Liam Davies
5/21/2016
5th Period
Acc. English (Ms. Prilutski)
Imagine that you grew up in a super unwealthy family. Your father is an alcoholic and abuses you and your family whenever he drinks. You soon find yourself going to prison for the murder of your neighbor’s son, when a prank went wrong (you poking holes into a kayak and the son getting into it, who couldn’t swim and drowned and died). One day, you decide that you have had enough with your father beating on your defenseless family at home, so you decide to escape and go home to protect your loved family from your father… Aren’t you dying to hear what happens next? I certainly was when I read this from the first chapter of the outstanding book The Journey Back by Priscilla Cummings. Meet Michael (“Digger” our main character’s nickname) Griswald, the main character of this story who actually had to live this nightmare… I believe that you should read this extraordinary book for two main reasons. Firstly, this book is such a touching book. I can't tell you the number of prayers that I have said at night for Digger (the main character of this book) because the author uses him to melt the heart of the reader and make you really feel such strong emotions for him. Finally, I believe that you should read this book because it really shows how much a person can change in life, even when all hope seems lost.
To start off, one reason why The Journey Back by Priscilla Cummings is such an outstanding book is because it is such a touching book. In chapter 2, page 16, paragraph 2, Digger remembers, “Whenever my mother would come to visit me at the prison, all I could see was that cheap makeup caked on her face. It wasn’t even the same color as her skin and I knew that she was covering up another bruise from my father hitting her when he was drunk, which meant that it was still going on.” This quote really makes you feel really bad for Digger and all of the stuff that he has to worry about with his family’s safety because he can’t trust his father to not hurt them when he is drunk, which is quite often because he is an alcoholic. The use of the words, “It wasn’t even the same color as her skin” really shows how much Digger’s family needs his help at home to stay safe. example, why I believe that this book is so emotional, is because, on page 65-66 on the bottom of the page, the author narrates, “It was a dog. A little gray dog lying on its side. It was stuck somehow and its tail was flapping up and down.” He then continues and says, “When he heard me, the little dog whined and his tail started thumping like crazy. I crept closer and saw a clothesline had been wrapped around its neck and that line was tied to a small tree which was caught up in the rocks. The dog was drenched to the bone, his tongue was hanging out, and his head could barely move on account of the rope being tied so tight.” This quote truly spoke to me and pulled on my heart-strings because I love dogs so much and could never imagine seeing something like that happen to my dog, let alone any other dog. The use of the words, “When he heard me, the little dog whined and started thumping his tail like crazy” really shows that this dog that Digger has just found really needs someone in his life that won’t betray him like his last owner must have. (Because he was tied to a tree.)
Finally, The Journey Back by Priscilla Cummings is such an exquisite book because it shows you that a person can really change, even when all hope seems lost. On page 61, in paragraph 4, when Digger states, “The answer is no. The answer is hell no. I did not ever stop to think about whether what I was doing was right or wrong and what the consequences might be - the if/ then thinking stuff. This quote really shows how much the author wants the reader to think that Digger will never change his ways. The of the words, “I did not ever stop to think.” really show how Digger is trying to change because he is later realizing that after just a couple of moments of thinking that hell no it doesn’t bother me the slightest bit. To then realizing I never stopped to think about whether or not what he was doing was right or wrong when what he was doing was actually really wrong. Lastly, on the first page of chapter 26, Digger tells Mr. R, “‘I’ve learned a lot more than you think.’ I said. ‘I made a mistake taking off like that. I’m sorry I put you through so much trouble.’” This is turning point of Digger’s entire outlook on life. This quote really shows that from not giving a poop about how he made others feel at the beginning of the story, he has changed into really caring about how he treats others and how he makes them feel. The use of the words, “I made a mistake” really shows how Digger taking his time to think before he speaks and before he acts, because of this, Digger has become a completely different person.
In conclusion, Priscilla Cummings has written an amazing book because she writes with her emotions on her sleeve, and she really shows you that anyone can change, even when all hope seems lost. At the end of the day, Digger inspires me and if I had to live in his shoes, I would have done exactly what he had done. (At the end of the book of course!) If you want to know what he does at the end, I guess that you will just have to read it to find out!