Chocolate Brown

Chocolate Brown #1

by Coco Mixon

Chocolate loved her life as an only child, she never imagined having siblings. Growing up with the perfect parents was a plus. As lies and betrayals are revealed she learns life is not always sweet. Join Chocolate and her best friend Charmaine as they stumble upon the Brown’s family secrets.

91 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 14, 2013

About the author

Coco Mixon was born in Compton, California. She grew up in multiple cities in Los Angeles County mainly Lynwood, Compton, and North Long Beach. Her passion for writing came in the third grade.

Reviews

[LaTanya Garry · Rating 5 out of 5]

INTERESTING

Chocolate life took a interesting turn when she realized her father was hiding multiple secrets. She also shoulder have kept a close eye on her best friend Charmaine because she seemed sneaky and come to find out. Charmaine is a whole hoe.

[Cherell Evans · Rating 5 out of 5]

Mannnnnnn

This is crazy! Where and how did all these kids come from? Them so-called girlfriends and boyfriends ain't with a dang! My goodness! So much drama. Let's see what's gonna happen next.

[V Phillips · Rating 4 out of 5]

Well, I didn’t see that ending coming! Charmine was something else!

[Shanica Jointer · Rating 5 out of 5]

First time

I loved everything about this book. It brought me back to my high school days. Can't wait to read more from this author

[Papaya · Rating 5 out of 5]

This book was a page-turner from the beginning to the end. It was about a man name Charles who was living a double life. He was married and also had a girlfriend that had his child (Carlos).

One day all the secrets came out when he showed up at his son house and his daughter (chocolate) was there and heard his say dad. Yeah you could imagine what happen.

This book had a very good story line and it was well written. The emotions you could feel.

Did the siblings hate each other? 1-click to find out. I recommend everyone to read this book. You will enjoy it. I’m waiting for part 2.

[Athena · Rating 2 out of 5]

This book had the potential of being good but it just didn't make the cut for me. The editing was bad and the author kept switching from past to present tense. I also felt like I would throw my kindle if Carlos would've used the word 'sister' one more time. There were times when I didn't know which character was speaking. I didn't feel anything for the characters and had to force myself to complete the book even though it was short. The story jumped around and was not very well developed. There were twists and turns but since the story wasn't developed enough they didn't even matter. I'm curious to know what's going to happen with the characters, but not enough to buy part 2.

[Mirrlees · Rating 5 out of 5]

So Mr. Charles Brown was the baby making machine. Lord what is this world coming too. Carlos and Choc was close and I loved that about their relationship will they have room for another?At this point I am not sure if I am upset with Mr. Brown or not will there be more children coming out the wood works. His family stood at his side even at the end but mystery still holds till the end. What will this new character bring to the story. How is this nurse involved? awe well maybe there will be a part 2 cause I sure do have some unanswered questions.

[*~CONN!3~ · Rating 3 out of 5]

This story started 2 pop when Charles the father passed and Pepper showed up. Also another child out of wedlock Charles never spoke of. To top that off Char and Larry got caught by the Brown siblings of their affair. 3 stars, this was just an okay read for me.

[Rebecca · Rating 4 out of 5]

This was a good book. Chocolate was a character who you can't help but like. Same with Carlos even with his temper. Charmaine is a trip but still Chocolate's best friend. All around good read. Can't wait for the next one.

[Deidre · Rating 5 out of 5]

short book but still took 2 days I really liked this story line. The ending left me speechless who would've. thought that would happen. what other skeletons can be reviled in this too full closet onto part 2!

[Syn Challenger · Rating 3 out of 5]

I honestly loved the story line. It is definitely a page turner, but it loses momentum sometimes. I enjoyed the characters, but thought they could have been developed a little bit more. Overall a good read though.

[Ms. T. Nicole · Rating 5 out of 5]

Oh hell naw

charmaine is a straight up hoe. how you gonna do that to your best friend? where they do that at? I love the brother sister relationship, now this man got another damn kid!!! how many more gonna come up? poppa was a rolling stone huh ?

[Antoinette · Rating 5 out of 5]

Awesome read Coco Mixon!!!!

Coco u are the truth with this book I just couldn't put this book down until I got thru.I just want u to know I love your work. The Brown family are some Cray Cray people that I love reading about.

[Tanielle · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was cute. I hated how it went in and out of first person. There were times when something was happening but told in past tense as well. Kind of frustrating but overall the story was cute. I'd read the next one since these seem short and they're free.

[Reese · Rating 3 out of 5]

This was just an OK read to me. I thought it was gonna b pack with drama after everybody found out about each other. but I like the fact that choc and Carlos became close.

[Slim · Rating 4 out of 5]

GIRLLLLLLL...imma kick your a$$!!!!!!

Where is part 2?????


Good read!!?

[Therese · Rating 4 out of 5]

Part 2 must come soon

[Denise · Rating 5 out of 5]

I recommend this book. great. book!!!!! I couldn't put it down
all I can say. is these brown sibilings are a hot mess. there dad Charles lived a double life. that. really had an impact on everyone.

[Brittney G · Rating 4 out of 5]

Chocolate Brown was a good short story. I loved the twist and turns. Mr. Brown sure is full of all types of secrets. I can only imagine what can happen next!!!

[Valarie · Rating 5 out of 5]

Hooked

This is a good book. You have to read this. I don't care if you are not a reader you will be after you read this book