Happy Birthday, Bitch

by Gemini

Through hiring a private detective, Ashley Monroe discovers that her boyfriend, Carlos, has a little something on the side. She’s severely troubled by his relationship with a reckless side-hoe who refuses to let him go, but that’s the least of Ashley’s troubles. On her thirtieth birthday, she finds herself in a situation that no young woman in the world would want to be in. A gun is in her hand, several people lay dead and there ain’t no other way to put it, other than to say that this birthday bash is over! Ashley could never see herself causing harm to anyone, but on the other hand, a scorned woman may have those who betrayed her having some regrets. Real regrets that Ashley and the other woman may have, when the truth finally comes to the light.

52 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 14, 2013

Reviews

[Karma Jones · Rating 4 out of 5]

The only reason I gave 4 instead of 5 stars is because I would have liked to known more about Carlos. Was there a reason why he was so abusive towards women ( not that it would give him an excuse). The book explained the girls growing up with abuse but didnt really say much about Carlos's background.

This was the reading selection for April i the "Literary Drama" bookclub.

[Barbara · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book was a good short story about abuse, betrayal and revenge. The story is fast paced and drama filled.
One of the best short stories I read

[sherry davis · Rating 1 out of 5]

No a good book

I did not like the book and I would not recommend unlike the first book that I read the carter boy's and girls I really liked and I have recommended to several people.

[Tonya Johnson · Rating 5 out of 5]

WOW!!

I didn't expect all that!!! I enjoyed every bit of it though!! I just don't understand how some women can let a man dog her out and think it's love.

[Blkvelvet · Rating 5 out of 5]

FANTASTIC!!!

Everyone in Ashley's life treated her like crap... her Mother, sister and even her boyfriend. She tried to keep a positive outlook on life but the common denominator remained the same.... the people in her life were A-holes.

On or near here birthday, Ashley decided to give herself the ULTIMATE gift by ending the pain that consumed her life. With that came sweet revenge, one self imposed, the other a "freebie". It doesn't get sweeter than that.

"Do Unto Others As You Would Have Them Do Unto You".

GREAT JOB GEMINI!

[Mirrlees · Rating 4 out of 5]

Everything he deserved I swear I loved it. Carlos was definitely short of a man he was abusive and stupid in my eyes. Growing up as sisters Ashley and Rachel had their share of problems but no love lost. Rachel seemed sincere but was far from it. To get the full blown story see what Gemini has to offer. Good read.

[Kellie White · Rating 2 out of 5]

I can't decide whether to give this 1 or 2 stars.
It was ok. It's a short story, only like an hour's read, but it still took me a few days to finish.
The writing wasn't that good. And it grossed me out a bit!

[*~CONN!3~ · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5 stars...this story held my attention, the flow was smooth, the ending IMO I didnt care for.

[SerenaBeReading · Rating 3 out of 5]

WTF did I just read?*fetal position*

[Mzamtvip · Rating 4 out of 5]

Crazy - crazy - crazy! A actions of a scorned woman can't get no crazier than this! It was a quick and very fun read...............

[Denise · Rating 3 out of 5]

This book took you on a crazy ride. It really spoke to what a woman who has been wronged is capable of. Wow!

[Therese · Rating 4 out of 5]

Wow, that chick was crazy.....lol

[Elizabeth M Chisholm · Rating 5 out of 5]

Astounding

a great read, takes you on a ride of twists and turns!!! definitely recommend this to everyone, read this book

[Brooklyn Donne · Rating 5 out of 5]

amusing. hahah. carlos was an ass.

[ConSonia · Rating 5 out of 5]

A must read to everyone :)