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More than Rivals
When is a chance meeting not by chance? Maybe when you hide who you are.
The night before Lily Robles announces she’s running for Congress, she meets a handsome stranger at a coffee shop. Their chemistry is strong, and not wanting to scare him off, she avoids telling him she’s a local politician. She doesn't want the night to end—until she realizes he’s one of her opponents in the primary.
Jack Bengston can’t place where he’s seen Lily’s pretty face. He's taken with her, and he's sure the feeling is mutual—until she leaves him hanging and without her number.
When Jack and Lily meet again as candidates, California State Senator John Bengston and Sonoma County Supervisor Ursula Robles, they find an awkward romantic encounter is no way to kick-off a campaign, but how do you stop an attraction once it starts? There are times when politicians want to put their identities aside.
The night before Lily Robles announces she’s running for Congress, she meets a handsome stranger at a coffee shop. Their chemistry is strong, and not wanting to scare him off, she avoids telling him she’s a local politician. She doesn't want the night to end—until she realizes he’s one of her opponents in the primary.
Jack Bengston can’t place where he’s seen Lily’s pretty face. He's taken with her, and he's sure the feeling is mutual—until she leaves him hanging and without her number.
When Jack and Lily meet again as candidates, California State Senator John Bengston and Sonoma County Supervisor Ursula Robles, they find an awkward romantic encounter is no way to kick-off a campaign, but how do you stop an attraction once it starts? There are times when politicians want to put their identities aside.
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First published March 11, 2013
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Mary Whitney
158 books592 followersMary Whitney blames Laura Ingalls Wilder and Margaret Mitchell for her obsession with romance novels. At an early age, Mary fell in love with the Little House series and its dreamy hero, Almanzo Wilder, who only wanted Laura to be Laura. Like many women, Mary later graduated to the ultimate, tall and dark bad boy, Rhett Butler, who loved Scarlett despite her flaws.
Mary has lived around the U.S., and after a first career in the non-profit world and politics, she's settled in Northern California with her husband and daughters. She spends her days writing characters she hopes somehow capture the romance of Rhett and Scarlett and Almanzo and Laura. She's a firm believer in what Rhett says to Scarlett: "You should be kissed, and often, and by someone who knows how.
Mary has lived around the U.S., and after a first career in the non-profit world and politics, she's settled in Northern California with her husband and daughters. She spends her days writing characters she hopes somehow capture the romance of Rhett and Scarlett and Almanzo and Laura. She's a firm believer in what Rhett says to Scarlett: "You should be kissed, and often, and by someone who knows how.
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December 17, 2017
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2.5 stars.
La premisa de esta historia captó mi atención en un plis-plas. Me encantan los romances entre políticos y/o abogados. Son tan difíciles de encontrar. Así que cuando leí que dos candidatos compitiendo por el mismo puesto (sin saberlo) se sienten atraídos el uno por el otro… bueno… ya me tenía ganada antes de empezar.
Pero aunque la idea de la historia era atractiva, la ejecución ha dejado mucho que desear.
Lily y Jack son perfectos. Son guapos, buenas personas, trabajadores y anteponen las necesidades de los demás a las suyas propias. Sobre el papel son la definición perfecta de cómo deberían ser todos los servidores públicos. Sobre el papel. Porque en la realidad, bien, en la realidad, por muy cínico que suene, esto es completamente irrealista. Ha sido todo como flotar en el vacío. No hay baches, ni altibajos, ni aceleraciones ni frenazos. Todo ha sido una línea plana. Sin emociones. No una buena receta para un romance.
Podría decirse que ha sido todo demasiado políticamente correcto. Valga la redundancia.
He echado de menos las confrontaciones, las luchas de poder, las consecuencias que las acciones de uno mismo tienen en los demás. Ha sido todo muy limpio, muy claro, nítido, sin la menor sombra o duda. Incluso la breve e insignificante trama con la otra mujer se ha solucionado limpiamente casi antes de empezar.
Esperaba algomás de esta historia. Pero ha sido tan dulce, tan empalagosa y tan plana que me ha resultado imposible de creer. Muy irrealista.
O a lo mejor es que estoy acostumbrada a series e historias sobre políticos fríos, calculadores y capaces de cualquier cosa por alcanzar el poder y esta historia se ha parecido más a Sonrisas y Lagrimas (que me encantó, dicho sea de paso) que a una historia sobre políticos y política reales.
Así que, mi pega es que la historia es demasiado perfecta. Los protagonistas demasiado perfectos. Sus familias demasiado perfectas. La carrera de los candidatos limpia y perfecta. Y el final, bueno, el final, como ya he mencionado antes, demasiado políticamente correcto en detrimento de la poca personalidad que los protagonistas tenían en un principio. Ha sonado todo a cuento de hadas.
***
2.5 stars.
This story´s blurb caught my attention as soon as I read it. I love romances between politicians and /or lawyers. They are so hard to find. So when I read that two candidates competing for the same position (unknowingly by them) are attracted to each other ... well ... I was a goner...
But although the story´s premise was attractive, the execution has left much to be desired.
Lily and Jack are perfect . They are handsome, good people, hard workers and they always put others´ needs before their own. On paper they are the perfect definition of how all public servants should be. On paper. Because in reality, well, in reality, however cynical it may sound, this is completely unrealistic. It has been like floating in a vacuum. No bumps, no ups and downs, no accelerations nor brakings. Everything has been flat. Emotionless. Not a good recipe for a romance.
It could be said that everything has been too politically correct. Pardon for the redundancy.
I have missed the confrontations, the power struggles, the consequences that one's actions have on others. Everything has been very clean, very clear, precise, without the slightest shadow or doubt. Even the brief and insignificant plot with the other woman has been solved cleanly almost before it had started.
I expected something more from this story. But it has been so sweet, so cloying and so flat that I found it impossible to believe. Very unrealistic.
Or maybe I'm used to series and stories about cold, calculating and capable of anything to achieve power politicians and this story has been more like The Sound Of Music (which I loved, by the way) that a story about real politics and politicians.
So, my main complaint is that the story is too perfect. The MC´s too perfect. Their families too perfect. The candidates race too clean and perfect. And the end, well, the end, as I mentioned before, too politically correct to the detriment of the little personality that the MC´s had at the beginning. It had sounded too much like a fairy tale.
2.5 stars.
La premisa de esta historia captó mi atención en un plis-plas. Me encantan los romances entre políticos y/o abogados. Son tan difíciles de encontrar. Así que cuando leí que dos candidatos compitiendo por el mismo puesto (sin saberlo) se sienten atraídos el uno por el otro… bueno… ya me tenía ganada antes de empezar.
Pero aunque la idea de la historia era atractiva, la ejecución ha dejado mucho que desear.
Lily y Jack son perfectos. Son guapos, buenas personas, trabajadores y anteponen las necesidades de los demás a las suyas propias. Sobre el papel son la definición perfecta de cómo deberían ser todos los servidores públicos. Sobre el papel. Porque en la realidad, bien, en la realidad, por muy cínico que suene, esto es completamente irrealista. Ha sido todo como flotar en el vacío. No hay baches, ni altibajos, ni aceleraciones ni frenazos. Todo ha sido una línea plana. Sin emociones. No una buena receta para un romance.
Podría decirse que ha sido todo demasiado políticamente correcto. Valga la redundancia.
He echado de menos las confrontaciones, las luchas de poder, las consecuencias que las acciones de uno mismo tienen en los demás. Ha sido todo muy limpio, muy claro, nítido, sin la menor sombra o duda. Incluso la breve e insignificante trama con la otra mujer se ha solucionado limpiamente casi antes de empezar.
Esperaba algo
O a lo mejor es que estoy acostumbrada a series e historias sobre políticos fríos, calculadores y capaces de cualquier cosa por alcanzar el poder y esta historia se ha parecido más a Sonrisas y Lagrimas (que me encantó, dicho sea de paso) que a una historia sobre políticos y política reales.
Así que, mi pega es que la historia es demasiado perfecta. Los protagonistas demasiado perfectos. Sus familias demasiado perfectas. La carrera de los candidatos limpia y perfecta. Y el final, bueno, el final, como ya he mencionado antes, demasiado políticamente correcto en detrimento de la poca personalidad que los protagonistas tenían en un principio. Ha sonado todo a cuento de hadas.
***
2.5 stars.
This story´s blurb caught my attention as soon as I read it. I love romances between politicians and /or lawyers. They are so hard to find. So when I read that two candidates competing for the same position (unknowingly by them) are attracted to each other ... well ... I was a goner...
But although the story´s premise was attractive, the execution has left much to be desired.
Lily and Jack are perfect . They are handsome, good people, hard workers and they always put others´ needs before their own. On paper they are the perfect definition of how all public servants should be. On paper. Because in reality, well, in reality, however cynical it may sound, this is completely unrealistic. It has been like floating in a vacuum. No bumps, no ups and downs, no accelerations nor brakings. Everything has been flat. Emotionless. Not a good recipe for a romance.
It could be said that everything has been too politically correct. Pardon for the redundancy.
I have missed the confrontations, the power struggles, the consequences that one's actions have on others. Everything has been very clean, very clear, precise, without the slightest shadow or doubt. Even the brief and insignificant plot with the other woman has been solved cleanly almost before it had started.
I expected something
Or maybe I'm used to series and stories about cold, calculating and capable of anything to achieve power politicians and this story has been more like The Sound Of Music (which I loved, by the way) that a story about real politics and politicians.
So, my main complaint is that the story is too perfect. The MC´s too perfect. Their families too perfect. The candidates race too clean and perfect. And the end, well, the end, as I mentioned before, too politically correct to the detriment of the little personality that the MC´s had at the beginning. It had sounded too much like a fairy tale.
March 16, 2013
Short non-plus political romance trope. Light on just about everything including romance and plot. Readers will find editing problems as well. This one was an Amazon freebie so I'll not complain too much.
July 12, 2013
This was a REALLY enjoyable read for me. I liked the realness of the plot line and the characters were interesting, and kept me reading long into the night. The plot line was different, and I wanted to know HOW these two, who seemed at a crossroads, were going to pull off a relationship and keep on running against each other.
Jack is charming, and determined, and Lily, is not a pushover, but she has a big heart, and despite not wanting to be "the girl" in the race, she sure has girl feelings towards Jack.
My favorite scene was at the Democratic Dinner that Lily wasn't supposed to go to, you finally see her break down and actually let herself be a woman, and have those "Feelings" we all HATE when we see the boy we like with another girl.
Fabulous read, interesting characters and I know many of my followers will enjoy it! Just so you know, the bedroom door is closed!!
Enjoy and Happy Reading!
Jack is charming, and determined, and Lily, is not a pushover, but she has a big heart, and despite not wanting to be "the girl" in the race, she sure has girl feelings towards Jack.
My favorite scene was at the Democratic Dinner that Lily wasn't supposed to go to, you finally see her break down and actually let herself be a woman, and have those "Feelings" we all HATE when we see the boy we like with another girl.
Fabulous read, interesting characters and I know many of my followers will enjoy it! Just so you know, the bedroom door is closed!!
Enjoy and Happy Reading!
March 19, 2013
We are in the year of Political Romance, "House of Cards" on Netflix, new Political Romance/Thrillers on TV, why not get your reading fix with Mary Whitney?
Mary Whitney combines California Politics and Romance, keeps the reader either running through Point Reyes National Park to the Community Town-halls in Northern California with the same aplomb as Ursula Robles would in her sensible pumps. Her heroine has spunk, grace and intelligent, why not hang out in that world for a while? The best part of this predicament is that one can do that, since Mary has a few more books in her published shelves, so go ahead read all of them.
Mary Whitney combines California Politics and Romance, keeps the reader either running through Point Reyes National Park to the Community Town-halls in Northern California with the same aplomb as Ursula Robles would in her sensible pumps. Her heroine has spunk, grace and intelligent, why not hang out in that world for a while? The best part of this predicament is that one can do that, since Mary has a few more books in her published shelves, so go ahead read all of them.
January 5, 2016
Quite simply, Mary Whitney is one of a kind. In the genre of political romance...if such a genre exists...this author has an incredible gift for creating charming, vibrant, and diverse characters and placing them in fascinating contexts. Whitney combines beautiful love stories with interesting political situations, and compelling family/friendship bonds. This is absolutely the case with More Than Rivals! I gladly give this story 5 stars, and strongly encourage you to give this a read!
We begin with Jack and Lily randomly meeting at a coffee shop one evening. At first sight, there’s a spark between them. Jack and Lily spend a few moments getting to know each other while flirting about their similar tastes in coffee. Jack is ready to pursue something more:
"Come on. You're the prettiest, most interesting woman I've met in a long time. Let me see you again."
However, Lily seems reticent. Even though she leaves Jack without a promise of a date, Lily implies that they will meet again soon......................
Well, it turns out Jack is really California State Senator John Bengston, candidate for the recently vacated U.S. House of Representatives seat. And Lily, is actually Ursula Robles, Sonoma County Supervisor, and Jack’s newest rival for Congressional office!
Moreover, Lily’s previous encounters with Jack aren’t very good:
"John Bengston had always annoyed the hell out of her...Senator Ignore." Yikes!
When Jack and Lily meet again at a campaign event, he is still eager about pursuing a romantic relationship, but she is very wary:
"...you should treat me differently. Don't be friendly to me at all. It will be better for both of us." :(
As Jack and Lily continue in the campaign, things between them get complicated. But while trying to negotiate the politics of their situation, they find that they are more than rivals and more than friends.
I adore both Jack and Lily, and they share many of the characteristics I admire. They are savvy and ambitious, yet kind and generous, especially when it comes to one another, their families, and their friends.
I really like watching Jack and Lily meet, realize that they like one another, avoid one another, and then finally pursue a relationship.
Before delving into some of my fave moments, I think it’s important to make a few comments about Whitney’s writing decisions.
First, I vigorously applaud the diversity of her characterization. Whitney isn’t afraid to use characters of diverse races, sexual orientations, ethnicities, and other cultural qualities. As a woman of color, it’s so refreshing to pick up a book and read about another woman of color dominating in the politics. In my opinion, this predilection--which is also evident in her other novels--sets Whitney apart (and above) other contemporary romance authors.
Second, I think Whitney does a great job of describing political institutions and events in a way that is accessible to the average reader without getting bogged down in details. This is true about the description of California’s system of primary campaigns, debates, and elections. Again, I believe this characteristic is evident in More Than Rivals, and also indicative of Whitney’s other writings.
Finally, she is a dynamo at using time. In More Than Rivals, we cover the entire primary election season--roughly 9 months. Whitney does a great job of moving the story along, while giving readers enough markers so we don’t get lost in the campaigning.
On to my fave moments:
1. I love learning about Lily’s home life. It’s so heartbreaking to learn about Lily’s former husband. But her son Luke is adorable, and it’s great to see Lily with Luke. And while Lily is definitely a political animal, it seems she inherits it from her mama, Martha!
2. There are other fantastic secondary characters, in particular Jack and Lily’s best friends.
For example, Bill Dresser (Jack’s campaign manager and friend) is funny:
"Prince Charming got rejected? That's so sad. Now you know what it's like for the rest of us." LOL!
And Jordan (Lily’s campaign manager and friend) is hilarious too. He has the best interactions with Lily:
L: "Objectively, he is good looking.
J: “Well, I wouldn't kick him out of my bed.”
L: “That's not a very high bar.” Bwahahahahahaha!
Bill and Jordan are good mirrors for Jack and Lily too. Billy and Jordan have a great way of clarifying the conundrum facing Jack/Lily, presenting different scenarios and options, and helping Jack/Lily flush out their thoughts.
3. The first debate is great! And Lily stands out in a fantastic way! She relates to people so well on a human level...I love seeing that!
4. Jack and Lily's interactions are so cute. And I have to give Jack credit, he's persistent when it comes to Lily. He’s very watchful...watching her interact with family, friends, and potential voters. Jack also defends Lily and reaches out to her. Plus their jogging dates make me extremely happy!
5. I love the scenes between Jack and Luke. There’s this moment with a soccer ball, that’s *beyond* adorable! Fate just keeps intertwining Lily and Jack and their friends/family...so great!
6. L: "It's stupid when people discount a candidate for spending their life in politics. I don't think less of you. In fact, I think you're meant to succeed. You're good at it, and you work to help people." (Random, but) I COMPLETELY AGREE!
7. Jack is so enamoured with Lily...it’s so clear:
J: "Babe, you don't even know... I adore you." *FAINTS* SO WONDERFUL!!!
8. The sweet moments between Jack and Lily are excellent, but there are also some VERY SEXY MOMENTS:
Playing in the pool...
"I think you're beautiful. And I've wanted to kiss you for months." Awwwwww!
When Jack comes to Lily's work and then they have their first kiss and date...
The little lemon at Point Reyes is NICE...
J: "You're close aren't you?... Give me a second, then." UNF! Semi-public sexy times FTW!
And I definitely enjoy the couch foreplay...
“As she touched him through his jeans, a human growl came from his chest. He leaned back from her breasts and smiled. ‘Time to take you to bed.’” HOT HOT HOT!
There is quite a plot twist towards the end that totally throws the characters (and the reader) into a tailspin. Alas, such is politics! Jack and Lily are able to weather the storm, and by the time we get to the resolution, we have complete faith that they’re going to share a long, happy, and politically active life together:
"When I was growing up, I'd hear in church at a sacrament was an outward and visible sign of an inward and spiritual grace. Lily, you have truly graced my life." *CRIES* PERFECT!
I had a blast reading More than Rivals. Whitney takes a really interesting premise and weaves it into an engaging story that keep readers on their toes. This is a MUSTREAD folks, you’ll love it!
Many thanks to the author for the opportunity to read this book!
We begin with Jack and Lily randomly meeting at a coffee shop one evening. At first sight, there’s a spark between them. Jack and Lily spend a few moments getting to know each other while flirting about their similar tastes in coffee. Jack is ready to pursue something more:
"Come on. You're the prettiest, most interesting woman I've met in a long time. Let me see you again."
However, Lily seems reticent. Even though she leaves Jack without a promise of a date, Lily implies that they will meet again soon......................
Well, it turns out Jack is really California State Senator John Bengston, candidate for the recently vacated U.S. House of Representatives seat. And Lily, is actually Ursula Robles, Sonoma County Supervisor, and Jack’s newest rival for Congressional office!
Moreover, Lily’s previous encounters with Jack aren’t very good:
"John Bengston had always annoyed the hell out of her...Senator Ignore." Yikes!
When Jack and Lily meet again at a campaign event, he is still eager about pursuing a romantic relationship, but she is very wary:
"...you should treat me differently. Don't be friendly to me at all. It will be better for both of us." :(
As Jack and Lily continue in the campaign, things between them get complicated. But while trying to negotiate the politics of their situation, they find that they are more than rivals and more than friends.
I adore both Jack and Lily, and they share many of the characteristics I admire. They are savvy and ambitious, yet kind and generous, especially when it comes to one another, their families, and their friends.
I really like watching Jack and Lily meet, realize that they like one another, avoid one another, and then finally pursue a relationship.
Before delving into some of my fave moments, I think it’s important to make a few comments about Whitney’s writing decisions.
First, I vigorously applaud the diversity of her characterization. Whitney isn’t afraid to use characters of diverse races, sexual orientations, ethnicities, and other cultural qualities. As a woman of color, it’s so refreshing to pick up a book and read about another woman of color dominating in the politics. In my opinion, this predilection--which is also evident in her other novels--sets Whitney apart (and above) other contemporary romance authors.
Second, I think Whitney does a great job of describing political institutions and events in a way that is accessible to the average reader without getting bogged down in details. This is true about the description of California’s system of primary campaigns, debates, and elections. Again, I believe this characteristic is evident in More Than Rivals, and also indicative of Whitney’s other writings.
Finally, she is a dynamo at using time. In More Than Rivals, we cover the entire primary election season--roughly 9 months. Whitney does a great job of moving the story along, while giving readers enough markers so we don’t get lost in the campaigning.
On to my fave moments:
1. I love learning about Lily’s home life. It’s so heartbreaking to learn about Lily’s former husband. But her son Luke is adorable, and it’s great to see Lily with Luke. And while Lily is definitely a political animal, it seems she inherits it from her mama, Martha!
2. There are other fantastic secondary characters, in particular Jack and Lily’s best friends.
For example, Bill Dresser (Jack’s campaign manager and friend) is funny:
"Prince Charming got rejected? That's so sad. Now you know what it's like for the rest of us." LOL!
And Jordan (Lily’s campaign manager and friend) is hilarious too. He has the best interactions with Lily:
L: "Objectively, he is good looking.
J: “Well, I wouldn't kick him out of my bed.”
L: “That's not a very high bar.” Bwahahahahahaha!
Bill and Jordan are good mirrors for Jack and Lily too. Billy and Jordan have a great way of clarifying the conundrum facing Jack/Lily, presenting different scenarios and options, and helping Jack/Lily flush out their thoughts.
3. The first debate is great! And Lily stands out in a fantastic way! She relates to people so well on a human level...I love seeing that!
4. Jack and Lily's interactions are so cute. And I have to give Jack credit, he's persistent when it comes to Lily. He’s very watchful...watching her interact with family, friends, and potential voters. Jack also defends Lily and reaches out to her. Plus their jogging dates make me extremely happy!
5. I love the scenes between Jack and Luke. There’s this moment with a soccer ball, that’s *beyond* adorable! Fate just keeps intertwining Lily and Jack and their friends/family...so great!
6. L: "It's stupid when people discount a candidate for spending their life in politics. I don't think less of you. In fact, I think you're meant to succeed. You're good at it, and you work to help people." (Random, but) I COMPLETELY AGREE!
7. Jack is so enamoured with Lily...it’s so clear:
J: "Babe, you don't even know... I adore you." *FAINTS* SO WONDERFUL!!!
8. The sweet moments between Jack and Lily are excellent, but there are also some VERY SEXY MOMENTS:
Playing in the pool...
"I think you're beautiful. And I've wanted to kiss you for months." Awwwwww!
When Jack comes to Lily's work and then they have their first kiss and date...
The little lemon at Point Reyes is NICE...
J: "You're close aren't you?... Give me a second, then." UNF! Semi-public sexy times FTW!
And I definitely enjoy the couch foreplay...
“As she touched him through his jeans, a human growl came from his chest. He leaned back from her breasts and smiled. ‘Time to take you to bed.’” HOT HOT HOT!
There is quite a plot twist towards the end that totally throws the characters (and the reader) into a tailspin. Alas, such is politics! Jack and Lily are able to weather the storm, and by the time we get to the resolution, we have complete faith that they’re going to share a long, happy, and politically active life together:
"When I was growing up, I'd hear in church at a sacrament was an outward and visible sign of an inward and spiritual grace. Lily, you have truly graced my life." *CRIES* PERFECT!
I had a blast reading More than Rivals. Whitney takes a really interesting premise and weaves it into an engaging story that keep readers on their toes. This is a MUSTREAD folks, you’ll love it!
Many thanks to the author for the opportunity to read this book!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
December 8, 2013
I gotta confess that when I read the word RIVALS in the title of this book I really thought I would find a little more angst in the story. The fact that there was none was not a disappointment though.
MORE THAN RIVALS is a sweet story with all the romantic elements of a "classic" love story even the meet cute. The fact that both MC are "politicians" was very new for me (in romantic stories) and I think the author did a great job because I loved reading about it and was really curious to know what was going to happen next in the election and to the candidates et al.
GREAT BOOK, DEFINITELY RECOMMEND IT.
MORE THAN RIVALS is a sweet story with all the romantic elements of a "classic" love story even the meet cute. The fact that both MC are "politicians" was very new for me (in romantic stories) and I think the author did a great job because I loved reading about it and was really curious to know what was going to happen next in the election and to the candidates et al.
GREAT BOOK, DEFINITELY RECOMMEND IT.
March 17, 2013
Really enjoyed it!
Got this free on the kindle, and I honestly didn't think I would like this book as much since it involves politics - and I'm not a huge fan of it. But it's more of a romance book with a little bit of politics integrated into it. I loved the beginning, and I absolutely loved the ending. Carrots. Hah, got me there! The ending was simply so adorable and hilarious. The characters, Lily and Jack, are depicted so realistically and they have depth to them. It's a quick paced read - and I read it under two hours. A page turner and a favorite.
Got this free on the kindle, and I honestly didn't think I would like this book as much since it involves politics - and I'm not a huge fan of it. But it's more of a romance book with a little bit of politics integrated into it. I loved the beginning, and I absolutely loved the ending. Carrots. Hah, got me there! The ending was simply so adorable and hilarious. The characters, Lily and Jack, are depicted so realistically and they have depth to them. It's a quick paced read - and I read it under two hours. A page turner and a favorite.
August 14, 2013
This was TRULY an enjoyable read for me. I just love it when a book keeps my full attention.
I enjoyed the witty writing with such an original plot and well developed characters.
I am not a political person, and I was afraid that this would be more political jargon and less of a good story, but I was SO wrong.
I enjoyed it, loved it and I'm so looking forward to reading more of Mary Whitney in the future!!
I enjoyed the witty writing with such an original plot and well developed characters.
I am not a political person, and I was afraid that this would be more political jargon and less of a good story, but I was SO wrong.
I enjoyed it, loved it and I'm so looking forward to reading more of Mary Whitney in the future!!
October 30, 2014
I love everything Mary Whitney writes and this book is no exception! I absolutely love Lily and Jack together and the ending could not have been more perfect!
April 28, 2020
I like the premise, but it feels like the author rushed out the ending there. Would be nice if she inserted few more chapters so that we could cherish the happy-ever-after of the main leads.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
June 28, 2013
First off, I would like to start off by saying that I am not usually into politics. I don’t really follow it and secondly I know next to nothing about politics in America, especially on this level. Yet this book was still easy to follow, even for me, an absolutely uninitiated person in the land of politics. This was a great plus for the book, because to me it seems pretty smart to not exclude any readers so easily. Because it may be a love story, it’s pretty important to understand the politics at hand to get a more complete view of the situation.
The story was good; it was clearly a romance novel so the story storyline was very clear cut. But it was very well written and I especially enjoyed the conversations. They were just so much fun and felt so real. That was really one of my favourite parts in the book, hands down. Especially the conversations between Jack and Lily were a lot of fun. As mentioned above the political situation was very well explained, but also in a very subtle way. It wasn’t just dumped in your lap with a “this is all you need to know”. It was eased into conversations and inner dialogue which made it very unobtrusive to the story itself. I would have liked this book a lot less if all this information was integrated into the novel in a more obvious way. (As I said, I’m not into politics and I would have put down the book pretty soon if that had felt more like the focus of the story)
Next up: the characters. In my opinion they were pretty great. As mentioned above I liked their dialogue a whole lot and this definitely made me love them. Though I have to say, when I found out Ursula was Lily’s full name I couldn’t help but think of the witch in “the little mermaid”. Thankfully this book didn’t use Ursula a whole lot because otherwise the story would have definitely looked different in my mind. She was a great character, despite her name. Jack (or John, depending on how you see him: as a regular guy or a senator) was a well-rounded character as well. They really seemed like people I’d like in real life as well. Their respectable best friends were ok. It’s not that I didn’t like them; it has more to do with the fact that we saw them so little throughout the book. They might not have a huge role to play, but I definitely would have liked to see more of them throughout the book.
The writing was very easy to read, I just flew through this book. That is definitely something I’m looking for in a romance novel. If the story doesn’t flow well, I’m very likely to put it down. Romance novels are just a lot nicer when you get sucked into the story right away and are continuously pulled into it. This book really had that. As a last thing I’d like to discuss the ending. I have to say that I’m not such a great fan of it. I was hoping it would have gone differently. I’m not saying that I don’t like where the story ended, but more that I don’t like how it got there. If that makes any sense at all.
In general I really liked this book but I was a little disappointed with the ending. It could have ended so many different ways, so many more exciting things could have happened. It’s a nice ending, but nothing special in my opinion.
The story was good; it was clearly a romance novel so the story storyline was very clear cut. But it was very well written and I especially enjoyed the conversations. They were just so much fun and felt so real. That was really one of my favourite parts in the book, hands down. Especially the conversations between Jack and Lily were a lot of fun. As mentioned above the political situation was very well explained, but also in a very subtle way. It wasn’t just dumped in your lap with a “this is all you need to know”. It was eased into conversations and inner dialogue which made it very unobtrusive to the story itself. I would have liked this book a lot less if all this information was integrated into the novel in a more obvious way. (As I said, I’m not into politics and I would have put down the book pretty soon if that had felt more like the focus of the story)
Next up: the characters. In my opinion they were pretty great. As mentioned above I liked their dialogue a whole lot and this definitely made me love them. Though I have to say, when I found out Ursula was Lily’s full name I couldn’t help but think of the witch in “the little mermaid”. Thankfully this book didn’t use Ursula a whole lot because otherwise the story would have definitely looked different in my mind. She was a great character, despite her name. Jack (or John, depending on how you see him: as a regular guy or a senator) was a well-rounded character as well. They really seemed like people I’d like in real life as well. Their respectable best friends were ok. It’s not that I didn’t like them; it has more to do with the fact that we saw them so little throughout the book. They might not have a huge role to play, but I definitely would have liked to see more of them throughout the book.
The writing was very easy to read, I just flew through this book. That is definitely something I’m looking for in a romance novel. If the story doesn’t flow well, I’m very likely to put it down. Romance novels are just a lot nicer when you get sucked into the story right away and are continuously pulled into it. This book really had that. As a last thing I’d like to discuss the ending. I have to say that I’m not such a great fan of it. I was hoping it would have gone differently. I’m not saying that I don’t like where the story ended, but more that I don’t like how it got there. If that makes any sense at all.
In general I really liked this book but I was a little disappointed with the ending. It could have ended so many different ways, so many more exciting things could have happened. It’s a nice ending, but nothing special in my opinion.
December 15, 2013
One thing I've both found and enjoyed in the Mary Whitney stories I've read is that while the necessary plot device of Tension exists it never does so in an insulting ( to the reader) way. I never recall getting frustrated with the characters / author about ridiculous plot contrivances and ridiculously immature / unrealistic lack of communication betwixt the characters. I've felt it and read in so many reviews how the reader wants to throw their Kindle and shake the characters.
But not here. Instead we have adult, professional, smart, educated characters who behave in an adult, professional, smart and educated manner. Yea!
Lily and Jack are both Democrats running in a primary for a vacated northern California congressional seat. Jack's a career politician and attorney while Lily is a part-time RN, county Supervisor, mother to a young son, and a war widow. They both have impeccable backgrounds and are ethically and politically compatible, not to mention athletically compatible (lots of going for runs, training for a triathlon). They are attracted to one another but recognize the futility of the situation. Due to the nature of local campaigning they spend a lot of time in the same towns, at the same venues, and a genuine friendship results.
It's a quiet, simple story, nothing fancy, nothing too detailed or intricate. I'm sure the author is a relatively naive writer and I'd like to see her work on adding layers and details to her stories. In her Acknowledgements she says something about being part of a writers group so hopefully they're stronger writers and can encourage her development. Because I like her characters, her stories, her smart writing, I'd really like to see her become a more detailed creator. Bet she can.
If you don't mind more graphically depicted sex then I'd recommend checking out the works of author Rosalind James. Her stories are also mature with smart, self-sufficient characters who don't dabble in the embarrassing world of immature lack of communication.
But not here. Instead we have adult, professional, smart, educated characters who behave in an adult, professional, smart and educated manner. Yea!
Lily and Jack are both Democrats running in a primary for a vacated northern California congressional seat. Jack's a career politician and attorney while Lily is a part-time RN, county Supervisor, mother to a young son, and a war widow. They both have impeccable backgrounds and are ethically and politically compatible, not to mention athletically compatible (lots of going for runs, training for a triathlon). They are attracted to one another but recognize the futility of the situation. Due to the nature of local campaigning they spend a lot of time in the same towns, at the same venues, and a genuine friendship results.
It's a quiet, simple story, nothing fancy, nothing too detailed or intricate. I'm sure the author is a relatively naive writer and I'd like to see her work on adding layers and details to her stories. In her Acknowledgements she says something about being part of a writers group so hopefully they're stronger writers and can encourage her development. Because I like her characters, her stories, her smart writing, I'd really like to see her become a more detailed creator. Bet she can.
If you don't mind more graphically depicted sex then I'd recommend checking out the works of author Rosalind James. Her stories are also mature with smart, self-sufficient characters who don't dabble in the embarrassing world of immature lack of communication.
September 7, 2015
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What I Loved: This was a cute quick read that I really enjoyed. Lily Robles an educated strong single mother is running for a seat in the US Congress only find herself falling for one of her rivals Jack Bengston. From the very start there wasn’t much I didn’t like about both of these characters. Jack, although young has the drive and expertise to have a full life in politics while at the same time is personable and lovable. Lily is a determined woman who has shit together, I love that she broke the mold of a typical inexperienced woman falling for a rich powerful man. She had a mind of her own, and knew what she wanted in life.
For me the way both of these characters were written made it easy for me to be captivated and stay that way. I liked the balance of passion and common sense between them because it made the story more realistic and grounded. I certainly liked the twists and turns the plot took as well because although the ending was predictable how they got there certainly wasn’t.
Not So Much: Although this was a really quick read, I felt like it kind of skimmed the surface of Lily and Jack’s relationship rather than delve into it when there should have been more details. They did get to spend a lot of time together and it was obvious the commitment they building for one another but at the same time those scenes were only touched upon when I would’ve liked to have seen more passion and emotion between the two. There were times I felt like they were both robotic rather than human and it would take me out of the story rather than sucking me in further. The beginning of the story had a lot of details and but the second half of the book didn’t really follow through the same when it came to their growing feelings for one another.
What I Loved: This was a cute quick read that I really enjoyed. Lily Robles an educated strong single mother is running for a seat in the US Congress only find herself falling for one of her rivals Jack Bengston. From the very start there wasn’t much I didn’t like about both of these characters. Jack, although young has the drive and expertise to have a full life in politics while at the same time is personable and lovable. Lily is a determined woman who has shit together, I love that she broke the mold of a typical inexperienced woman falling for a rich powerful man. She had a mind of her own, and knew what she wanted in life.
For me the way both of these characters were written made it easy for me to be captivated and stay that way. I liked the balance of passion and common sense between them because it made the story more realistic and grounded. I certainly liked the twists and turns the plot took as well because although the ending was predictable how they got there certainly wasn’t.
Not So Much: Although this was a really quick read, I felt like it kind of skimmed the surface of Lily and Jack’s relationship rather than delve into it when there should have been more details. They did get to spend a lot of time together and it was obvious the commitment they building for one another but at the same time those scenes were only touched upon when I would’ve liked to have seen more passion and emotion between the two. There were times I felt like they were both robotic rather than human and it would take me out of the story rather than sucking me in further. The beginning of the story had a lot of details and but the second half of the book didn’t really follow through the same when it came to their growing feelings for one another.
January 22, 2015
Predictable but Pleasant Political Read
If you are a reader looking for danger, suspense and scandal . . . look elsewhere. This book is a sweet romance filled with witty banter, flirtation and real romance. Its not a book you need to over think or isn't over sexualized, it's just a pleasant romance to read a cold day. Where to rivals might realize they have something in common that could be more than a race.
Though the plot and outcome may be cliche the characters are still cute and you still want them to have their HEA. Ursula Robles, or Lily, is a hard worker who as a single mom, a nurse and County Supervisor that decides to make a run for Congress. State Senator Jack Bengston is a privileged son of politics who's background groomed him for the Senate and higher. These two should be perfect rivals but turnout to be a perfect match instead, they can't help being friends and perhaps more, if the politics weren't between them. Ultimately it will come down to love or the Congressional seat?
Overall the book is a good read that with a flowing plot that keeps you in Lily and Jack's relationship till the end. A reader may how how it might end but may still be a bit surprised at some of their decisions and how they choose to go about their relationship. It's a sweet romance were normally rivals in politics are known for being vicious and backstabbing, but here Lily and Jack are seen finding their equal and possible love, but question it's timing. So pick this book if your looking for a pleasant political read that will leave you happy in the end.
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If you are a reader looking for danger, suspense and scandal . . . look elsewhere. This book is a sweet romance filled with witty banter, flirtation and real romance. Its not a book you need to over think or isn't over sexualized, it's just a pleasant romance to read a cold day. Where to rivals might realize they have something in common that could be more than a race.
Though the plot and outcome may be cliche the characters are still cute and you still want them to have their HEA. Ursula Robles, or Lily, is a hard worker who as a single mom, a nurse and County Supervisor that decides to make a run for Congress. State Senator Jack Bengston is a privileged son of politics who's background groomed him for the Senate and higher. These two should be perfect rivals but turnout to be a perfect match instead, they can't help being friends and perhaps more, if the politics weren't between them. Ultimately it will come down to love or the Congressional seat?
Overall the book is a good read that with a flowing plot that keeps you in Lily and Jack's relationship till the end. A reader may how how it might end but may still be a bit surprised at some of their decisions and how they choose to go about their relationship. It's a sweet romance were normally rivals in politics are known for being vicious and backstabbing, but here Lily and Jack are seen finding their equal and possible love, but question it's timing. So pick this book if your looking for a pleasant political read that will leave you happy in the end.
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July 27, 2013
Wow, a politics and romance combination, that's a first for me.
I got this for free on Amazon Kindle. But it wasn't a disappointment, although most of the time I don't get how they run for congress, I think it's interesting concept of competition and tension.
The local state senator, now running for Congress, John "Jack" Bengston suddenly met supervisor Ursula "Lily" Robles who also runs for the same position. The first time they met Jack immediately got attracted to this smart and fun girl. Unfortunately being a co-competitor isn't the right time to put any attraction between the two. They tried to stay away but, a guy like Jack, wasn't able to resist this girl.
But avoiding each other isn't the best way to handle themselves, and so they agreed to less torment each other and have a mutual relationship as friends.
But they can't leave it just like that, because being together is one of the best thing that ever happened since they started seeing each other.
I like them, they both acted as mature adults and really work out their relationship despite the circumstance they are in. This is a rare book who didn't make me cringe with the characters.
It was really interesting since I think this is a first time I encountered this concept. But I don't totally love it, since I think there's just lacking something but overall, I liked it!
I got this for free on Amazon Kindle. But it wasn't a disappointment, although most of the time I don't get how they run for congress, I think it's interesting concept of competition and tension.
The local state senator, now running for Congress, John "Jack" Bengston suddenly met supervisor Ursula "Lily" Robles who also runs for the same position. The first time they met Jack immediately got attracted to this smart and fun girl. Unfortunately being a co-competitor isn't the right time to put any attraction between the two. They tried to stay away but, a guy like Jack, wasn't able to resist this girl.
“We should be friends.”
Her lips curled into a small smile, and she extended her hand. “Friends.”
But avoiding each other isn't the best way to handle themselves, and so they agreed to less torment each other and have a mutual relationship as friends.
But they can't leave it just like that, because being together is one of the best thing that ever happened since they started seeing each other.
I like them, they both acted as mature adults and really work out their relationship despite the circumstance they are in. This is a rare book who didn't make me cringe with the characters.
It was really interesting since I think this is a first time I encountered this concept. But I don't totally love it, since I think there's just lacking something but overall, I liked it!
November 11, 2013
More that Rivals is a sweet story about two political candidates that find friendship and love after a random meeting at a coffee shop. Sonoma County Supervisor Ursula "Lily" Robles meets California State Senator John "Jack" Bengston after one of her nightime runs. Neither Lily nor Jack recognize the other at first, until Jack removes his hat.
Lily is a widow with a seven year old son who lives with her parents. While Lily is the only woman up against more seasoned and experienced men, she has a strong head on her shoulders and appears to have some great ideas that would benefit her district. While Jack understands that Lily is his opponent, he can't seem to stay away from her. He chases her relentlessly until Lily has no choice but to give in. She can't deny that there is something between the two of them and that it could be so much more.
There wasn't a whole lot of "romance" per se because they did have to spend the entire story keeping their relationship under wraps. It would not have looked good for either candidate if that information was distributed to the public. And because of that, their meetings were few and far between and lasted anywhere from minutes to a few hours together.
There isn't a whole lot of angst and struggle found in this book. While they hide their relationship, it is actually a very light and happy read. Look forward to reading more from Mary Whitney.
Lily is a widow with a seven year old son who lives with her parents. While Lily is the only woman up against more seasoned and experienced men, she has a strong head on her shoulders and appears to have some great ideas that would benefit her district. While Jack understands that Lily is his opponent, he can't seem to stay away from her. He chases her relentlessly until Lily has no choice but to give in. She can't deny that there is something between the two of them and that it could be so much more.
There wasn't a whole lot of "romance" per se because they did have to spend the entire story keeping their relationship under wraps. It would not have looked good for either candidate if that information was distributed to the public. And because of that, their meetings were few and far between and lasted anywhere from minutes to a few hours together.
There isn't a whole lot of angst and struggle found in this book. While they hide their relationship, it is actually a very light and happy read. Look forward to reading more from Mary Whitney.
July 1, 2013
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So this is the 2nd political romance I've read so far this year. I'm starting to think I'm falling for them. The political side provides a different realm of depth that we see in the characters that in other novels has to rest solely in the hands of open communication. Lily's character and wit makes it hard for you not to love her. She's devoted and focused with set goals and putting her son (Luke) first. She's also skeptical and careful which again with the politics involved its understanding that she questions motives. Jack, oh Jack! So he's one of the other runners in this race to Congress but he's also racing for something else. Jack's also focused and driven while his personality is somewhat more cocky, but in a healthy & seductive way. The sexual tension can be cut with a knife and more descriptive scenes in that department would've been nice, but how they were flew well with the rest of the story. I love the family roles in this book and the support and morals/values that both Lily and Jack's parents put forth. Give it a try!
So this is the 2nd political romance I've read so far this year. I'm starting to think I'm falling for them. The political side provides a different realm of depth that we see in the characters that in other novels has to rest solely in the hands of open communication. Lily's character and wit makes it hard for you not to love her. She's devoted and focused with set goals and putting her son (Luke) first. She's also skeptical and careful which again with the politics involved its understanding that she questions motives. Jack, oh Jack! So he's one of the other runners in this race to Congress but he's also racing for something else. Jack's also focused and driven while his personality is somewhat more cocky, but in a healthy & seductive way. The sexual tension can be cut with a knife and more descriptive scenes in that department would've been nice, but how they were flew well with the rest of the story. I love the family roles in this book and the support and morals/values that both Lily and Jack's parents put forth. Give it a try!
July 10, 2013
MORE THAN RIVALS was such a cute read. Lily and Jack meet one during one late night at a coffee shop and the chemistry is strong. So strong Jack can’t stop thinking about her. But with Lily’s announcement of her decision to run for Congress, against Jack, things get complicated. Is Jack sweet-talking her simply to keep her from stating anything negative about her opponent? But when neither or them can deny their attraction any longer, what happens to their campaigns.
Overall, I thought the book was great! I wanted a little bit more development to fully connect with the characters but it definitely kept me intrigued and turning the page. I loved the entire plot idea of opposing candidates who must decide whether or not to put their love first or their career. Very fascinating. Anyone looking for something slightly different than what’s being written lately but still wanting a great romance story, MORE THAN RIVALS is just for you!
I received an ARC in exchange for a honest review.
Overall, I thought the book was great! I wanted a little bit more development to fully connect with the characters but it definitely kept me intrigued and turning the page. I loved the entire plot idea of opposing candidates who must decide whether or not to put their love first or their career. Very fascinating. Anyone looking for something slightly different than what’s being written lately but still wanting a great romance story, MORE THAN RIVALS is just for you!
I received an ARC in exchange for a honest review.
October 29, 2013
A pleasant story about Lily, a Mexican-American woman, a single mother and nurse to boot, running for Congress who meets one of her opponents in a coffee shop. Jack is pretty much Lily's opposite, a white, wealthy, single male from a political family.
At first neither of them recognises the other and they are instantly attracted to each other. When Jack takes off his cap, Lily recognises him and makes her excuses.
The novel tells how they fight their growing attraction whilst campaigning across California.
I felt that the 'surprise' was fairly obvious ---- I liked the resolution, although I felt it was maybe a little too good to be true.
If anything I felt the characters had too little depth. They were both just sooo nice all the time, there was no contrast, no fits of temper, no irritation, no light and shade.
Recommended for those who like feel-good angst-less romance - posibly with a political bent.
At first neither of them recognises the other and they are instantly attracted to each other. When Jack takes off his cap, Lily recognises him and makes her excuses.
The novel tells how they fight their growing attraction whilst campaigning across California.
I felt that the 'surprise' was fairly obvious ---- I liked the resolution, although I felt it was maybe a little too good to be true.
If anything I felt the characters had too little depth. They were both just sooo nice all the time, there was no contrast, no fits of temper, no irritation, no light and shade.
Recommended for those who like feel-good angst-less romance - posibly with a political bent.
April 19, 2013
This is another book that I probably won't review on my blog, but thought I'd share a few thoughts here. I liked the story -- it was a quick and easy read and it was easy to like both Lily and Jack and to want to keep turning the pages as their relationship grew over time. The premise of political rivals was different for me, though I think it would have been better had the author not been as specific with the politics. However, I suppose that would have presented a challenge since the story was set in the U.S., so it would be difficult to keep things vague. Politics aside -- and really, it wasn't THAT overbearing -- this story of political rivals falling in love made for a fun read, light read, if a bit predictable in the outcome. It's not an epic story, but certainly worth a read if you're looking for a romance that's on the shorter side; it was a good one-and-done book for me.
June 12, 2013
More Than Rivals by Mary Whitney was a quick, lighthearted read that I think for the most part readers will enjoy. The synopsis is what first drew me to this story. It sounded like a fun read. I found Whitney's characters likeable and witty at times, but overall I felt like the spark in the story was missing.
As I was reading through the interactions between Jack and Lily I found myself drawn out of the story. I saw the chemistry between them written out on the page, but I didn't really feel it. I did enjoy getting to know each individual character, and their stories, and while I didn't find myself swooning over the romance between Jack and Lily - they were well written characters.
Overall, I think More Than Rivals is a good story, but I guess I just wanted a little more steam. ;)
As I was reading through the interactions between Jack and Lily I found myself drawn out of the story. I saw the chemistry between them written out on the page, but I didn't really feel it. I did enjoy getting to know each individual character, and their stories, and while I didn't find myself swooning over the romance between Jack and Lily - they were well written characters.
Overall, I think More Than Rivals is a good story, but I guess I just wanted a little more steam. ;)
November 1, 2013
I really enjoyed "More than Rivals". I got it as a Free book from Amazon and decided to dive into it today. I read a lot of romance novels and the premise of this one was different than most I read, and I was pleased. I really liked how Lily and Jack's relationship developed slowly over time and they got to know each other. I really like how Jack's relationship with Luke started separate from Lily, when he didn't know who he was. That showed a sweet side of his personality. I appreciated how both of them showed their struggles with how to balance their relationship and their campaigns - I think that can be true in any situation with people in a relationship work together in any capacity. I would have liked just a "bit" more closure at the end but all in all, I really enjoyed this book.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
October 31, 2013
Jack, a State Senator and Ursula (Lily) the greenhorn are both running for Congress. As you can imagine this causes a number of problems to their budding romance, particularly when a popular candidate most touted to win suddenly drops out. Not only does he drop out but he fully endorses Jack’s candidacy which sets him in direct opposition to Lily. As far as Jack’s concerned it’s the stuff of nightmares. As political rivals he knows it will get down and ugly. Will their new relationship survive the fallout? Can he, will he take the risk?
Indeed a sweet romance. Having just gone through local body elections I didn’t think I was in the mood for a political romance, romantic suspense is more to my liking but I enjoyed it.
March 21, 2013
This is an enjoyable and romantic read set against a political backdrop. Lily and Jack first met at a coffee shop and they were instantly attracted to each other but Lily declined his advances and did not give him her contact information. Later, Jack realized that they were both running for Congress and were political rivals. I liked that they first became friends/jogging buddies, gradually realized their strong feelings for each other and then engaged in a "cautious" relationship. I also liked that they discussed and reasoned out their options in a pragmatic manner making the story realistic.
March 13, 2013
More Than Rivals was an excellent read.
I was drawn into the story from the beginning and I found I couldn't put it down.
The chemistry between Lily and Jack is instant. The attraction between them is so strong that even being political rivals it doesn't stop them from wanting each other.
The author Mary Whitney has a brilliant way with words, she draws you into their world and you can't help but love both Jack and Lily.
This was a beautiful love story and I wouldn't hesitate to recommend it.
5 stars
I was drawn into the story from the beginning and I found I couldn't put it down.
The chemistry between Lily and Jack is instant. The attraction between them is so strong that even being political rivals it doesn't stop them from wanting each other.
The author Mary Whitney has a brilliant way with words, she draws you into their world and you can't help but love both Jack and Lily.
This was a beautiful love story and I wouldn't hesitate to recommend it.
5 stars
March 16, 2013
I stayed up all night reading this story. I just couldn't put the book down. This wasn't really a surprise. That always happens when I read a story by Mary Whitney. That's why I waited until Friday night to start reading. I just loved Jack and Lily. Hopefully, there will be a sequel because I would love to read more about these characters.
The only negative thing for me was the name Ursula. While I know it is a perfectly respectable name, every time I read it, I thought of Disney's: The Little Mermaid.
The only negative thing for me was the name Ursula. While I know it is a perfectly respectable name, every time I read it, I thought of Disney's: The Little Mermaid.
May 2, 2013
More of a romance than political. Jack and Lily find themselves attracted to each other. Only problem is - they're running as opponents for the same political seat. People closest to them are guessing at the attraction and know it wouldn't be wise for them to become involved. Just how they pull this off - ha ha - might be considered a mystery.
But seriously, this is a romance, not political. It's not as bad as some of the romances but still a romance. Eh maybe 3.5 stars cos it's not as sappy as some.
But seriously, this is a romance, not political. It's not as bad as some of the romances but still a romance. Eh maybe 3.5 stars cos it's not as sappy as some.
May 8, 2014
This was one of those random books that show up in your recommendations feed, it looked good and the cover was catching so I decided to give it a try. I wasn't disappointed. It had a good storyline and believable characters, it's a clean romance but still shows the love the characters have for each other. The only reason I gave it a four star is because at times the writing was somewhat jumpy and kind of leapt ahead quickly. It sort of made you feel like you missed something. Besides that it's a truly special story.
May 30, 2013
1.5 pale stars
- Very poor editing. Near the end I was quite astonished to read such an obvious error
- Very simplistic
- Didn't convince me
- Poor chemistry
- Underdeveloped characters
- Boring
- Very poor editing. Near the end I was quite astonished to read such an obvious error
- Very simplistic
- Didn't convince me
- Poor chemistry
- Underdeveloped characters
- Boring
January 3, 2014
Quick read, read while Cassidy was working, finished it in 3 hours. This was a free book from Amazon and this is the kind of free book I love. It's well written and a very feel good read. I enjoyed it very much, so much so that I'd pay for it :)
Well written, good dialogue, nothing glaringly wrong, or haphazardly written, just a feel good all around story with a great ending.
I'm going to see if Ms. Whitney writes anything else I can read :)
Well written, good dialogue, nothing glaringly wrong, or haphazardly written, just a feel good all around story with a great ending.
I'm going to see if Ms. Whitney writes anything else I can read :)
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