Okay, I definitely expected more from this book.
1. Where was the mystery? I thought it would be some intense plot filled with true villains who wanted to overthrow the government, or a group of outsiders who want to take revenge against the general by kidnapping his kids. I have this thing called an imagination and I thought, judging from House of the Scorpions, Farmer would be throwing some twists and turns here.
2. As much as I liked the adventure, it was just too much. They encounter scenario one, escape, bump into scenario two, escape, learn a few life lessons or so, and step into scenario three without a moment’s hesitation. Granted, the transitions were good, but some of the events that took place simply didn’t need to happen. It took time away from the core of the novel.
3. The children’s adventure clashed with the detective’s storyline so much that I failed to see the connection except the highly stressed point that they were supposed to find the children. They only interact at the very end. It’s like reading two very messy stories intertwined into one where the plot is the same: they ALMOST run into each other, but the children are just one step further away. This cycle annoyed me to no end. I feel cheated somehow. I picked up this book with the idea that Ear, Eye, and Arm could do wonders with their messed up genetics, but the story didn’t even stress their powers. It was obvious who Ear and Eye was, but I thought, initially, Arm had super strength or could stretch. It was only halfway through the book that I finally understood that Arm’s powers were a mix of empathy and mind reading.
4. I really wanted a more in depth description about what had changed in the future: the gadgets, the genetically altered monkey, the robots, and the idea of “utopia” AKA a world without diseases and gang activity.
Nonetheless, I still liked it.