I wanted to see sneak in at least one Fear Street read this month, maybe I can do more. Hopefully I'll do more this year now that I have more room, I want to make a bit more of a dent in these and vet more for review. Anyway, this one is review worthy, a fair amount to pick a part. Generally, I liked it, it was good, bordering on fine. It has enough things to pick on, like how it has plenty of padding the word count and too many fake outs. The ending is abrupt and doesn't quite cap off everything.
But it also has some of the more blatant class commentary I've seen in these. Johanna wants to fit into this rich popular crowd of kids who are used to getting what they want and rage when a teacher dares to not give them everything for once. We get things like that as well as little bits that show off the contrast of their live and Johanna's, as she is rather poor. It's not exactly Parasite or anything but there is enough to it, and it is generally done well., The situation of her being dared to kill the teacher is interesting and there is setup and payoff, even if it's a bit weird.
It has pacing issues and a fair bit you can poke at, but the general feel and plot is reasonably solid, being boosted by the commentary. Johnana is a complicated protagonist but she's mostly alright. The writing is on the weaker end but there's a few vocab words in it. Plus, a dry sense of humor that actually got me a few times.
So it has kinks, but for now i liked it. It could go up or down when I review, but overall it works fine for what it is. It's very Stine-y and works as a fun quick read, mostly. Smarter than average in the very least.
CONTINUITY WATCH: Mention of the local coffee shop The Corner, Reva Dalby appears at the party, Carter Phillips of the Cheater is mentioned, Deena of Wrong Number gets mentioned of course, and Suki Thomas appears at one point.
REDHEAD WATCH: Margret, Zack, unnamed girl at the party, Reva.
NUMBER OF FAKEOUTS: 8
POP CULTURE/REAL LIFE WATCH Alexander Hamilton, Abe Lincoln, Clint Eastwood, Charles Lindbergh, some car brands, Ralph Lauren, Coke, 7 11, Hulk, Hamlet,
STINE-ISMS: "riot", silvery, dryly, sour, swallowed hard,
TOXIC RELATIONSHIPS: Johanna and Dennis
BODY SHAMING?: Yes.
ANIMAL DEATH WATCH: Nope, thank god.
ACAB WATCH: The police are called about the teacher’s car being vandalized but don’t do anything because it’s just a prank bro even though it was a rather malicious prank.
No idea what's next outside of this weeks camp book, see ya then.