The Mouth

by Lux Zakari

No one is prepared for the sexual awakening and emotional fallout that results when a notorious loser shows up a frat party and is forced to play a nostalgic game of Seven Minutes in Heaven. Sex and satire converge and lines between social standings are blurred then destroyed in this caustic erotic short.

18 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 15, 2013

About the author

Lux Zakari is the author of the novels Coercion, Finale, Secretly More, Wild Arcana, and Single, Cool, and Fine: How to Get Laid as an Ex-Teen Idol. Her work has been published in anthologies (Best Bondage Erotica, Best Women's Erotica) and on websites (For The Girls, The Erotic Woman). Her short stories, Across the Way and The Mouth, are available as free downloads on Goodreads.

For details, visit www.luxzakari.com.

Reviews

[Nerine Dorman]

Two words best describe this story: “short” and “wicked”. Lux Zakari writes intelligent erotic romance that will appeal to those who enjoy stories that are sexually charged yet have a little more bite to them than the average romance fare.

The premise for The Mouth is simple: A group of young women begin to obsess about a socially uncool guy who surprises them with an unexpected talent – what he can do with his mouth – but I’ll leave the rest up to your imagination.

The underlying theme follows on how we tend to objectify the opposite sex, but for me to say more will ruin this story.

Zakari is in top form with this piece, which totally made me sit back with a stupid grin on my face by the time I was done. Nicely done, lady. Very nicely done.

PS: If you’re looking for a sample of Zakari’s fiction then this one’s ideal – you can read it in less than 10 minutes.

[Arlyn]

√Well, cetainly not what I was expecting. Revenge of the ugly duckling! Loved it. Raw, fast, and to the point. Confirms 3 thing I already knew: 1. Things aren't always what they seem. 2. There is beauty in everyone. 3. The greatest pleasure can be found in the most unexpected places.