Though a short book at only 102 pages, this story had a lot of suspense and tension. Unfortunately, much of the conversations between characters was repetitive and felt patronizing, as though the writer wasn't sure the reader could figure out how the characters were feeling unless they spelt it out..in triplicate. The main character of Kerry wasn't badly written. She seemed to act her age, have the issues a 15-yr old would, and though a bit naive, behaved in a believable manner. Her parent, however, were written in such one-dimensional tones that they became very annoying. The mother was stuck in the role of oppressive,, over-protector whose vocabulary was limited to a few phrases stuck on repeat. The author seemed to find great importance in the father's tendency to dress and act 20 years younger than he was, serving to embarrass our main character. That was fine, until it too was repeated over and over with no new information. The conversations between Kerry and her friends were extended and over explained.
A pleasing highlight was the way the grandfather was written. He had a back story that was both interesting and relevant to the mystery and his relationships with Kerry, Kerry's mother and the mystery. I was able to make a connection with this character and care what happened to him in the story and have an interest in what he had to say. Perhaps he should have been the center of this tale.