has fallen for?

C.F. Dunn is an adept storyteller whose vivid imagery draws you into her books. Her work will appeal to fans of romantic suspense that intertwine elements of the supernatural in their tales. However, if you're looking for a novel that contains a strong Christian theme or message – this isn't the book for you.

Fans will be excited to learn that Rope Of Sand, the third book in the series, is slated for a Spring 2014 release.

This review was written by and originally published at Create With Joy.

Disclosure: I received a copy of this book from the publisher for review purposes. I was not compensated or required to write a positive review. The opinions expressed in this review are entirely my own.
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549 reviews
August 12, 2013
I read the first book in The Secret of the Journal series so that I would understand the characters and plot better by the time I started the second book Death Be Not Proud. I enjoy a Christian suspense novel just like the next woman and even some romance is okay but honestly in this book I felt as far from a Christian novel as I could get. In the first it’s established that Emma has some sort of faith, although it’s not said if that faith is in Christ alone or some other diety and she never goes to church (my attendance is sporadic with three children but Emma never goes). I knew that this was a book in the supernatural realm but I wasn’t expecting a person who is almost like a vampire (although he never calls himself that, nor is he ever referred to as such – but his immortality is definitely in question).



Okay, I’ll admit I did enjoy the book for the simple fact that it was an intriguing read with lots of history interspersed through out and for the fact alone I enjoyed it. That being said I don’t see this as a ‘Christian’ book – honestly the only time I heard God’s name invoked was in a moment of anger using a term that even the character Emma found antiquated, “***’s teeth”. There was some other cussing that went on and even Emma, who prided herself in the first book of not having sex before marriage (even though she did make that mistake once), puts herself in compromising positions and even flirts with the idea of not worrying about it anymore.



Overall, the book was great up until about the last 5 chapters or so, when some of my main concerns took place – and I think most of my issues could have simply been left out – really cussing takes away from any story, book, show or movie. This last part may come across as hypocritical, but I’ll risk it, while I did like the book up until the last few chapters I have to say I was uncomfortable in the subject matter of Matthew being immortal and his seemingly hypnotic state over Emma – I just don’t think that books that are marketed towards the Christian audience should deal with things that are so un-Christian. The only reason why I finished the book was because I have a hard time not finishing a book, so I finished it, but I could not in good conscience recommend it to a Christian friend.

**I was given a copy of this book from Kregel in exchange for posting my honest opinion,no other compensation was given.
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689 reviews333 followers
August 12, 2013
Professor Emma D’Eresby has fled her teaching position in Maine, following a life-threatening attack by a psychotic colleague, and has retreated to her parent’s home in England. There, she seeks to find the determination to embrace life, while sorting through the implications of what she experienced and her complicated feelings for Matthew Lynes. When her parents invite a doctor to the home to assess her mental health, Emma learns that the doctor spoke to Matthew 30 years prior, sparking to life the suspicions that Emma has been harbouring about Matthew. Using the seventeenth-century journal she stole from the college’s archives, Emma begins a search to uncover the secrecy shrouding Matthew’s past. When Matthew suddenly shows up and they rekindle their feelings for each other, Emma must decide how to respond to the truth of who Matthew is.

I quite enjoyed this second installment in “The Secret of the Journal” series from author C. F. Dunn. The historical detail woven into the story was fascinating to read about, and I thought the author did an excellent job at revealing the truth about Matthew in a riveting manner that kept me glued to the pages. I began to imagine what it would be like to have someone like Matthew exist in real life, and the complications that would come along with being who he is (I don’t want to say more for fear of ruining the plot for you!). The characters are wonderfully developed and very intriguing in their complexity. I do have to admit that the last quarter of the story slowed down in pace for me, and I thought that an attack that Emma suffered seemed somewhat tacked on to the story rather than developing as part of the main story arc, and it didn’t seem overly believable to me that such a thing would occur and then get dealt with in the way that it did. However, I also know that there is a third book in the series, and I am trusting that it will make more sense why the attack became part of the plot. Overall, I continue to enjoy these characters and love the history and secrecy that is woven into the story, and I am definitely looking forward to what comes next for Matthew and Emma!

I strongly recommend this book and award it 4 out of 5 stars.

A copy of this book has been provided courtesy of the publisher for the purposes of this unbiased review.
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Author 10 books23 followers
January 23, 2016
DEATH BE NOT PROUD . . . it is safe to say this novel really stretched by comprehension as a reader. Some good. Some bad.

This is book two in The Secrets of the Journal series. Since I didn’t read book one–MORTAL FIRE, I was at a bit of a disadvantage. If I hadn’t requested this book as part of a blog reviewer agreement I probably never would’ve finished it, but I am so glad that I did.

The first half of the book is a confusion between back-story and set-up. Since I didn’t read MORTAL FIRE, you would’ve assumed I would like the back-story to bring me up to speed. Instead, it only served to confuse and frustrate me. The back story never came right out and told me what happened in book one, it only alluded to it. I found myself reading and re-reading sections to try and grasp where the story had come from and where it was heading. So, for readers jumping in, it wasn’t too helpful, and probably for readers who already read book one, it probably frustrated because of the length of rehashing that happened.

The second half of the book is where momentum really picked up. It was so enthralling and captivating, I couldn’t put it down. Of course, the second half is where both hero and heroine are reunited. I have long said that I do not like romance books that keep the two main characters at arm’s length for an extended period of time, so I am sure that led to my dislike of the first half.

The other thing that was bothersome, is when reading the first half of the book I found myself wondering . . . is Matthew a ghost, a time traveler, an alien, etc. ? I am not into paranormal fiction so I kept wondering how long I was going to be in the dark regarding Matthew’s secret, and once revealed would I want to continue? No worries there. By the end of book two, you still don’t know what Matthew’s story is. And now, I am so emotionally invested, I will have to watch for the release of book three ROPE OF SAND in order to have my questions answered and conclusions tied up. If this was the hope of author C.F. Dunn, she achieved it expertly! This reader is on the hook for the last installment.

Note: Use of strong language

Book provided for review purposes.
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2,497 reviews57 followers
July 17, 2014
READ IN ENGLISH

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I received a free copy of this book from the publisher via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review, thank you!

Death Be Not Proud (of course named after the John Donne poem) is the second book in the The Secret Of The Journal-series.

I didn't know it was a second book in a series until I started reading and the book began with a summary of the first book. There was some confusion for me at the beginning of the book, as I had some troubles following what was going exactly, but I realise that's all my fault (I should have read the first book of course).

Emma is back home in England after what happened in the first book. She's depressed, until she finds a new way to investigate Matthew, and he's not what he seemed to be.

It started quite interesting, and I couldn't decide if it was going to be a thriller or some light fantasy. There are at least some mysterious things going on, but it really isn't a large part of the book. About halfway I lost interest as it turned out it was neither of them.

What I got was sloppy romance. I didn't like the romance. It was the kind of romance where Emma keeps telling him she's got nothing to offer him (although she teaches at a University). She keeps telling she's not good enough for mister oh-so perfect. He on his part makes decisions for her (how she liked that he assumed what she wanted to do; for once I'm not even sarcastic) en tells her he could so easily kill her and no one would ever know (and she's kind of fine with that; I mean: what a romantic thing to say). There is no more room for investigation, and the interesting plot lines from the beginning seem to be forgotten.

The formatting of the ebook I got was terrible, as in unreadable on a KOBO, so I had to read this book on my laptop. (This is of course due to the fact that's an ARC and not an ePub, but it ruins quite some of the pleasure of reading). This combined with the story in the second half of the book made this a bit of a struggle to finish. I won't be continuing this series.
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163 reviews3 followers
August 9, 2013
From the publisher:

Following the vicious attack by a psychotic colleague, and reeling from the suspicion that Matthew Lynes is not all that he seems, Professor Emma D’Eresby flees her college teaching position in Maine to her hometown in England— taking the mysterious seventeenth-century journal she stole from the college’s archives with her.
Broken physically and emotionally, Emma drifts until, fearing for their daughter’s sanity, her parents invite a family friend to assess her. In the course of their conversation, Emma discovers that he spoke to Matthew over thirty years before.
This finally spurs her into action and soon, when she finds what certainly must be a reference to Matthew in the journal, she begins to understand Matthew’s profound secret.
But when Matthew arrives to confess his love for her, she must decide if she can trust him—and he must decide if he can share his extraordinary secret with her. Drawn by a deep connection that both feel but don’t quite understand they find they must set aside their doubts and trust each other.
Readers will be thrilled by the second installment in The Secret of the Journal from British author C. F. Dunn. Mixing suspense, romance, and the supernatural, Death Be Not Proud explores the profound moral implications of a life seemingly invulnerable to time.


This is not a typical book for me, but it was well written, easy to read, and captures your attention. Although the subject matter wasn't of my choice, those that are interested in the supernatural, and love suspense, with a little romance thrown in, will definitely love this book. For me there were some unanswered questions, that maybe a third book would answer.


I received this book free from the publisher http://www.kregel.com . I was not required to write a positive review and the opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission’s 16 CFR, Part 255 : “Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising.”
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157 reviews10 followers
June 21, 2014
It's been a couple of years since I read the first book, Mortal Fire, so I don't remember the exact nature of how it ended, but I do remember the intensity of emotions between Emma and Matthew. (Talk about a connection! Whew!)

Emma, now home with her parents in England,recovering from her "accident" at the college, is trying to sort out her feelings and how she could continue to live without Matthew by her side. Meanwhile, she continues to research Matthew's past based upon what she read in the journal she "permanently borrowed" from the University, and is trying to come to terms with what she learns when Matthew arrives at her doorstep.

After realizing their feelings haven't changed, Matthew takes Emma back to the states where they discuss, albeit loudly and physically, their relationship and where it may be heading. Unfortunately, Matthew also reveals a secret that Emma must accept if she wants to stay with him, or decide to turn her back on him forever.

The depiction of where the characters were, as well as what they were doing is so vivid and rich that I could imagine walking into the old farmhouse/church/homestead as Emma learned about Matthew's history, and feel the coldness of the stone walls, while smelling the damp mossy smell of a building almost in ruins.

Spellbinding is probably not the word I should use for a Christian book, but this series has me hooked! I can't wait to find out what happens next. I have a few ideas, but I don't want to give you any spoilers because I'm starting to read book #3 as soon as I finish typing.

If you enjoy reading rich characters and descriptions, tied in with a bit of historical elements, then you will want to start reading this series immediately! Let me know what you think and Happy Reading!
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94 reviews
January 22, 2015
Death Be Not Proud is the second book in The Secret of the Journal series written by C.F. Dunn.

One thing I absolutely love about this author is that she knows how to write. Writing abilities aside, this second installment of this series is much less suspenseful than the first and a bit more tame in the storyline. The storyline seems to take us away from the secrets of a generational family research attempt to a new research project involving her new love, Matthew. This left me with questions still unanswered and a list of all new ones. The connection and bond between Emma and Matthew get stronger along with moral and personal challenges and obligations that are keeping them apart.

There is a paranormal twist that becomes more prevalent in this book (however it was alluded to in the first book). I will say that this storyline does not fit the typical paranormal storyline and it is definitely NOT a typical "Paranormal Romance" book. The main character, Emma, is a very moral person and the situations she encounters make her faith not so black and white. Matthew also appears to be very devout and they both have made choices which cause them guilt- and possibly more.

The ending leaves you with a bit of a cliff hanger and leaves clues as to what we may expect in book three. I do hope that the third book contains the answers to all the tidbits brought up in both book one and two and has a bit more suspense and intrigue!

Overall I'd recommend this book (and the first one, Mortal Fire) to adults who like history, intrigue, and clean romance with a twist! (3 1/2 stars)

I received this book via LibraryThing.com Early Reviewer giveaway.
1,324 reviews11 followers
August 11, 2013
To be honest after I requested to review this book I was worried I might regret it. After reading the back cover copy again I wondered if this book would interest me.

I have to say, I was pleasantly surprised and this book exceeded my expectations. From the first page I was drawn into Emma's world.

This is the second book in a series. I didn't read the first but wish I had. I didn't feel lost, but I did feel I was missing important pieces of the puzzle. I definitely want to go back and read the first book.

This is a very different book than what I would normally read. It has a supernatural, almost gothic, feel to it. I found myself wrapped up in the book and the mystery behind Matthew.

However, calling this book Christian fiction is used VERY loosely. There will be many Christians who pick up this book and will be offended. There is some cursing and I start to wonder if Emma really understands what it means to be a Christian as she seems to contemplate pre-martial sex. Interesting enough, I don't remember ever reading that Emma is a Christian, just that she has faith. I am pretty sure I didn't even see the name of Jesus in the book (but I could be wrong).

If you are someone who leans more toward secular books you might like this one, but it won't be for everyone. As I have read other reviews on this book some people really liked it and others not so much. I like it a lot, but I don't recommend this book for everyone. If you are looking for something different then pick up a copy.

I received this book from Kregel Publications in exchange for an honest review.
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Author 18 books21 followers
August 16, 2013
It's finally here! I've been waiting on pins and needles for Professor Emma D'Eresby to return with her journal. Just last September, I reviewed Mortal Fire, the first in the series. If you haven't read it yet, what are you waiting for?!? Hurry up, go read it.... Okay, now that you're ready for book two, here goes.

Emma is in London healing from her attack and struggling with knowing what is really going on with Matthew. She's recovering from what I would call PTSD like symptoms and just plain heartbreak. But the opportunity also arises for her to finally research the journal, and the answers she's been looking for with Matthew are surprisingly attached to what she finds inside. The story may seem old, but it's more present than expected.

It's so tempting to give it all away! What I'd love to do, is sit down with a cup of coffee and examine all the Ins and outs of the plot with you, but I can't bear to give away any of the great little surprises. It's what makes it so much fun to read. I called this an intellectual's spin on Twilight the first time around with all respect for both author's. I still stand by that, but it is a very distant comparison. This time around the story does center more around Emma and her personal state and the decisions she needs to make, but it also brings so many of the answers we were searching for in Mortal Fire. Kudos to the author for not dragging that out too long. :) And although the end does leave you with a hefty amount of "I want to know more-itis", it wraps up in a very satisfactory way.

Believe me, it's a can't-put-the-book-down-until-four-am kind of read. Can't wait for book three.
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14 reviews3 followers
August 13, 2013
Like a child waiting for Christmas, the arrival of the second book in this installment could not come soon enough. Again, I found myself unable to put the book down as I was anxious to see what would develop with Emma and Matthew upon her return from the United States to England.

This book was not what I anticipated and I found myself liking Matthew much less than I did in the first book. This may be the intention of C.F. to cause a twist for the final installment, however, I found him to be controlling, unpredictable and am shocked that Emma is under his spell. Especially after the realization of details regarding his wife which come to light in this book (I won't share more details as not to disclose a very pertinent and important part of the story).

Death Be Not Proud does indeed share some insight in to the history of Matthew's family and family life. I was left very disappointed in Emma's decision to remain in a relationship with Matthew, however, am holding out hope that the final installment will allow the reader to learn more about Emma's past as I feel there is something quite unique about her that has not yet been disclosed.

Disclosure of Material Connection: I received this book free from Kregel Publications as part of their book review bloggers program. I was not required to write a positive review. The opinions I have expressed are my own. I am disclosing this in accordance with the Federal Trade Commission's 16 CFR, Part 255 : "Guides Concerning the Use of Endorsements and Testimonials in Advertising."
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1,068 reviews94 followers
December 31, 2015
I’m not entirely sure how to review this one. It held my interest. If I didn’t have a million other things going on last week, it would’ve been read in a day or two. But, it was overly dramatic for me. The stuff between Emma and Matthew … He’s awesome and an ass all rolled into one. How she can trust him the way she does is beyond me. It’s funny, because I usually get annoyed by the lady bloggers out there who get all pissy when there’s a guy like this in a book – and the girl’s like this one is. And this book kinda makes me see their point … Don’t get me wrong: I generally like both, especially Emma. I just don’t know if I can reconcile Matthew to the “monster” within. I sure hope there’s more sense made of that in the next book!

What didn’t help me much was not remembering the first book, Mortal Fire, very well. It’s just been too long. When events were referenced, I sorta remembered, but not well enough to fully understand the reference. Still, that’s not this book’s fault. And, despite that, I did find myself very interested to see how everything would play out.

Will I read Death Be Not Proud by C.F. Dunn again? Probably not. I will continue the series – if for no reason other than the fact that I’m wondering what, indeed is Matthew’s explanation. And will he and Emma get the chance they’re hoping for? And, how does Christmas with his family go? After having said that, perhaps I would read this book again – after finishing the series so I can read the whole thing when it’s all fresh in my mind. We’ll see.
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1,999 reviews55 followers
August 13, 2013
My thoughts: When I read book one in The Secret of the Journal series, Mortal Fire, I found it a very unusual read the conclusion of which simply left the reader hanging for resolution but anxious to read on. Here in Death Be Not Proud we begin to see a light in the tunnel.

The author, C.F. Dunn, does a very good job of crafting her story and creating characters. The visuals created with words help the reader to grasp where they are, what is happening, and all the people involved. I find the premise of Matthew's unique qualities hard to ingest and daunting to the rational mind. Hopefully in the next installment in the series, we will see some reasoning behind his unique qualities - though surely they will be the creation of a very active imagination.

I know that "love can be blind" (and no, that is not a quote from this book), but Emma seems blind to the fact that she is placing her trust in someone whose very existence should not be. I think that somehow in the end we will find that her own family the D'Eresby's, including the grandmother of which, seems to "know" something about what is going on connected with Matthew. So book three should give up more secrets that are hidden from plain view and not only in the journal.

DISCLOSURE: I received a complimentary copy of Death Be Not Proud from Kregel on behalf of Lion Hudson in exchange for my honest review. No compensation was received for this review.
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587 reviews
August 13, 2013
Every once in awhile a reader takes a chance on an author she's never heard of before and low and behold she's hooked! This is the case with me. I read Mortal Fire (the first book in this series) by C. F. Dunn and loved it! I'm always a little taken aback when I read a book by a new author and love it! Silly.isn't.it? It's kind of like always eating the same foods and then loving something new?!?!?
Anyway, I love the book cover of Death Be Not Proud. It reminds me of how perfect we think our mirrored lives are and then we find a crack.
I was slightly disappointed in the ending to Mortal Fire. But didn't say so because the book was so well written. Now I know why Ms. Dunn left the ending as she did. It is continued in Death Be Not Proud.
As with the first book . . . this read has a well thought out plot and wonderful descriptions of England.
The relationship between Emma and Matthew is somewhat disconcerting. I really want Emma to let go of this guy. And what is the secret that he holds so close?
As Emma delves into her family history she finds out more than, maybe, she wanted to know.
More than an interesting read this is a fantabulous, well written story full of emotion, suspense, history and family ties.
I thought Mortal Fire was great but Book 2, Death Be Not Proud, is even better!
*This book was provided for review by Kregel Publications*
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Author 29 books162 followers
August 16, 2013
Death Be Not Proud
The Secret of the Journal Book 2
By C.F. Dunn

Emma D'Eresby has returned to England with her parents where she seems to be almost in a stupor as she tries to make sense of both Matthew and what occurred in Maine. As Emma searches for answers she comes across evidence that points to Matthew being even more unique than she first thought.

When Emma sends Matthew a cryptic message she fears that she has driven him away. But to her surprise Matthew shows up in England and wants her to return to Maine and celebrate Christmas with his family as they had planned. Emma agrees to this plan, but before they spend the holiday with Matthew's family they speak of what Emma has discovered and its impact on their present and possible future together.

I have to say the first part of the book seemed to drag as Emma dealt with the mental fallout of her experience and her parents were on the verge of having her committed. But the second half picked up after Matthew came on the scene. I would definitely urge the reader to read book 1 - Mortal Fire before read this book as it will help the reader's understanding of the book. This is not to say you have to read the first book, but it is highly recommended for your comprehension. And who wants to start a series part way into it?

I was provided a copy of this book by Kregel in exchange for my honest review.
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Author 25 books19 followers
October 13, 2017
The challenge for a mystery writer is that they have got to maintain the suspense as long as possible, but they also need to provide satisfactory solutions - and to do so in a realistic way. It can be hard to do that in a single novel, let alone stretching it over five books as the writer is doing in 'The Secret of the Journal'. But in this, the second book, she is certainly showing herself up to the challenge. The main character, Emma D'Eresby, uncovers some secrets (by delving into the past - a process which I found fascinating in itself) but that leaves her with even more questions to answer. She discovers where Matthew Lynes has come from - but exactly who or what is he?

Nor is this just an intellectual conundrum, since she has fallen deeply in love with him. Along with the revealing of mysteries there is also the development of characters and of relationships - all done in a way that adds depth and credibility to the story. I particularly liked the way that Emma's difficult relationship with her father is handled.

All this is done in the context of well paced and finely crafted writing. If you like looking at the nuts and bolts of a story, watch out for how the writer uses a child's game to lead into a surprise meeting. I'll say no more, for fear of spoilers, but it's very deftly done.

Three more books to go, and plenty of mystery yet to be uncovered!
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Author 6 books41 followers
July 14, 2019
Okay, I will say... I LOVED this for book except for one reason. The one reason is large and overtakes...well...everything, but apart from that, I enjoyed Death Be Not Proud. Although not suspenseful like Mortal Fire, it was a good read.

Now, there are spoilers below as I reveal the ONE THING.

So, Mathew's not a widower. He's still married. Good gravy.
While they don't consummate their relationship, it still feels just kinda...off, their being involved physically/romantically, despite the circumstances of his wife's status as living and, ahem...married.
Especially considering they are characters with "high moral standards" and both very deeply committed to their faiths. It just got under my skin that they, being quite serious about their moral convictions, were engaged in a romantic relationship, knowing he still had a wife. Just didn't feel right to me. I'm like..."C.F. Dunn, whyyyyy did you have to make him a married man? Whyyyy couldn't you have thrown a DIFFERENT monkey wrench into the plot? Seriously--any monkey wrench--I mean not the vampire one, cause duh--but seriously, a different one. The married and having an affair (although consensual from his living wife) just isn't cute any way you slice it. Yuuuckkk."

But, apart from that--I enjoyed the book.
95 reviews
July 10, 2013
I liked the first book and was looking forward to the second, but found it a disappointment. First, it doesn't make sense to me to write a book that is "christian fiction" and then completely deviate from historical christianty. If you want to write fantasy, and remain in the christian genre, I think spiritual warfare or false prophets would work better. Immortals? not so much. I just thought it was a stretch.

Secondly, the main character is hardly christian (unless she has in mind a redemption theme for book three). I see this rather more than I would like to in christian fiction. She doesn't go to church. How can one be a part of the Body of Christ without belonging to a community of believers? There simply is no such thing as a Lone Ranger christian and I don't approve of misleading readers. If you are not writing to build up the Kingdom of God (rather than just your own), then what is the point? Please just stick to secular fiction. Remember that you will have to answer to God for what you are putting out there.

Third, I thought it could have done with a better job of editing. The writing came off as somewhat mediocre.
811 reviews8 followers
October 19, 2014
I enjoyed the first of this trilogy which dealt in greater detail with Emma's work and research. By the end it was fairly clear what Matthew's secret was and I couldn't wait to read more. Unfortunately, the research part of this the second volume is dealt with fairly speedily and to be honest thereafter it turns into something of a soppy love story which is not consummated due to the characters high moral stance. To me that doesn't ring true. Neither does Emma's sudden reconciliation with her father. Stuff like that doesn't happen in real families, however desirable it may be. At bottom I find Emma to be a total wimp and not credible. Matthew is too good to be true. Would someone brought up in the 17th century be such a superb specimen of manhood?
All that having been said, the book is well written. It left me wanting to discover what other secrets remain and what the denouement will be. It is more difficult, if not impossible, to work out, unlike with the first book. The final volume is on my shelves but I'm going to wait a few weeks before taking it down. One final point. I don't quite get the adulation from Colin Dexter.
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